Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and slightly more detailed: start with a clear topic sentence, then give a reason or brief example. Avoid listing brand-like names without context and keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I usually wear crop tops because I find them comfortable and cool in hot weather. For example, I often choose a simple halter or a tea-style crop top when I go out with friends because they’re light and stylish.

제안: Avoid repetition and use a clear structure: state preference, give one specific reason, and use a linking phrase. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and correct sentence fragments.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because the Philippines is humid. For instance, I often wear lightweight tops and loose pants so I feel comfortable and can move easily.

제안: Answer directly then support with a concise reason. Correct grammar (use full sentences) and avoid redundant words. Use linking word like 'because' once and one clear reason.

예시: Not really — I prefer sleeveless crop tops because the weather here is very humid and hot, so they help me stay cool.

제안: Structure your answer with a topic sentence and a clear contrast using a linking word like 'but' or 'however'. Be specific about what you do for special occasions versus normal days and avoid awkward phrasing.

예시: Yes, I do spend time choosing clothes for special occasions because I want to look appropriate. However, on a normal day I just grab a T-shirt and shorts from the bottom of my wardrobe.

제안: Give a direct answer and then add a brief reason with a linking word. Avoid long lists; be specific about a typical weekday and weekend outfit.

예시: No, I usually wear the same styles on both weekdays and weekends because I don’t have many activities. Typically I wear crop tops with pants or a casual dress since they are convenient.

제안: Be concise and use clearer vocabulary: state preference then explain briefly why. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and compare colors correctly.

예시: I don’t have a single favourite, but I often wear black, white, or nude tones because they suit my skin and look flattering compared to very bright colors.

× I like crop tops such as peppoon halter top and tea top.

✓ I like crop tops such as peplum halter tops and tea tops.

The original uses singular nouns after a plural subject 'crop tops' and misspells 'peplum'. Use plural forms to match 'crop tops' and correct the item names. Also 'peplum' is the correct term. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches the subject and check spelling of clothing items.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes since here in the Philippines the weather is humid and instead of wearing smart clothes, I'm wearing comfortable and casual clothes. Makes me feel comfortable and convenient.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes since the weather here in the Philippines is humid, so instead of wearing smart clothes I wear comfortable, casual ones. It makes me feel comfortable and relaxed.

Problems: repeated phrases and sentence fragments. Use consistent verb forms: 'the weather... is humid' (present simple) and 'I wear' instead of 'I'm wearing' for habitual preference. The fragment 'Makes me feel...' needs a subject 'It'. Replace 'convenient' with 'relaxed' or 'comfortable' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use present simple for general facts and habits, and ensure each sentence has a subject and verb.

× No, I prefer wearing crop tops where it now has sleeveless because since here in the Philippines is a humid weather, sometimes a very sunny which makes me sweat.

✓ No, I prefer wearing crop tops that are sleeveless because here in the Philippines the weather is humid and sometimes very sunny, which makes me sweat.

Errors include incorrect relative pronoun 'where' used for clothing (use 'that' or 'which'), awkward 'it now has sleeveless' (use 'are sleeveless'), and article misuse 'is a humid weather' (should be 'the weather is humid' or 'humid weather'). Also combine clauses with commas and 'which'. Suggestion: use 'that/which' for referring to items, use correct noun phrases for weather, and keep verb agreement (crop tops are sleeveless).

× Yes, I spend a lot of time, especially if there is an occasion, but in a normal day, I'd rather not spend my time in choosing clothes where I can only choose the T-shirts and shorts in the bottom of the cabinet.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, especially for special occasions, but on a normal day I'd rather not spend time choosing clothes and usually just pick T-shirts and shorts from the bottom of the wardrobe.

Problems: awkward phrases 'in a normal day' (use 'on a normal day'), unnecessary 'in' before 'choosing clothes', and 'where I can only choose' misuses 'where' (use a clause or 'and usually just pick'). Also 'bottom of the cabinet' is better 'bottom of the wardrobe'. Suggestion: use correct time prepositions, avoid redundant words, and use 'pick' or 'choose' with proper objects.

× No, since I don't have enough errands to do to wear different styles. So every weekends and weekdays I usually wear crop tops, pants, shirts, or I wear dress 'cause it's very convenient for me to wear it rather than wearing the T-shirt and shorts.

✓ No, because I don't have enough occasions to wear different styles. On weekdays and weekends I usually wear crop tops, pants, shirts, or dresses because they are more convenient for me than T-shirts and shorts.

Issues: sentence fragment starting with 'No, since...' and informal 'cause'. Use 'because' to give reason. 'Every weekends and weekdays' is incorrect; use 'on weekdays and weekends' or 'both weekdays and weekends'. Use plural 'dresses' to match list and correct comparison 'more convenient... than T-shirts and shorts'. Suggestion: avoid fragments, use proper conjunctions, and ensure parallel structure and correct prepositions.

× I don't have a specific color of clothes that I like, but I usually wear color black and white, sometimes nude colors since it makes my skin brighter rather than the umm the light colors.

✓ I don't have a specific color I prefer, but I usually wear black and white and sometimes nude colors because they make my skin look brighter than light colors.

Problems: 'color black and white' should be 'black and white'; 'it makes my skin brighter' uses singular 'it' for plural colors—use 'they make'. 'Rather than the umm the light colors' is awkward; use 'than light colors'. Suggestion: use correct plural agreement with colors and avoid filler words; use 'make' for plural subjects and 'look brighter' for natural phrasing.