Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp hơn và mạch lạc: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và ngữ pháp sai (ví dụ 'very comfortable with' và 'I'm a smart person' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh). Dùng thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về loại trang phục và lý do, đồng thời sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ dùng 'because I am very active' hoặc 'I prefer clothes that are comfortable and allow me to move freely'). Giữ câu không quá dài (không quá 5 câu).

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes that allow me to move freely. For example, I often wear loose T-shirts and soft joggers because they are breathable and suit my active lifestyle.

제안: Cần trả lời ngắn gọn, tránh lặp ý và cải thiện ngữ pháp (ví dụ 'I'm in very, very active persons' sai). Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng ('I prefer comfortable, casual clothes'), rồi nêu một lý do ngắn. Dùng liên từ hợp lý để kết nối ý (because, so).

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I’m very active and need outfits that don’t restrict movement. For example, I like wearing sneakers and sweatshirts when I go out.

제안: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm trong câu đơn giản: dùng thì đúng ('I wear them every day') và tránh phủ định kép ('don't not'). Nên thêm một câu giải thích ngắn nếu cần. Giữ tối đa 2-3 câu.

예시: Yes, I wear T-shirts every day because they are comfortable. Also, my school has a casual dress code, so I usually choose simple T-shirts.

제안: Cần dùng cấu trúc đúng để diễn đạt thói quen (ví dụ 'I rarely choose my own clothes; my mother usually chooses for me'). Tránh lặp từ ('rarely to rarely') và đảm bảo mạch ý: nêu lý do ngắn gọn và kết thúc bằng ví dụ nếu có. Giữ phong cách tự nhiên.

예시: I rarely spend much time choosing clothes because my mother usually picks them for me. When I do choose, I prefer simple, comfortable items like plain shirts.

제안: Cần diễn đạt rõ ý phủ định và lý do bằng câu ngắn gọn, sửa ngữ pháp ('I don't; on weekends I stay at home and I don't go out with friends because I have to study for final exams'). Tránh dùng 'anymore' sai ngữ cảnh. Có thể thêm một chi tiết về trang phục nếu muốn.

예시: Not really. On weekdays I wear casual school clothes, and on weekends I usually stay at home studying for my final exams, so I don't change my style much.

제안: Cần trả lời trực tiếp ('I like blue') rồi giải thích ngắn gọn với ngữ pháp chính xác ('because blue feels cool in summer'). Tránh từ thừa ('some color like') và sửa cấu trúc ('is feel like' → 'feels'). Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ sở thích (ví dụ: light blue shirts).

예시: I like blue, especially light blue, because it feels cool and refreshing in summer. For instance, I often choose light-blue shirts and linen tops when it's hot outside.

× I would choose something that very comfortable with because I'm a smart person and I'm very active.

✓ I would choose something that is very comfortable because I'm a smart person and I'm very active.

The sentence omits the linking verb 'is' after 'that'. Also 'with' is unnecessary. Use 'is' to link the subject complement. Suggestion: include the verb 'is' and remove 'with' to form a correct relative clause.

× ...as I said before, I'm in very, very active persons and I want to wear things that don't interrupt my actions.

✓ ...as I said before, I'm a very, very active person and I want to wear things that don't interrupt my activities.

The original uses 'in' and plural 'persons' incorrectly. Use singular 'person' to match 'I'm' and remove 'in'. 'Actions' is awkward; 'activities' is the correct noun. Suggestion: say 'I'm a very active person' and use 'activities'.

× And of course I would love to wear a comfortable and casual clothes.

✓ And of course I would love to wear comfortable, casual clothes.

'Clothes' is a plural uncountable noun here so do not use the article 'a'. Remove 'a' and place adjectives before the plural noun. Suggestion: use 'comfortable, casual clothes'.

× Yes of course I'm wearing it every days and my school don't not allow me to wear any other clothes.

✓ Yes, of course I wear it every day and my school does not allow me to wear any other clothes.

Use simple present 'I wear' for habitual action, not 'I'm wearing'. 'Every days' should be 'every day' (singular). The school subject requires 'does not' for third person singular; original has double negative 'don't not'. Suggestion: use 'I wear it every day' and 'my school does not allow'.

× Choosing clothes is very difficult for me because I'm rarely to rarely going to choose clothes.

✓ Choosing clothes is very difficult for me because I rarely choose clothes.

The phrase 'I'm rarely to rarely going to choose' is ungrammatical. For habitual tendency use simple present 'I rarely choose'. Remove redundant words. Suggestion: use 'I rarely choose clothes'.

× Always my mom choosing for me.

✓ My mom always chooses for me.

Word order and verb form are incorrect. Place adverb 'always' after subject or before main verb and use third person singular 'chooses'. Suggestion: 'My mom always chooses for me.'

× Sadly not because on weekends I'm just at home.

✓ Sadly not, because on weekends I'm just at home.

Add a comma for clarity. The tense is acceptable; minor punctuation improves sentence flow. Suggestion: include a comma after 'Sadly not'.

× I'm going hang out with my friends anymore because I have to study to my final exam.

✓ I don't go hang out with my friends anymore because I have to study for my final exam.

'I'm going hang out' is incorrect; use 'I don't hang out' or 'I'm not going to hang out'. Also use 'study for' rather than 'study to'. Suggestion: 'I don't hang out with my friends anymore because I have to study for my final exam.'

× What colour clothes do you like? Student: Yes, of course it's blue.

✓ What colour clothes do you like? Student: Yes, of course I like blue.

Responding 'it's blue' is odd for 'clothes' preference. Use 'I like blue' to state preference. 'It' refers to a single item; use first person preference.

× Like in summers there's very hot and I don't want to wear some color like red or yellow anymore.

✓ Like in summer it's very hot and I don't want to wear colors like red or yellow anymore.

'Summers' should be singular or 'in summer'. Use 'it's' or 'it is' for weather. 'Some color' is awkward; use 'colors' and plural when giving examples. Suggestion: 'In summer it's very hot...'.

× I just want to wear something that is feel like very fresh and cool.

✓ I just want to wear something that feels very fresh and cool.

Use the verb 'feels' (third person singular) not 'is feel like'. Remove 'like' after 'feel'. Suggestion: 'something that feels very fresh and cool.'