Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and awkward phrasing, and add one specific reason or example. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, “because” or “so”). Keep it within 1–3 sentences.

예시: I usually wear jeans because they are versatile and comfortable. For example, I can dress them up with a blazer for presentations or wear them casually with a T‑shirt for classes.

제안: Make a clear, fluent sentence and avoid hesitations. Give a specific reason or brief example and use a linking phrase (e.g., “because” or “so”) to connect your reason to the preference.

예시: I definitely prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me concentrate when I study. For instance, I often wear loose trousers and a hoodie during long study sessions.

제안: Give a direct, complete answer and remove unclear fragments. Combine short sentences into one or two fluent sentences and add a specific detail or example to support your answer.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts, especially with jeans or joggers. I often choose graphic tees for weekends and plain ones for university classes.

제안: Clarify your meaning (there is an unclear phrase “similar girls”) and give a concise reason. Use a linking word like “because” or “unless” and provide a brief example of exceptions (special events).

예시: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I usually wear the same casual outfits. Only for special events, like parties or interviews, do I plan my outfit carefully.

제안: Answer directly and smoothly: state the contrast clearly and give specific examples of each style. Use linking words such as “on the other hand” or “whereas” to show contrast.

예시: Yes, I do. On weekdays I wear casual, comfortable clothes for studying, like hoodies and jeans, whereas on weekends I dress more actively for outdoor activities, such as sportswear or brighter outfits.

제안: Be concise and avoid uncertain phrases like “I think.” Give a clear reason and a short example of how you combine these colors. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

예시: I prefer black and white because they’re easy to match with other colors. For example, I often wear a white shirt with black jeans because it looks neat and simple.

× I usually enjoy to wear jeans.

✓ I usually enjoy wearing jeans.

After the verb 'enjoy' the verb should be in the -ing form (gerund). 'Enjoy to wear' is incorrect; use 'enjoy wearing' to express liking an activity.

× I'm still a student so I can study well when I'm feeling. Comfortable.

✓ I'm still a student so I can study well when I'm feeling comfortable.

The sentence is broken and the adjective 'comfortable' should follow 'feeling' without a full stop. Combine the fragments into one present-tense clause: 'feeling comfortable.'

× I also like to wear T-shirts with jeans or training pants.

✓ I also like to wear T-shirts with jeans or training pants.

No article error here; sentence is correct. (Included to indicate no change required.)

× I think I don't. Well, well.

✓ I don't think so.

The original is fragmented and unclear. 'I don't think so' is a concise, grammatically correct response.

× I don't usually spend much time choosing clothes because except for special events I choose similar girls.

✓ I don't usually spend much time choosing clothes because, except for special events, I choose similar styles.

The phrase 'choose similar girls' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'similar styles'. Also add commas around the parenthetical 'except for special events' for clarity.

× On weekdays I usually study so I prefer to wear casual looks and on weekends I often play outside so I specially match up.

✓ On weekdays I usually study, so I prefer to wear casual clothes, and on weekends I often go out, so I dress up more.

Original has awkward phrasing: 'casual looks' and 'specially match up' are nonstandard. Rephrase to 'casual clothes' and 'dress up more' or 'go out' to convey intended meaning; add commas for clause separation.

× I prefer wearing black and white because they are easy to match with any colors so.

✓ I prefer wearing black and white because they are easy to match with any color.

Use singular 'color' after 'any' when referring to general category. Remove trailing 'so.' Also 'match with' is acceptable but 'match' alone works: 'easy to match with any color.'

× I think they are even colors.

✓ I think they are neutral colors.

'Even colors' is not a common collocation in English. 'Neutral colors' accurately expresses that black and white pair well with others. Provide clearer adjective choice.

× jeans are basic items I think, so I usually enjoy to wear jeans.

✓ Jeans are basic items, I think, so I usually enjoy wearing them.

Avoid repeating 'jeans' and use the pronoun 'them' for plural reference. Also change 'enjoy to wear' to 'enjoy wearing' (verb + -ing form). Added comma for clarity.