Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, grammatically correct and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct noun forms and article use, and add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid vague phrases like “clear color”.

예시: I like wearing blue skinny jeans and simple, light-coloured shirts. For example, I often choose pale blue or white shirts because they are easy to match and look tidy.

제안: Good content and clear reason. Fix minor grammar (remove extraneous words) and shorten to one topic sentence plus one supporting reason using a linking word. Ensure natural phrasing like “I prefer wearing”.

예시: I prefer wearing comfortable, casual clothes most of the time because they let me move freely and feel relaxed.

제안: Short answer is fine but correct adjective order and word choice: say “light-coloured” or “plain-coloured” instead of “clear colors”. Add a brief supporting detail with a linking word.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially light-coloured ones, because they are comfortable and easy to wash.

제안: This answer is unclear and ungrammatical. Give a clear direct response (Yes/No), then explain briefly why with specific detail. Avoid unrelated or confusing phrases.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes; I usually pick an outfit in five to ten minutes unless I am shopping with my sister, who takes much longer to decide.

제안: The idea is clear but phrasing is informal. Respond directly and give a brief reason using linking words (e.g., “because” or “so”). Optionally give one example of what you wear.

예시: No, I usually wear the same style on weekdays and weekends because I value comfort more than fashion; for instance, I often wear jeans and T-shirts every day.

제안: Correct verb agreement and make the list sound natural. Use linking words if you add reasons (e.g., “because”). You can give a short specific example of an outfit in those colours.

예시: I like blue, red and white clothes. For example, I often wear a blue shirt with white sneakers, and I have a red jacket for colder days.

× I really like a blue skinny jeans and a clear color shirts.

✓ I really like a pair of blue skinny jeans and a shirt in a light color.

The nouns 'jeans' and 'shirts' require correct singular/plural or quantifier forms. 'Jeans' is plural but when specifying one item use 'a pair of jeans'. 'Shirts' should be singular when referring to one item; 'clear color' is unidiomatic — 'light color' or 'clear color' -> 'a shirt in a light color' is natural. Use appropriate quantifiers and singular/plural agreement.

× Yes, I prefer to work comfortable and casual clothes most of the time because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes most of the time because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the base form 'to wear' or the gerund 'wearing'. 'Work' is incorrect here; likely confused with 'wear'. Use 'to wear' to match 'prefer to'.

× Yes, I do like T-shirts, especially the clear colors ones.

✓ Yes, I do like T-shirts, especially the ones in light colors.

Adjective placement and form: 'clear colors ones' is ungrammatical. Use 'the ones in light colors' or 'those in light colors'. Ensure adjective phrase modifies 'ones' correctly.

× Yes I do when I go to my sister 'cause she everyone minute fi she finds out and you she finds a new.

✓ Yes, I do when I go to my sister, because she looks at every minute and always finds something new.

Original sentence has incomplete clauses and ungrammatical fragments, possibly mixing dialect. Fix by supplying a proper subordinate clause 'because she ...' and clear verbs 'looks at' and 'finds'. Maintain tense and meaning: present simple for habitual actions.

× No, I don't do 'cause I don't care about the styles.

✓ No, I don't, because I don't care about styles.

'Do' is unnecessary here; the response to 'Do you wear different styles...' should be 'No, I don't' followed by a reason introduced by 'because'. Remove extra 'do' and article before 'styles'.

× The colors that I like is blue and red and white.

✓ The colors that I like are blue, red, and white.

Subject-verb agreement: plural subject 'The colors' requires plural verb 'are' not 'is'. Also list punctuation and natural word order: 'blue, red, and white'.