Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise and relevant. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and one short example. Use correct verbs and vocabulary (e.g. “exercise regularly”, “keep me cool”, “let me move easily”). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes, especially sportswear, because I exercise regularly. For example, I often go for runs and wear breathable T‑shirts and shorts that keep me cool and allow me to move easily.

제안: Answer directly and contrast clearly. Use linking words like “but” or “however.” Fix vocabulary and grammar: e.g. “casual clothes”, “formal events”, “presentable”. Limit to 2–3 sentences and give a brief condition when you choose smart clothes.

예시: I usually prefer casual, comfortable clothes because smart outfits often feel tight and restrictive. However, for formal events or photos I sometimes wear smart clothes so I look more presentable.

제안: Provide a clear simple statement and a short reason or exception. Use correct verb forms and clearer phrasing. Keep sentences short and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I often wear T‑shirts because they are comfortable and quick to put on for daily activities. For special occasions I usually choose smarter clothes instead.

제안: This answer is fairly clear but needs grammatical corrections and a linking phrase. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then use “but” to introduce the exception and give a specific example of what you do when preparing for formal events.

예시: I don't spend much time choosing clothes for everyday life because I usually wear simple, comfortable outfits. But for formal events I spend more time selecting a smart outfit so I look appropriate and professional.

제안: Organize the answer: state the general habit, then give one clear example with correct vocabulary (“dress more formally”, “comfortable clothes for studying/working”). Use linking words like “for example” and correct tense usage.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear comfortable clothes for studying or work, but on weekends I dress differently for social events. For example, I would dress more formally for a friend’s birthday party.

제안: Give a clear preference, explain why with specific reasons, and mention an exception. Use appropriate adjectives (“minimalist”, “easy to combine”) and correct phrasing. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer black and white because they suit a minimalist style and are easy to mix and match. For special occasions I choose brighter, more colorful clothes to stand out.

× I prefer to comfortable clothes, especially sportswear because I excel regularly.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes, especially sportswear, because I exercise regularly.

The phrase 'prefer to comfortable clothes' uses incorrect word order and an unnecessary 'to'; 'comfortable' should directly modify 'clothes'. 'excel regularly' is incorrect verb choice; context requires 'exercise regularly'. Use 'prefer' + noun phrase and the correct verb 'exercise' for physical activity.

× For example, I often breathe, take tissue and run, running, shoot because it's keeping me cold and let me move easily.

✓ For example, I often breathe, carry tissues, and run because they keep me cool and let me move easily.

List items must be parallel and meaningful. 'Breathe' is unnecessary; likely intended 'carry tissues'. Use base verbs 'carry' and 'run' in parallel. 'It's keeping me cold' has wrong tense and pronoun; use plural 'they keep me cool' to refer to clothes and correct adjective 'cool'.

× I prefer to wear comfortable cash codes become for outfit often fumidide and restricted and make me feel uneasy.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because outfits that are tight and restrictive make me feel uneasy.

Original has many incorrect words ('cash codes', 'fumidide') and wrong structure. Use 'clothes' and explain cause: 'because outfits that are tight and restrictive make me feel uneasy.' Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct adjectives.

× However, if you want to take the photo attendant formal event sometime I close the smart calls to look at me presentable.

✓ However, if I need to attend a formal event or take a photo, I choose smart clothes to look presentable.

Pronouns and subjects were confused ('you' vs 'I'). Use 'I' to answer personal preference. Correct verbs: 'attend', 'choose', and adjective 'presentable'. Maintain logical word order.

× I always wearing the T-shirt because every day I usually to make the suitable clothes and the a little time will I will to dress some small clothes to attend special events.

✓ I always wear T-shirts because every day I usually choose suitable clothes, and I reserve a little time to dress up for special events.

Use simple present 'wear' instead of progressive 'wearing'. Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'usually'. 'Dress up' is correct phrasal verb for preparing for events. Fix word order and articles.

× I don't spend much time in choosing clothes.

✓ I don't spend much time choosing clothes.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary after 'spend time'. Use the gerund directly: 'spend time choosing'.

× but for the formal event I spend more time select suitable or smart outfit to look at my eye appropriately for my occasion.

✓ But for formal events I spend more time selecting a suitable or smart outfit so I look appropriate for the occasion.

After 'spend time' use gerund 'selecting'. Use article 'a' before 'suitable outfit' and correct structure 'so I look appropriate for the occasion'. Remove awkward phrase 'look at my eye'.

× Yes, I usually wear different clothes on the weekend because I often go outside to take a photo and attend special event.

✓ Yes, I usually wear different clothes on the weekend because I often go out to take photos and attend special events.

Use 'go out' rather than 'go outside'. Pluralize 'photos' and 'special events' for general statements. Maintain simple present.

× For example, if I go to my friend's birthday party, I will dress more formal and weekend I will crucial comfortable clothes on my work of study.

✓ For example, if I go to my friend's birthday party, I will dress more formally, and on weekends I will usually wear comfortable clothes for studying or work.

Use adverb 'more formally' to modify 'dress'. Correct time expression 'on weekends' and verb 'wear'. 'Crucial' is wrong; use 'usually'. Clarify 'work of study' to 'studying or work'.

× Uh, I prefer black and white clothes because it is looking like minimalist and easy to condress and if I found the comfortable everyday wear and the spice occasion or fevers are usually choose blonder more colorful outfit to stand out.

✓ I prefer black and white clothes because they look minimalist and are easy to match. If I find comfortable everyday wear, then for special occasions I usually choose bolder, more colorful outfits to stand out.

Use plural pronoun 'they' for clothes. Use 'look' instead of 'is looking like'. 'Easy to match' replaces 'easy to condress'. Clarify conditional 'if I find' and use 'special occasions' and adjectives 'bolder, more colorful'. Ensure parallel structure and correct word forms.