Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct pronunciation and clear vocabulary choice are needed. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verbs and articles, and avoid incoherent phrases. Use one or two supporting details and linking words. For example, replace unclear words like "castle crows" with the intended items and say why specifically they are comfortable.

예시: I prefer wearing casual sports clothes, such as trainers, track pants and T-shirts, because they allow me to move easily and feel comfortable. For example, when I exercise or run errands I find these clothes much more practical than formal wear.

제안: Make a direct comparison and use correct grammar and linking words. Start with a clear opinion, then give reasons using connectors like "because" or "so". Avoid fragmented endings and unrelated words.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they let me move freely and feel relaxed. Also, casual clothes are easier to wash and maintain, so I usually choose them for daily activities.

제안: Be concise and use accurate vocabulary to explain reasons. Give a clear topic sentence then one or two concise supporting reasons. Avoid unclear words like "truth" and "teacher" if not intended.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are simple and comfortable. They are also versatile, so I can wear them at home, for exercise or under a jacket when I go out.

제안: This answer is generally clear but should be more fluent and grammatically correct. Use a topic sentence and then provide a brief explanation with a linking phrase like "because". Avoid repeating words.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes. I usually pick outfits in about five minutes because I prefer simple and practical clothes that are easy to match.

제안: Answer directly and give specific examples of how styles differ. Use linking words like "for example" or "for instance" and avoid repetition. Be concise with two supporting details.

예시: Yes, I do. For example, on weekdays I usually wear smart-casual clothes for work, such as shirts and trousers, but on weekends I prefer casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts for relaxing or meeting friends.

제안: Use precise colour names and explain reasons clearly. Correct grammatical errors (e.g., "rice" -> "white"?) and use one or two specific examples. Avoid filler sounds and be confident.

예시: I like green and white because green looks natural and calming, while white gives a clean, fresh impression. For instance, I often wear a green shirt with white trousers when I go to work or meet friends.

× I lie wearing the castle crows like the sport shoes, uh sport pants, long pants and T-shirts because it can help me to move easily and feel comfortable. That's why I like it.

✓ I like wearing casual clothes such as sports shoes, sports pants, long pants and T-shirts because they help me move easily and feel comfortable. That's why I like them.

Errors: 'lie' is incorrect word choice for 'like'; 'castle crows' is unintelligible and likely meant 'casual clothes' (word choice/spelling); 'the sport shoes' should be 'sports shoes' and similar plurals; 'it can help me' is wrong because the subject (clothes) is plural, so use 'they help me' (subject-verb agreement and plural). Also use 'them' as plural pronoun. Suggestion: Choose correct vocabulary ('casual'), use plural nouns consistently, and match verb forms to plural subjects.

× I prefer where the comfortable and casual clothes rather than smart clothes because it can help me to move easy and. Looked cancelled and.

✓ I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they help me move easily and look relaxed.

Errors: 'prefer where' is wrong structure; should be 'prefer' followed by noun phrase. 'the comfortable and casual clothes' should omit 'the' and use correct adjective order and commas. 'it can help me' should be 'they help me' (plural subject). 'move easy' should be 'move easily' (adverb). The phrase 'Looked cancelled and.' is unintelligible; likely intended 'look relaxed' or 'look casual'. Suggestion: Use correct verb patterns after 'prefer' and match verbs to plural nouns; use adverb forms for manner.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because I don't like truth for most clothes, but teacher can helps me to be comfortable and wonderful, that's why I like it.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because I don't like tight clothes, but they help me to be comfortable and look good, so I like them.

Errors: 'truth' is wrong word; likely 'tight'. 'for most clothes' is awkward; 'tight clothes' is sufficient. 'teacher can helps me' is wrong: 'can helps' mixes modal + conjugated verb; should be 'they help me' referring to T-shirts (pronoun and verb agreement). 'wonderful' is unnatural here; 'look good' or 'feel good' fits. Suggestion: Use correct vocabulary, avoid mixing modals with -s verbs, and keep pronoun antecedents clear.

× To be honest, no I don't because every day when I choose my clothes to work or go out to use around 5 minutes because I want to be easy and fast.

✓ To be honest, no I don't because every day when I choose my clothes to go to work or go out, I use around 5 minutes because I want to be quick and efficient.

Errors: 'choose my clothes to work or go out to use' has wrong prepositions and word order; use 'go to work or go out'. 'use around 5 minutes' should be 'it takes me around 5 minutes' or 'I use around 5 minutes' is awkward; better 'it takes me about 5 minutes'. 'be easy and fast' is incorrect collocation; use 'be quick and efficient'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions for destinations, express duration with 'it takes (someone) time', and prefer natural adjective collocations.

× Yes I do because I want to separate work, working days and the resting or entertainment date. That's why I want to wear different clothes or different style to separate that.

✓ Yes, I do because I want to separate workdays from rest or entertainment days. That's why I want to wear different clothes or different styles to distinguish them.

Errors: 'separate work, working days and the resting or entertainment date' is awkward and incorrect article/preposition use; 'workdays' is the correct noun, and 'rest or entertainment days' is clearer. 'different style' should be plural 'different styles' to match 'clothes' or use 'a different style'. 'to separate that' is vague; use 'to distinguish them'. Suggestion: Use standard nouns like 'workdays', match singular/plural, and choose clear verbs like 'distinguish'.

× MMM I like greens and rice because it helps me to look, uh, more warmed and comfortable. That's why I always wear the white and green shirt when I go to work or rest.

✓ I like green and white because they help me look warmer and more comfortable. That's why I always wear white or green shirts when I go to work or rest.

Errors: 'greens and rice' are incorrect words; likely meant 'green and white' or 'greens and whites' (colors). 'helps me' should be 'help me' because colors (plural) are the subject. 'more warmed' is incorrect; use comparative 'warmer'. 'the white and green shirt' should be plural or use 'a white or green shirt' depending on meaning. Suggestion: Use correct color words, match verb agreement, use comparative 'warmer', and keep noun number consistent with meaning.