Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Speak more clearly and organize your answer: give a direct topic sentence, one or two supporting reasons with concise examples, and avoid repetition. Use correct tense and simpler grammar (subject-verb agreement) and reduce hesitations. Also replace vague phrases like "whenever coming especially occasion" with specific words such as "for special occasions".

예시: I usually prefer formal clothes because they make me feel comfortable and professional. For special occasions, however, I wear traditional outfits like a sari or a kurti, which I find elegant and appropriate.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and two concise reasons. Avoid fillers and confirmatory tags like "no?" Use correct grammar (plural agreement) and choose precise adjectives (e.g., "more attractive" or "more practical").

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are more practical for my daily activities and feel more comfortable. Also, casual clothes often look attractive and suit my personal style better.

제안: Be careful with word choice and avoid incorrect words ("dessert" is wrong). Start with a direct answer, then give one or two clear reasons and an example. Reduce hesitations and fix grammar ("T-shirts" plural, "feel comfortable and safe").

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. When I go out I usually choose a T-shirt because it is comfortable and makes me feel relaxed and confident.

제안: Keep the answer concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Start with a direct reply, then give a specific reason and a brief example of how you choose (e.g., trying items on, comparing styles).

예시: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I shop only once or twice a month. I usually try on several items and compare styles to make sure I buy something I will wear often.

제안: Provide a clear contrast with linking words (e.g., "on weekdays... whereas on weekends..."). Fix grammar (articles and prepositions) and avoid vague phrasing like "depends on time." Give one specific example for each situation.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear casual clothes at home, whereas on weekends I wear smarter clothes when I go out for social events or meetings.

제안: Answer directly and give specific reasons (e.g., versatile, easy to match). Avoid fillers and correct singular/plural ("colors"). Add a short example of how you wear those colors.

예시: I usually prefer black and white clothes because they are versatile and easy to match. For example, I often pair a white shirt with black trousers for a simple, neat look.

× How well I prefer well I prefer formal clothes because it it makes me feel comfortable when I wear formal clothes.

✓ I prefer formal clothes because they make me feel comfortable when I wear them.

The original sentence repeats words and uses incorrect pronouns. 'Formal clothes' is plural, so use the plural pronoun 'they' and object pronoun 'them'. Remove repeated filler words like 'well'. Also use a simple present tense verb 'make' to agree with the plural subject 'they'.

× But whenever coming especially occasion I also wearing sari kurti also.

✓ But on special occasions I also wear a sari or kurti.

The original has incorrect word order and verb form. Use the prepositional phrase 'on special occasions' and the simple present tense 'wear' for habitual actions. Include articles where needed ('a sari') and use 'or' to list alternatives. Remove duplicate 'also'.

× Absolutely, I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes rather than smart clothes because comfortable and casual clothes, uh, it's more. Good looking and also beautiful, no?

✓ Absolutely, I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because comfortable clothes look better and are more attractive.

Fix subject-verb agreement and sentence flow. 'Comfortable and casual clothes' is plural so use 'look' not 'it's'. Remove fillers and split awkward fragments. Use comparative phrase 'look better' and adjective 'attractive' rather than 'beautiful' for clothes.

× Yes, definitely. I like wearing T-shirt, uh, whenever I go outside, uh, I always prefer dessert rather than uh, any smart clothes because T-shirt helps me uh, feel comfortable and feeling safe.

✓ Yes, definitely. I like wearing T-shirts whenever I go outside. I always prefer casual clothes rather than any smart clothes because T-shirts help me feel comfortable and safe.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for a habitual action. 'Dessert' is incorrect word choice; use 'casual clothes'. Match verb forms: 'help' with plural subject and use parallel adjectives 'comfortable and safe'. Remove extra filler words.

× That's interesting question. For me, yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I only buy clothes once or twice per month, so I spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

✓ That's an interesting question. For me, yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I only buy clothes once or twice a month.

Add the article 'an' before 'interesting question'. Avoid unnecessary repetition; the reason already explains why the speaker spends time choosing clothes. Use the common expression 'once or twice a month'.

× Uh, yes, definitely. It depends on the whenever I go outside, uh, on my weekends I prefer smart clothes and whenever I sit to my home I prefer a comfortable clothes. It depends on time.

✓ Uh, yes, definitely. It depends. When I go out on weekends I prefer smart clothes, and when I stay at home I prefer comfortable clothes. It depends on the time.

Remove 'the whenever' and use 'when' clauses for clarity. Use 'go out' instead of 'go outside' in this context and 'stay at home' rather than 'sit to my home'. Use plural 'comfortable clothes' and add 'on' in 'depends on the time'.

× Uh, usually I wear uh, black and white clothes because they, uh, I really like this color.

✓ Uh, usually I wear black and white clothes because I really like those colors.

'Black and white clothes' refers to two colors, so use the plural noun 'colors' and the plural demonstrative 'those'. Remove the incorrect 'they, I' construction and filler words for a clearer sentence.