Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Open with a clear topic sentence and add one specific detail to make the answer more informative and natural. Reduce filler words like “actually.” Use a linking phrase if adding details (e.g., “for example”).

예시: I prefer neat, smart-casual clothes because they look polished yet relaxed. For example, I often wear chinos and a button-down shirt with comfortable sneakers because it’s suitable for both meetings and casual outings.

제안: Start with a direct statement and then explain why with a specific reason. Avoid repeating the same idea twice; combine into one concise sentence and add a brief example.

예시: I prefer smart clothes as long as they’re comfortable, because I value appearance without sacrificing ease. For instance, I choose tailored trousers made from stretch fabric so I can look professional and still feel comfortable all day.

제안: Use a natural collocation instead of unusual phrases like “gold choice.” Provide one specific reason or example and link ideas with a short connector (e.g., “because” or “because they are”).

예시: Yes, I often wear T-shirts because they’re simple, affordable, and versatile. For example, I pair a plain T-shirt with jeans for running errands or layer it under a blazer for a casual meeting.

제안: Make the answer fluent and grammatical: give a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Remove sentence fragments and use linking words like “because” to explain the reason.

예시: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I favour a simple wardrobe. For example, I usually pick the same few outfits each week, so deciding only takes a minute.

제안: Answer directly, then give a concise, well-structured reason. Correct grammar (e.g., “I don’t have to dress up” rather than “have to wear look good”) and include a brief example or contrast.

예시: Not really — I wear a simple style most days because I’m on parental leave and don’t need to dress up. For instance, I usually wear comfortable trousers and a sweater whether it’s a weekday or weekend.

제안: State your preference clearly, then give a specific reason. Fix small grammar mistakes and link the reason with “because” or “as.” Avoid vague phrases like “fit well” without explaining.

예시: I prefer neutral colours like white, black and gray because they’re easy to mix and give a clean, understated look. For example, I usually choose a gray sweater and black trousers because they match all my shoes.

× Actually I like neat clothes, especially smart casual style.

✓ Actually, I like neat clothes, especially smart-casual styles.

Use of adjective/adverb: 'smart casual' as a compound adjective is hyphenated before a noun; 'style' should be plural 'styles' to match 'clothes' and sound natural. Also add a comma after 'Actually'. Suggestion: hyphenate compound adjectives and match plural nouns with plural forms.

× I prefer comfortable clothes.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes.

This sentence is correct. 'I prefer' matches plural 'clothes'. No change needed.

× Actually I prefer smart clothes, but it must be comfortable.

✓ Actually, I prefer smart clothes, but they must be comfortable.

Pronoun usage: 'clothes' is plural so use plural pronoun 'they' instead of 'it'. 'Must' is acceptable as a modal but should agree with the plural subject. Add comma after 'Actually'.

× If it's not comfortable, I never wear them.

✓ If they are not comfortable, I never wear them.

Pronoun and verb agreement: 'clothes' is plural so use 'they are' rather than 'it's' (it is). Maintain plural pronoun 'them' for the object. Use present simple 'are' for general fact.

× Yes, T-shirts are my gold choice.

✓ Yes, T-shirts are my go-to choice.

Wrong word choice: 'gold choice' is incorrect idiom. Use 'go-to choice' to express preference. Keep plural agreement with 'T-shirts'.

× It is simple and usually affordable.

✓ They are simple and usually affordable.

Subject-verb agreement and pronoun reference: 'T-shirts' is plural, so use 'they are' instead of 'it is'. Also keep adjective 'affordable' unchanged.

× No I don't. I'm real quick decision maker when it comes to clothes.

✓ No, I don't. I'm a really quick decision-maker when it comes to clothes.

Missing article and incorrect adverb/adjective forms: add indefinite article 'a', use adverb 'really' to modify 'quick', and hyphenate 'decision-maker' as a compound noun. Also add comma after 'No'.

× I prefer a simple style so. I don't much. Have to overthink it.

✓ I prefer a simple style, so I don't have to overthink it.

Sentence fragments and conjunction misuse: 'so' should join clauses, not end a sentence. Combine fragments, place verb 'have' with 'to' correctly, and remove extra period. Use present simple for habitual action.

× No, I don't think so. I wear the simple style every day because I am on parent leave now so I don't have to wear look good.

✓ No, I don't think so. I wear a simple style every day because I am on parental leave now, so I don't have to try to look good.

Multiple errors: use article 'a' with 'simple style', 'parent leave' should be 'parental leave', add comma before 'so', and fix verb phrase 'have to wear look good' to 'have to try to look good' to make grammatical sense. Maintain present tense for current situation.

× I prefer the neutral color such as white, black and Gray.

✓ I prefer neutral colors such as white, black, and gray.

Use plural 'colors' to match list; remove 'the' which is unnecessary; lowercase 'gray'; include commas between items and before the conjunction for clarity. Use 'such as' followed by plural examples.

× I don't like bright colour it I think it doesn't fit well.

✓ I don't like bright colours because I think they don't fit me well.

Run-on sentence and pronoun agreement: 'it I think' is incorrect; use 'because' to connect clauses. 'Bright colour' should be plural 'bright colours'. 'They' refers to 'colours' and 'fit me well' clarifies the object affected. Use present simple for general preference.