Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details. Avoid repetition and correct basic grammar (e.g., 'at work I have to wear a suit' not 'at the work obligate'). Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' correctly.

예시: I usually wear jeans and T-shirts because they are comfortable. However, when I'm at work I need to wear smart clothes, such as a white shirt and trousers, to look professional.

제안: Give a clear preference then explain briefly why, fixing grammar and filler words. Use one linking word ('however' or 'but') and avoid hesitations like 'uh'.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make it easier to move and relax. But when I have professional meetings, I wear smart clothes to make a good impression.

제안: This answer is good but can be slightly improved by using correct tense and adding a specific reason or example. Keep it short and natural.

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are lightweight and let me move freely, especially when I ride my bike or run errands.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence and one clear reason. Remove repetition and improve grammar ('schedule' -> 'busy schedule'). Use a linking word like 'because'.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I have a busy schedule and prefer to get dressed quickly in the morning.

제안: Answer directly, avoid fillers and repetitions, and give a concise contrast with a linking word. Correct grammar and use one clear example of weekend clothing.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear professional clothes like shirts and trousers for work, but at the weekend I prefer relaxed outfits such as jeans and hoodies for comfort.

제안: Start with a clear statement of your favorite color, then add a brief specific reason or issue. Fix grammar ('it gets dirty quickly') and avoid extra words.

예시: My favourite color is white because it looks clean and simple, but it does get dirty quickly so I wear it less often for outdoor activities.

× Every day I prefer to wear jeans and T-shirt with basket, but sometimes at the work obligate I have to work, I have to wear a suit, suitable clothes like shirt, white shirt and pants, normal pants.

✓ Every day I prefer to wear jeans and a T-shirt, but sometimes at work I have to wear a suit or suitable clothes like a white shirt and trousers.

Errors: missing articles ('a T-shirt', 'a white shirt'), incorrect plural/noun choices ('pants' acceptable but 'trousers' more natural), and awkward phrases ('at the work obligate I have to work') which should be 'at work I have to'. Suggestion: use articles with singular countable nouns and simplify redundant phrases; use 'trousers' or 'pants' consistently and keep parallel structure.

× Personally, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes. However, to be to look, uh, professional, I have to wear a suitable clothes.

✓ Personally, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes. However, to look professional, I have to wear suitable clothes.

Errors: 'to be to look' is incorrect word order and extra verb; 'a suitable clothes' uses article with a plural noun. Suggestion: remove unnecessary words, use correct infinitive order 'to look professional', and match article to noun number: either 'a suitable outfit' or 'suitable clothes'.

× Of course, T-shirt is my favorite. It's helped me to move freely.

✓ Of course, the T-shirt is my favorite. It helps me move freely.

Errors: missing definite article 'the' before a specific clothing item in general statement; tense and form error 'It's helped me' should be present simple 'It helps me' for habitual truth; 'to move freely' can be simplified to 'move freely'. Suggestion: use present simple for habits and include 'the' when referring to a specific type as a favorite.

× No, I don't like to spend too much time for my for choosing clothes because I have my schedule time, so spending time for choosing clothes, it is not my priority.

✓ No, I don't like to spend too much time choosing clothes because I have a schedule, so choosing clothes is not my priority.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'for' after 'time' and before 'choosing'; awkward noun phrase 'my schedule time' should be 'a schedule' or 'my schedule'; redundant phrasing. Suggestion: use 'spend time doing something' (no 'for'), simplify to 'choosing clothes is not my priority'.

× Yes I do. During the weekdays I have to look professionals and uh, suitable but but during the weekend I prefer to buried to be relaxed in the relax, uh, clothes relax mode.

✓ Yes, I do. During the weekdays I have to look professional and suitable, but during the weekend I prefer to be relaxed and wear casual clothes.

Errors: 'look professionals' uses plural noun instead of adjective 'professional'; 'prefer to buried to be relaxed' is incorrect verb and infinitive use; excessive repetition and awkward 'clothes relax mode'. Suggestion: use adjective forms after 'look' (look professional), correct infinitive 'prefer to be relaxed' and express clothing choice as 'wear casual clothes'.

× My favorite color is white, but the small issue with the that color it's take dirty quickly.

✓ My favorite color is white, but the problem with that color is that it gets dirty quickly.

Errors: extra definite article 'the' before 'that color'; incorrect pronoun placement and contraction 'it's take' combining 'it' and wrong verb form; verb agreement 'gets' needed for singular subject. Suggestion: use 'the problem with that color is that it gets...' and ensure subject-verb agreement.