Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details. Avoid repetition and hesitations, use correct verb forms and say items clearly (e.g., ‘pants and shirts’). Try linking words like “because” and “so” correctly.

예시: I prefer gym-fit clothes because they fit me well and show my muscles. For example, I often wear fitted T‑shirts and slim pants for training and casual outings.

제안: Give a direct answer then support it with a clear reason and a brief example. Reduce repetition and correct small grammar points (e.g., ‘baggy trousers and T‑shirts’, ‘because it’s comfortable’). Use linking words such as “because” and “for example.”

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are breathable in summer. For example, I usually wear baggy trousers and loose T‑shirts as they keep me cool and comfortable.

제안: Answer directly and avoid contradictory or confusing statements. Use one or two clear reasons and a simple example. Watch singular/plural and article use (e.g., ‘a full‑sleeve shirt’).

예시: Yes, I love wearing T‑shirts because they show my biceps and are comfortable. I also choose bright colors because they stand out; for example, I often wear a fitted red T‑shirt to parties.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and give one specific detail to support it. Avoid contradictions and correct word choice (e.g., ‘baggy shorts’, ‘I wear them’). Keep it short and coherent using connectors like ‘however’ for exceptions.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I have many T‑shirts and baggy shorts that I wear regularly. However, for special events I choose smarter pants and shirts.

제안: Provide a clear contrast between weekdays and weekends. Use linking words like ‘on weekdays’ and ‘on weekends’ and avoid repetition. Be specific about what you wear in each situation.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear smarter clothes like jeans and shirts for work or university, while on weekends I wear casual items such as baggy shorts and T‑shirts when I hang out with friends.

제안: Answer directly, give one or two clear reasons and a brief example. Use correct phrasing (e.g., ‘blue and black suit me’ and ‘people notice me’). Avoid filler words and repetition.

예시: I like blue and black because they suit me and are easy to match with other items. For instance, I often wear a navy jacket and black jeans when I want a simple but smart look.

× I like to wear gym fit outfit because it shoots on me, It is uh, fit on me. It's it shows my muscle muscle. That's why I like them. So I oftenly used uh, I often leave for pants and shirts.

✓ I like to wear gym-fit outfits because they suit me. They show my muscles. That's why I like them. So I often wear pants and shirts.

Errors: 'gym fit outfit' needs hyphen and plural 'outfits'; 'shoots on me' is incorrect verb choice — use 'suit' to mean 'look good on'; 'It is uh, fit on me' incorrect structure and subject-verb agreement; 'It's it shows my muscle muscle' repetition and singular 'muscle' should be plural 'muscles'; 'I oftenly used' wrong adverb form and tense, should be 'I often wear'. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms, plural nouns, appropriate verbs ('suit','show'), and correct adverb and present tense for habitual actions.

× I prefer to wear baggy clothes, baggy like baggy trouser and AT shirt because in this summer, uh, a lot of people sweating. So that's why I prefer, I prefer baggy trouser or baggy short because it's comfortable me.

✓ I prefer to wear baggy clothes, like baggy trousers and T-shirts, because in the summer a lot of people sweat. That's why I prefer baggy trousers or baggy shorts because they are comfortable for me.

Errors: 'baggy trouser' and 'baggy short' should be plural ('trousers','shorts'); 'AT shirt' is likely 'T-shirt'; 'in this summer' should be 'in the summer'; 'a lot of people sweating' missing verb 'are'; 'it's comfortable me' incorrect pronoun and verb — use 'they are comfortable for me'. Suggestion: use correct plural forms, correct article/time phrase, include auxiliary verbs, and correct prepositional phrase 'comfortable for me'.

× Yes I love them because it shows my bicep so I love wearing them and their color and variant also attract people and for example if I wear a full sleeve shirts it then shows my muscle so I prefer.

✓ Yes, I love them because they show my biceps, so I enjoy wearing them. Their colors and varieties also attract people. For example, if I wear a full-sleeve shirt it also shows my muscles, so I prefer that.

Errors: pronoun/verb agreement — 'it shows my bicep' should be 'they show my biceps' when referring to 'T-shirts'; 'bicep' plural 'biceps'; 'full sleeve shirts' should be 'full-sleeve shirt' (singular) or 'full-sleeve shirts' with consistent references; 'their color and variant' awkward — use 'colors and varieties'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree with their antecedents, use correct singular/plural nouns, and parallel structure.

× No, I'm not that type of guy. I choose clothes randomly and I have a lot of T-shirts and baggy short and trousers so I wear wore them. Otherwise in some occasion I prefer pants and shirts on some event.

✓ No, I'm not that type of guy. I choose clothes randomly and I have a lot of T-shirts, baggy shorts, and trousers so I wear them. On some occasions I prefer pants and shirts for certain events.

Errors: 'baggy short' should be 'baggy shorts'; 'I wear wore them' wrong tense — choose one verb, present habitual 'I wear them'; 'in some occasion' should be plural 'on some occasions'; 'on some event' should be 'for certain events' or 'at some events'. Suggestion: use consistent present tense for habits, correct plural forms, and correct prepositions ('on' vs 'for'/'at').

× Obviously I prefer different different styles of clothes on weekday or weekend because I have to go with my go to hang out with my friends in weekdays so I have to choose other clothes, not bag, not baggy shorts or T-shirts.

✓ Obviously I prefer different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends because I go out to hang out with my friends on weekends, so I choose other clothes, not baggy shorts or T-shirts.

Errors: repetition 'different different'; 'on weekday or weekend' should be 'on weekdays and weekends'; 'I have to go with my go to hang out' ungrammatical — use 'I go out to hang out' or 'I go to hang out'; 'in weekdays' should be 'on weekends' or 'on weekdays' as appropriate; 'not bag, not baggy shorts' remove 'not bag' and keep 'not baggy shorts or T-shirts'. Suggestion: eliminate repetitions, use correct time expressions, and use clear verbs for activities.

× I love color blue and black because it suits on me whenever I wear black and blue outfits so everyone looking at me. So that's that's the reason I prefer black and blue clothes.

✓ I love the colors blue and black because they suit me. Whenever I wear black or blue outfits, everyone looks at me. That's the reason I prefer black and blue clothes.

Errors: 'love color blue and black' needs article and plural 'the colors blue and black'; 'it suits on me' incorrect preposition — use 'suit me' without 'on'; 'so everyone looking at me' missing verb 'looks'. Suggestion: use correct articles, plural forms for 'colors', omit unnecessary prepositions, and include proper verbs for clauses.