Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and sentence fragments.

예시: I prefer simple, comfortable clothes that are easy to mix and match. For example, I often wear feminine dresses when I go out because they feel elegant, but at home I choose more tomboyish or casual outfits for comfort.

제안: Answer directly first, then explain with one clear reason and an example. Fix grammar (use articles, singular/plural, and prepositions). Keep it under five sentences.

예시: I like both, depending on the situation. At home I prefer comfortable, casual clothes for relaxation, but for going out with friends or special occasions I choose more feminine or smart outfits to look presentable.

제안: Clarify and correct vocabulary and grammar. Give a simple topic sentence and one specific reason. Remove unclear phrases like “predictable” or “tissues” and fix verb forms.

예시: Yes, I wear T-shirts a lot because they are comfortable and easy to put on. For instance, I usually wear a T-shirt at home or after work when I want to relax.

제안: Give a direct answer, explain with specific examples, and correct word choice (e.g., "tomboy" not "storm boys"). Use linking words to show variety.

예시: Yes, I do; choosing clothes takes time because I like several styles. For example, some days I pick a feminine dress for a meeting, while on other days I choose a tomboyish or casual look for comfort.

제안: Answer directly and give a clear reason with one example. Remove unclear words like “ethical and.” Keep sentences complete and grammatical.

예시: Yes, I dress differently: on weekdays I wear feminine or smart clothes to look professional, but on weekends I choose casual outfits to relax and socialize.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and one brief example. Fix grammar (plural/singular, capitalization) and avoid repetition.

예시: I prefer darker colours such as black, navy blue and brown because they suit my skin tone. For example, I find that navy blue makes my complexion look healthier compared with pale colours.

× I usually prefer simple outfit which is comfortable and can go for a mix and match.

✓ I usually prefer simple outfits that are comfortable and can be mixed and matched.

The noun 'outfit' should be plural 'outfits' because the speaker refers to clothes in general. Use 'that' for defining relative clause. 'Can go for a mix and match' is unnatural; 'can be mixed and matched' correctly uses passive participle to express compatibility.

× I like to wear more feminine dresses and sometimes more tomboys when I want to feel comfortable at home and sometimes casual and simple off.

✓ I like to wear more feminine dresses and sometimes tomboyish clothes when I want to feel comfortable at home, and sometimes casual and simple outfits.

'Tomboys' is the noun for people; the adjective form 'tomboyish' or 'tomboy-style clothes' is needed. 'Casual and simple off' is incorrect; use 'outfits' or 'clothes'. Also add comma for clarity.

× Actually, I like to wear both casual and comfortable outfits when I'm at home and tomboys or feminine clothes when I go out with my friends or on an special occasions.

✓ Actually, I like to wear both casual and comfortable outfits when I'm at home, and tomboyish or feminine clothes when I go out with my friends or on special occasions.

'Tomboys' should be 'tomboyish' (adjective) or 'tomboy-style clothes'. 'an special occasions' is wrong article-number agreement: use 'on special occasions' (no article). Also add comma to separate clauses.

× Yes I do T-shirt are my everydays clothes because they are comfortable and predictable which makes me relax at home.

✓ Yes, I do. T-shirts are my everyday clothes because they are comfortable and practical, which helps me relax at home.

Missing punctuation between clauses; 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' for general reference. 'Everydays' incorrect word; use 'everyday' as adjective. 'Predictable' is likely wrong word choice; 'practical' fits. Use 'helps me relax' for correct verb agreement.

× Tissues are my everyday school after the work.

✓ T-shirts are what I wear to school or after work every day.

Original 'Tissues' wrong word; likely intended 'T-shirts'. Sentence structure unclear; rephrase to indicate T-shirts worn to school or after work. Use 'every day' as adverbial phrase.

× Yes, I take a lot of time choosing clothes because I have different kind of styles in my mind.

✓ Yes, I take a lot of time choosing clothes because I have different kinds of styles in mind.

'Different kind of styles' has number mismatch; use plural 'kinds' or 'types' and no 'in my mind' is fine but 'in mind' is more concise. 'Kinds of styles' better as 'kinds of style' or 'different styles'.

× Sometimes I go for feminine, sometimes storm boys, sometimes a simple casual.

✓ Sometimes I go for feminine styles, sometimes tomboy looks, and sometimes simple casual outfits.

'Storm boys' is a wrong phrase—likely 'tomboy'. Use 'styles' or 'looks' and ensure parallel structure: list items should be similar forms ('feminine styles', 'tomboy looks', 'casual outfits').

× During the weekdays I wear more feminine or smart looks because I want to look more professional or presentable or ethical and.

✓ During weekdays, I wear more feminine or smart looks because I want to appear more professional and presentable.

Sentence ends with 'ethical and.' which is incomplete and unclear. 'During the weekdays' can be 'During weekdays'. 'Professional or presentable or ethical' is redundant; choose 'professional and presentable'. Remove trailing 'and'.

× I prefer darker color like black, Navy blue and brown rather than lighter one.

✓ I prefer darker colors like black, navy blue, and brown rather than lighter ones.

'Color' should be plural 'colors' when listing examples. 'Navy' should be lowercase in mid-sentence. 'One' must agree in number with 'colors' so use 'ones'.

× I think I prefer the darker one because it is more suitable according to my skin tone.

✓ I think I prefer the darker ones because they are more suitable for my skin tone.

Align number: 'ones' plural to match 'colors'. Use 'suitable for' rather than 'suitable according to'. Match pronoun 'they' with plural antecedent.

× It makes me looks good rather than the lighter one.

✓ They make me look better than the lighter ones.

Subject-verb agreement and verb form: 'makes me looks' incorrect; use 'make me look'. Use comparative 'better than' and plural 'ones' to match 'colors'.