Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific supporting details, and avoid repetition and vague phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas. Check grammar (use singular/plural and correct verb forms) and choose precise adjectives (comfortable, casual).

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes. For example, I often wear soft cotton T-shirts and loose trousers because they let me move freely and feel relaxed throughout the day.

제안: Give a clear direct answer then explain briefly with a reason. Correct grammar (subject–verb agreement, avoid filler words). Use a linking word like 'because' and be specific about situations when you choose comfort over smart clothes.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes because they are more practical for my daily activities. For instance, when I travel or run errands I choose loose trousers and sneakers so I can move easily.

제안: Respond simply and avoid unclear or incorrect phrases. Use correct noun forms and accurate descriptions (e.g., 'made of cotton', 'styles' not 'peas'). Give one specific benefit and one example. Remove irrelevant or odd words.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. They are usually made of cotton, which is breathable, so I stay comfortable and can move easily when I exercise or relax at home.

제안: Start with a direct answer and give specific reasons. Keep it concise and organized: mention budget, fit, or occasion. Avoid unclear questions in your reply. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

예시: Yes, I spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I check the price, fit, and material. For example, I compare items online to make sure the cotton T-shirt fits well and fits my budget.

제안: Be specific about the differences and give an example. Use linking words such as 'usually' or 'for example' and avoid vague reasons about praise — focus on function or comfort. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I usually dress more formally on weekdays for work, such as shirts and smart trousers. On weekends I prefer casual wear like T-shirts and jeans so I can relax and be comfortable.

제안: Give a clear answer and explain why you prefer a color with specific reasons (e.g., flattering, easy to match). Correct tense and grammar (use 'is' not 'was', 'I look' not 'I am look'). Keep to two sentences max.

예시: I like many colors, but my favorite is black because it looks neat and is easy to match with other clothes. I often wear black T-shirts and trousers because they make me look smart and slim.

× I would like to wear clothes which are often comfortable for me, as I like T-shirts and trousers which are very good for me and keep me calm and do not frustrate me.

✓ I would like to wear clothes that are often comfortable for me, such as T-shirts and trousers, which are suitable for me, keep me comfortable, and do not irritate me.

The original sentence uses awkward relative clauses and incorrect verb/adjective choices ('keep me calm and do not frustrate me'). Replace 'which' with 'that' for restrictive clause and use clearer adjectives and verbs: 'suitable', 'keep me comfortable', and 'do not irritate me'. Also use 'such as' to list examples. This improves clarity and natural collocation.

× Uh, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because it are much convenient for me as I can move my body here and there without in which yes.

✓ Uh, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they are much more convenient for me, as I can move easily.

The pronoun 'it' does not agree with plural 'clothes'; use 'they'. Use comparative 'more convenient' rather than 'much convenient'. Remove redundant and unclear phrases ('move my body here and there without in which yes') and replace with 'move easily' for concision and clarity.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because it is often made-up of good cotton material and it offers various types of peas and we can move our body here and there freely and we are not restricted by, uh, clothes, which are often delicious.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are often made of good cotton and allow us to move freely without restriction.

Use plural 'they' to agree with 'T-shirts'. 'Made-up of' is incorrect; use 'made of'. 'Offers various types of peas' is unclear and likely wrong—remove. 'Delicious' is inappropriate for clothes; replace entire clause with 'allow us to move freely without restriction' for meaning and register.

× Yes, I do spend most of my time choosing clothes because I preferred casual clothes which take much time to select as I can also check my budget.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I prefer casual clothes, which take time to choose since I also check my budget.

Mixing tenses: 'do spend' is acceptable but 'preferred' (past) conflicts with present preference. Use present simple 'prefer'. 'Take much time to select' is awkward; use 'take time to choose'. Clarify reason with 'since' or 'because'.

× How can I product? How can I choose the product? And yes.

✓ I consider what product to buy and how to choose it.

Original is fragmented and ungrammatical ('How can I product?'). Combine into a single clear statement using correct verbs: 'consider', 'choose', and a direct object 'it' for clarity.

× Yes, I often wear different types of clothes on weekdays and weekends because even if I want to go outside, I should dress myself in a good attire so that I am looking good and where I go people will praise me, so that's why.

✓ Yes, I often wear different types of clothes on weekdays and weekends because when I go out I try to dress well so I look good and people will praise me.

Use 'when I go out' instead of 'even if I want to go outside'. 'Dress myself in a good attire' is unnatural; use 'dress well'. 'I am looking good' should be 'I look good'. Simplify and make sentence natural and concise.

× Uh, usually I like all the colors, but my favorite color was black.

✓ Uh, usually I like all colours, but my favourite colour is black.

Tense mismatch: 'usually' indicates present habit, so use present tense 'is' rather than past 'was'. Also 'color'/'colour' spelling can follow variety; keep consistent. Use present 'is' to state a current preference.

× So that's why I like wearing black colour T-shirts and trousers because I am look very good in it and I look very attractive.

✓ That's why I like wearing black T-shirts and trousers because I look very good in them and feel more attractive.

Pronoun agreement: 'it' is incorrect for plural 'T-shirts and trousers'; use 'them'. 'I am look' is ungrammatical; use 'I look'. Replace 'black colour' with 'black' for natural phrasing and add 'feel' for collocation with 'more attractive'.