Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct minor grammar and repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (types of garments or fabrics) using linking words. Avoid repeating phrases like “when I feel comfortable” twice.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes, whether classic, casual or activewear. For example, I often choose soft cotton T-shirts and relaxed trousers because they let me move freely and feel confident when I meet people.

제안: Reduce repetition and give a brief contrast with an example. Use linking words like “but” or “however” to show nuance, and correct doubled phrases and filler words.

예시: I prefer smart-casual clothes because they combine comfort with a polished look. For instance, I often wear a neat blazer with a soft T-shirt and jeans, so I look professional yet comfortable.

제안: Clarify ideas and correct factual phrasing (you can dress T-shirts up or down). Use linking phrases and give concrete examples of occasions and fits. Keep sentences varied and avoid absolutes.

예시: Yes, I love T-shirts because they are versatile. For example, a slim-fit plain T-shirt works well for a smart-casual meeting, while an oversized printed T-shirt is ideal for relaxed weekends.

제안: Be slightly more structured: give a direct topic sentence then one supporting detail and an example. Avoid small contradictions and use linking words like “however” correctly.

예시: Not usually — I have a few favourite stores where I quickly find items that suit me. However, if I need something specific, such as a formal jacket, I will spend more time searching online and comparing options.

제안: Organize answer: state main point, then contrast weekdays vs weekends with clear examples. Fix minor language errors and redundant phrases. Use linking words like “therefore” or “however.”

예시: Because I work from home, I generally wear the same comfortable clothes during weekdays. However, on weekends I dress up a bit more for outings with family or friends, for example choosing a nicer shirt or dress for dinner.

제안: Resolve the contradiction and state a clear preference. Use linking words to explain reasons (e.g., “because,” “so”) and give a specific example of garments and occasions. Correct grammar and avoid repeating opposite statements.

예시: I generally prefer light colours like white and beige because they suit my skin tone and make me feel confident. I do wear black sometimes for formal events, but I avoid it for everyday outfits because it feels too heavy.

× I prefer comfort over anything because when I feel comfortable, I also feel confident in myself and in my style and how I I'm perceiving and being received by the world.

✓ I prefer comfort over anything because when I feel comfortable, I also feel confident in myself and in my style and in how I am perceived by the world.

The original contains a pronoun/verb sequence error 'how I I'm perceiving and being received' which mixes first person progressive and passive forms and uses an extra pronoun. Use a single clear structure. 'How I am perceived' is a passive construction appropriate to express how others receive you. Replace the redundant 'I' and the incorrect progressive form to make the sentence grammatical and clear.

× So when I feel when I feel comfortable, I feel confident in myself and I feel that I can carry myself out in the world in a in a better way.

✓ So when I feel comfortable, I feel confident in myself and I feel that I can carry myself in the world in a better way.

The sentence repeats 'when I feel' (redundancy) and uses the awkward phrasing 'carry myself out in the world'. Remove the duplicate phrase and use 'carry myself in the world' (or better: 'carry myself in the world') to maintain present-tense general statement and improve fluency.

× Yes I love wearing T-shirt and the thing with T-shirt is you can't dress it up or dress it down.

✓ Yes, I love wearing T-shirts and the thing with T-shirts is you can dress them up or dress them down.

Use plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally about types of shirts. Also change 'you can't dress it up or dress it down' to 'you can dress them up or dress them down' because many kinds of T-shirts can be dressed up or down; the modal negative 'can't' contradicted later examples, so corrected to positive 'can' to match intended meaning.

× Depends on the kind of T-shirt.

✓ It depends on the kind of T-shirt.

This fragment lacks the subject 'It' required in standard English. Adding 'It' corrects sentence structure; the noun 'T-shirt' can remain singular because 'kind of T-shirt' refers to a type.

× So slim size T-shirt are perfect for a classic wear and oversized printed T-shirt that are colourful are perfect for casual wear.

✓ So slim-size T-shirts are perfect for classic wear, and oversized printed T-shirts that are colourful are perfect for casual wear.

Pluralize 'T-shirt' to 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. Add a hyphen in 'slim-size' for clarity and remove the article 'a' before 'classic wear'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'T-shirts are'. Also make parallel structure for both clauses.

× I do have some stores where I find my style very easily in them.

✓ There are some stores where I find my style very easily.

The original is redundant ('where... in them') and awkward. Use 'There are some stores where I find my style very easily' to correct sentence structure and remove the unnecessary pronoun 'them'.

× However, if I'm looking for a particular kind of item, I do search for it a lot.

✓ However, if I'm looking for a particular kind of item, I search for it a lot.

Using 'do search' adds unnecessary emphasis. The simple present 'I search' or present continuous 'I'm searching' is more natural. Keep tense consistent: conditional with present continuous in the if-clause can pair with present simple in the main clause for habitual action.

× I do work from home so clothes are not priority for me.

✓ I work from home, so clothes are not a priority for me.

Add article 'a' before 'priority' and remove unnecessary auxiliary 'do'. This corrects noun phrase formation and makes the sentence natural.

× Whenever I go out, I either go out by my own with family or my or with my friends.

✓ Whenever I go out, I either go out on my own with family or with my friends.

Use the correct reflexive phrase 'on my own' (not 'by my own'). Remove the repeated 'my or' and simplify the coordination. This fixes pronoun/reflexive usage and redundancy.

× I do work from home so clothes are not priority for me.

✓ I work from home, so clothes are not a priority for me.

Missing article 'a' before 'priority'. Also remove unnecessary 'do' for natural phrasing. (Repeated to ensure article correction is highlighted.)

× On the weekends however, I do save some items for special occasions.

✓ On the weekends, however, I save some items for special occasions.

Remove unnecessary auxiliary 'do' which adds no emphasis here. The comma placement is adjusted for clarity. This makes the present habitual statement more natural.

× I don't prefer black, I feel it fits well with my personality.

✓ I don't prefer black; I feel it doesn't fit well with my personality.

The original contradicts itself: 'I don't prefer black' followed by 'it fits well'. To correct meaning, either say you don't prefer black because it doesn't fit, or if you mean you prefer black, reverse. Here corrected to coherent meaning: if you don't prefer black, explain it doesn't fit your personality. Use semicolon to join related clauses.

× However, my skin tone really appeal to light colors like white and beige.

✓ However, my skin tone really appeals to light colours like white and beige.

Subject-verb agreement: 'skin tone' (singular) requires 'appeals' (third person singular). Also 'appeal to' is better than 'appeal to' — keep 'appeals to' and use 'colours' (British) or 'colors' (American) consistently. This fixes verb agreement.

× So I go for these options as well because I feel most confident in them.

✓ So I go for these options as well because I feel most confident in them.

Sentence is grammatical; no change needed. Included to show it's correct under present-tense usage.

× But I lean towards black but I can't wear it all the time.

✓ But I lean towards black, although I can't wear it all the time.

Avoid repeating 'but' twice; replace the second 'but' with 'although' or a comma to improve cohesion. Tense and meaning remain present and correct.