Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Говорите более связно и грамматически правильно; уберите повторы и междометия (uh, umm). Дайте краткое основное предложение, затем 1–2 конкретные детали (когда и почему). Работайте над порядком слов и артиклями («they are» → «because they are»).

예시: I usually wear casual clothes because they are comfortable for travelling and meeting friends. For example, I often choose jeans and a hoodie when I go out on the weekend.

제안: Уточните противопоставление более чётко и избегайте пауз. Начните с прямого ответа, затем кратко объясните ситуацию(когда носите что). Сведите повторения («formal formal») и исправьте предлоги.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes for travelling and socialising, but I wear smart clothes at school or formal events. For instance, I wear a suit for presentations and casual outfits when I travel.

제안: Сформулируйте причину естественно и корректно. Избегайте некорректных фраз («cannot make the uncomfortable emotions»). Дайте одну ясную причину и пример использования.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to put on. I usually wear a T-shirt for shopping or a walk in the park.

제안: Сократите ответ и исправьте грамматику: скажите прямо, сколько времени вы тратите и почему. Используйте связки причинно-следственные («because», «so»). Добавьте конкретный пример (например, выбор перед выходом).

예시: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look good. For example, I may change outfits several times before going out.

제안: Отвечайте чётко: укажите различие и дайте конкретный пример. Уберите разговорные сокращения («wanna») и паузы. Уточните, какие именно стили вы носите и почему.

예시: Yes, I usually dress more formally on weekdays for work or school, but on weekends I try different styles, including traditional clothes, to relax and explore my culture.

제안: Выражайте мысль ясно и корректно: укажите любимый цвет и причину. Избегайте двусмысленных оборотов («I not only black and also dark clothes»). Дайте одно-два оправдания почему (комфорт, уверенность).

예시: I usually wear black because it is my favourite colour and makes me feel confident. Dark colours are also practical and easy to match with other items.

× I often wear casual, uh, casual clothes uh, cause of they are very comfortable to travel or umm, only to wear and go out to hanging out with friends or.

✓ I often wear casual clothes because they are very comfortable for traveling or for going out and hanging out with friends.

The pronoun 'they' is acceptable but 'cause of they' is incorrect; use 'because' not 'cause of' before a clause. Also prepositions were incorrect ('comfortable to travel' -> 'comfortable for traveling'; 'to wear and go out to hanging out' -> 'for going out and hanging out'). Combine phrases and remove fillers for clarity. Suggestions: use 'because' before clauses, use 'comfortable for + -ing' for activities, and simplify redundant words.

× I often wear casual, uh, casual clothes uh, cause of they are very comfortable to travel or umm, only to wear and go out to hanging out with friends or.

✓ I often wear casual clothes because they are very comfortable for traveling or for going out and hanging out with friends.

Use gerund forms (traveling, hanging out) after prepositions like 'for'. 'To hanging' is incorrect; use 'to' + base verb or 'for' + -ing. Suggest using consistent gerunds after 'for'.

× I often wear casual, uh, casual clothes uh, cause of they are very comfortable to travel or umm, only to wear and go out to hanging out with friends or.

✓ I often wear casual clothes because they are very comfortable for traveling or for going out and hanging out with friends.

Maintain simple present for habitual actions: 'I often wear' is correct. Ensure following verbs match (use gerunds after 'for'). Avoid mixing structures.

× Uh, yes, I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes, umm, on the course and when I go out to hanging with friends or when I travel.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes on campus and when I go out to hang out with friends or when I travel.

'On the course' is incorrect for campus/school; use 'on campus'. 'Go out to hanging' is incorrect: use 'go out to hang out' or 'go out and hang out'. Use consistent verb forms after 'to'.

× But in the school, uh, or in the formal formal places, I usually wear smart clothes.

✓ But at school or in formal places, I usually wear smart clothes.

Use 'at school' not 'in the school' for general attendance. 'Formal formal' is redundant; remove repetition.

× Yes, of course, 'cause they are very comfortable and easy to wear on the street and every everywhere and they are cannot make the uncomfortable emotions.

✓ Yes, of course, because they are very comfortable and easy to wear on the street and everywhere, and they don't make me feel uncomfortable.

Use 'because' instead of ''cause' in formal speech. 'Every everywhere' is redundant; use 'everywhere'. 'They are cannot make the uncomfortable emotions' is ungrammatical; use 'they don't make me feel uncomfortable' to express emotional effect.

× Oh yes, this is my huge problem on a daily my the routine, uh, cause of when I wanted to go course or go, uh, for a walk, I every day, uh, looking up to my dresses or my clothes.

✓ Oh yes, this is a big problem in my daily routine: when I want to go to class or go for a walk, I look through my dresses and clothes every day.

Word order was incorrect and articles misused ('a daily my the routine'). Use 'in my daily routine'. Tense consistency: use simple present 'want' for habitual actions and 'look' not 'looking' in this structure. 'Go course' -> 'go to class'. Place time expressions like 'every day' appropriately.

× Because of this, I can't match.

✓ Because of this, I can't match my clothes well.

'Because of this' is okay but 'I can't match' is incomplete; specify what cannot be matched (my clothes). Use 'match my clothes' or 'coordinate my clothes'.

× Yes, of course, 'cause I wanna, uh, I like variety of dresses and the culture and uh, I sometimes I wanna try to wear some traditional clothes, uh, on the weekends and try it on myself.

✓ Yes, of course, because I like a variety of dresses and cultural styles, and sometimes I want to try wearing traditional clothes on the weekends.

''Cause' should be 'because' and 'wanna' -> 'want to' in formal correction. 'I like variety' needs an article: 'a variety of'. Remove redundant phrases ('I sometimes I wanna') and 'try it on myself' is awkward; use 'try wearing'.

× I usually dressed on black color 'cause my favorite color is black. I don't know but when I wear black clothes I not only black and also dark clothes because I feel comfortable and it's can huge my confidence.

✓ I usually wear black because my favorite color is black. I don't know, but when I wear black or other dark clothes I feel comfortable and it can boost my confidence.

Use 'wear' not 'dressed on'. 'Black color' -> 'black' or 'the color black'. 'I not only black and also dark clothes' is ungrammatical; use 'black or other dark clothes'. 'It's can huge my confidence' -> 'it can boost my confidence'. Use proper verb forms and collocations.