Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., "a kurti","made of cotton"). Avoid filler words and repetition.

예시: I prefer comfortable, everyday clothes, especially kurtis. For example, I usually wear a kurti made of cotton because it keeps me cool and comfortable throughout a long day at work.

제안: Give a direct answer then expand with a reason using linking words. Fix redundancy and grammar (remove duplicate words, use correct article and plural/singular forms).

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart or very fashionable outfits because they let me move freely and feel relaxed during work.

제안: Answer clearly and use correct vocabulary. Explain the rule briefly with a linking word (e.g., "because"). Replace unclear tokens like "AT" and "UH" with correct words, and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes. I often wear T-shirts at the office on Thursdays and Fridays because our dress code allows collarless T-shirts only on those days.

제안: Start with a clear short answer, then give a specific example and use linking words (e.g., "but", "however"). Improve grammar (tense and word order) and be specific about what you consider (dress, accessories).

예시: Not usually, but I spend more time choosing clothes for special occasions. For instance, before a wedding I carefully decide which dress and jewellery match so I look appropriate for the event.

제안: Provide a clear contrast using a linking word (e.g., "whereas" or "while"). Make sentences concise and correct minor grammar ("different kinds"; "on weekends I choose more casual clothes").

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear comfortable, work-appropriate clothes for the office, whereas on weekends I dress more casually and freely.

제안: Answer directly then clarify the apparent contradiction with a clear reason. Use precise vocabulary and avoid unnecessary filler. Correct grammar and phrasing ("I mainly like navy blue and black, but I own more yellow clothes").

예시: I mainly like navy blue and black because they look smart and are easy to match. However, I actually own more yellow clothes because I enjoy bright colours for casual wear.

× Mainly I like clothes, in those I feel comfortable.

✓ Mainly, I like clothes in which I feel comfortable.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and a misplaced clause. 'In those' is incorrect; use the relative pronoun 'which' with 'in' placed before it to form 'in which I feel comfortable.' Also add a comma after 'Mainly' for clarity.

× Usually uh into a daily wear.

✓ Usually, I wear them as everyday clothes.

'Into a daily wear' is ungrammatical. Use a subject and verb: 'I wear them' and 'everyday clothes' to express usual, daily use. Add a comma after 'Usually.'

× I prefer kurti.

✓ I prefer a kurti.

Singular countable noun 'kurti' requires an article. Use 'a kurti' to indicate one garment in general.

× It's a made from the cotton material.

✓ It's made from cotton material.

Remove the unnecessary article 'a' before 'made' and the definite article before 'cotton material.' 'Made from cotton' is the correct phrase.

× It's fill me a comfortable and relaxing during the whole day in a work.

✓ It makes me comfortable and relaxed throughout the whole workday.

'It's fill me' is incorrect verb usage; use 'It makes me.' 'A comfortable and relaxing' should be adjectives modifying the subject, so 'comfortable and relaxed' describes the person. 'Throughout the whole workday' is a natural time expression.

× Yeah, I usually prefer a prefer to wear a comfortable clothes rather than the smart or the modern fashion clothes.

✓ Yes, I usually prefer to wear comfortable clothes rather than smart or modern fashionable clothes.

Remove the duplicated 'prefer.' Use 'wear comfortable clothes' (no article with plural 'clothes'). 'Smart or modern fashionable clothes' is the corrected adjective order and form.

× Yes, I also prefer AT shirts in UH office.

✓ Yes, I also prefer T-shirts at the office.

'AT shirts' and 'UH office' seem to be transcription artifacts. Use 'T-shirts' and 'at the office.' Preposition 'at' is correct for location.

× Usually I wear T-shirt on Thursday and Friday in UH office days because we are not allowing UH without collar T-shirt in office.

✓ Usually I wear T-shirts on Thursdays and Fridays at the office because we are not allowed to wear collarless T-shirts at work.

Use plural 'T-shirts' and plural weekdays 'Thursdays and Fridays.' Preposition 'at the office' and 'at work' are natural. Passive structure 'we are not allowed to wear' expresses the rule. 'Collarless' is the correct adjective for T-shirts without a collar.

× Uh, not often.

✓ Not often.

This short answer is fine but remove filler 'Uh.' It directly answers the question.

× Uh, if I, if I went in some occasion or in some function, then I get a lot of time to decide what is where and what is the jewellery matching with this dress.

✓ If I go to an occasion or a function, I take a lot of time to decide what to wear and which jewellery matches the dress.

Use present tense 'go' for habitual or future events. 'Went' is past; the context asks about general behavior. 'Decide what to wear' is the correct phrase. Use 'which jewellery matches' instead of 'what is the jewellery matching.'

× Yes, I wear different kind of clothes, uh, mainly on weekdays I prefer comfortable clothes for the office, going and feeling relaxing during the work and on weekends I choose the normal clothes.

✓ Yes, I wear different kinds of clothes. Mainly on weekdays I prefer comfortable clothes for the office so I feel relaxed during work, and on weekends I choose more casual clothes.

Use plural 'different kinds of clothes.' Split into two sentences for clarity. 'Feel relaxed during work' is clearer than 'feeling relaxing.' 'Normal clothes' is vague; 'more casual clothes' is a better choice.

× Yeah. So I mainly like the blue, Navy blue color and the black color, but I have more clothes of yellow. That's it's complicated to understand, but it's fact.

✓ I mainly like blue, navy blue, and black, but I actually have more yellow clothes. It's a bit complicated, but it's true.

Remove unnecessary articles before colors. Use parallel list 'blue, navy blue, and black.' 'I have more clothes of yellow' should be 'I have more yellow clothes.' 'That's it's complicated' is incorrect; use 'It's a bit complicated, but it's true.'