Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify vocabulary (carpets → probably 'casual' or 'cardigans') and be more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details about work dress code and style. Avoid redundancy and keep within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I usually wear smart, fitted dresses because I work in a corporate firm with a formal dress code. For casual days I choose tailored blouses and pencil skirts that look professional yet comfortable.

제안: Give a concise direct answer, then add a specific reason and an example. Use correct collocations (e.g., 'hoodies', 'move around freely') and avoid repeating the same idea.

예시: I prefer casual clothes because they allow me to move around freely during my day. For example, I often wear a T-shirt and a hoodie when I'm running errands or meeting friends.

제안: Answer directly and tell a clear, chronological anecdote. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I used to borrow my brother’s shirts to wear to school') and focus on one clear point: why you like T-shirts with a specific example.

예시: Yes, I do. I used to borrow my brother’s oversized T-shirts for school, and my friends often complimented me on them. That made me more confident and enjoy wearing T-shirts instead of formal dresses.

제안: Good direct answer and strategy. Make it more natural by using clearer phrases (e.g., 'I try on outfits the night before') and be concise. Mention a specific routine and purpose (save time, feel confident).

예시: Yes, I do. To avoid last-minute stress I pick outfits the night before and try them on so I know what works. Usually I choose three or four combinations to rotate during the week.

제안: Fix small errors (e.g., 'styles of clothes' not 'book') and be more concise. State the contrast clearly, then give a brief reason and one example for each case.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear corporate dresses and blouses for work, while on weekends I choose casual outfits like jeans and a T-shirt so I can relax and run errands comfortably.

제안: Be concise and avoid repetition. State your favorite colours, then give one specific example explaining why you like them. Use natural phrases (e.g., 'sparkly purple dress' not 'gown' if informal).

예시: I like purple and pink because they suit my skin tone. For instance, a sparkly purple dress I wore to a school event received many compliments, which made me love that colour even more.

× I like to wear carpets, dresses, especially the ones that are very fitted on me because I am a corporate girl.

✓ I like to wear capes and dresses, especially those that are very fitted on me because I am a corporate girl.

The student wrote 'carpets' which is incorrect for clothing; likely meant 'capes' or another garment. Also 'the ones' is vague; use 'those' for plural garments. Improve word choice and clarity by using the correct clothing noun and matching demonstrative pronoun. Suggestion: Choose the correct clothing word (cape, coats, or skirts) and use 'those' for plural demonstratives.

× I work in a firm and we have to dress completely.

✓ I work in a firm and we have to dress formally.

'Dress completely' is unidiomatic; the intended meaning is 'dress formally' or 'dress completely' is incorrect collocation. Replace with 'formally' to convey professional attire requirement. Suggestion: Use appropriate adverb 'formally' to describe dressing style in a firm.

× I prefer wearing casual clothes because they are very comfortable and I also love to move freely.

✓ I prefer wearing casual clothes because they are very comfortable and I also love being able to move freely.

'Love to move freely' is grammatical, but to connect better with 'prefer wearing' use 'being able to move freely' for clarity. Ensure parallel structure between 'prefer wearing' and 'love being able'. Suggestion: Keep consistent verb forms for smoother sentence flow.

× Free clothes such as T-shirts and hoodie makes me feel very comfortable.

✓ Free clothes such as T-shirts and hoodies make me feel very comfortable.

Subject is plural ('T-shirts and hoodies'), so verb must be plural 'make' not 'makes'. Also 'hoodie' should be plural to match 'T-shirts' or singular with article. Suggestion: Ensure noun number matches verb number; use plural nouns when listing multiple items.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirt but never when I was leaving my brother, I would often borrow his shirt to me to school and my friends always complimented me on them, which made me enjoy wearing T-shirts more than gowns.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, but when I was living with my brother I would often borrow his shirts to wear to school, and my friends always complimented me on them, which made me enjoy wearing T-shirts more than gowns.

Multiple issues: 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' for general statement. 'Never when I was leaving my brother' is incorrect; likely 'when I was living with my brother'. 'Borrow his shirt to me to school' is wrong preposition and object; correct is 'borrow his shirts to wear to school'. Maintain plural agreement 'shirts' and clearer clause order. Suggestion: Use correct verbs and prepositions: 'living with', 'borrow his shirts to wear to school'.

× Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because sometimes I can be confused on what to wear.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because sometimes I can be confused about what to wear.

The correct preposition with 'confused' is 'about' not 'on'. Use 'confused about' when indicating the topic of confusion. Suggestion: Memorize common adjective-preposition pairs like 'confused about'.

× So instead of worrying about what to wear before going to work, I pick about 10 clothes for my wardrobe and I test them one by one at the mirror.

✓ So instead of worrying about what to wear before going to work, I pick about ten outfits from my wardrobe and try them on in front of the mirror.

'10 clothes' is unnatural; use 'ten outfits' or 'ten items of clothing'. 'Test them one by one at the mirror' is awkward; correct phrase is 'try them on in front of the mirror.' Suggestion: Use natural collocations: 'try on' for clothing and 'in front of the mirror' for location.

× Yes, I wear different styles of book on weekdays and on weekends.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and on weekends.

'Book' is incorrectly used where 'clothes' is intended. Replace with 'clothes' to match meaning. Suggestion: Carefully select nouns that match the topic (clothes, outfits, styles).

× On weekdays I wear corporate dresses to work and on weekend I wear casual dresses because I'm very comfortable with it and I can run errands with it.

✓ On weekdays I wear corporate dresses to work and on weekends I wear casual dresses because I'm very comfortable with them and I can run errands in them.

Use plural time expression 'weekends'. Pronouns must agree with plural 'dresses' so use 'them' not 'it'. Use preposition 'in' with 'run errands in' rather than 'with'. Suggestion: Match pronouns to noun number and use correct prepositions.

× I love purple, purple and pink.

✓ I love purple and pink.

The word 'purple' is repeated unnecessarily. Remove repetition for clarity. Suggestion: Avoid accidental repetition; read aloud to catch duplicates.

× They look really good on me, especially the purple gown that has a lot of glitters on it.

✓ They look really good on me, especially the purple gown that has a lot of glitter on it.

'Glitters' as a plural noun is incorrect; use uncountable 'glitter'. Keep noun-adjective order and uncountable noun usage. Suggestion: Use 'glitter' (uncountable) when referring to sparkly material.

× I remember when I wore a purple dress to school, a lot of people complimented me.

✓ I remember when I wore a purple dress to school; a lot of people complimented me.

Sentence is grammatical but punctuation can improve clarity; use semicolon or split into two sentences. No major grammar error matching list, but improved punctuation aids comprehension. Suggestion: Use clearer punctuation to separate clauses.

× That was why I love it.

✓ That is why I love it.

Mix of past explanation and present preference: use present 'is' because the reason explains the current feeling 'I love it'. Maintain tense consistency. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent—use present when stating ongoing reasons.