Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more precise and natural: use correct clothing vocabulary, avoid repetition, and combine ideas into one clear sentence followed by a supporting detail. Limit to 3–4 short sentences. For example, say the main types you wear, then explain why with a specific activity.

예시: I usually wear T-shirts, jeans and fitted shirts because they suit my daily routine. For instance, jeans and trousers are durable for commuting and tight shirts look neat for meetings, while comfortable footwear helps me walk around easily.

제안: Avoid repetition and add a brief reason and example. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons linked with a connector.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely and suit my everyday activities. For example, a hoodie and jeans are great when I need to travel or run errands.

제안: Be concise and remove fillers like 'umm'. Give one reason plus a short example or contrast. Use linking words (because, so, for example).

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are low-maintenance and comfortable. For example, I can wash them quickly and they dry fast, which is handy when I travel.

제안: Avoid self-contradictory phrasing (lots of time vs a few moments). Be specific about how long and what factors you consider, using linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I usually spend about 10–15 minutes choosing clothes because I like to look fashionable. I often pick outfits based on the weather and the plans I have that day.

제안: Use correct tense and clearer contrast words (whereas, while). Give one concrete example of weekday vs weekend outfit to make it specific.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I usually wear smart-fitted shirts and jeans for work or outings, whereas on weekends I prefer loose sweatpants and a hoodie for relaxing at home.

제안: Finish your thought and avoid hesitations. Explain why the colour appeals to you with a specific context or comparison. Keep it to one or two sentences.

예시: I like grey because it is neutral and easy to match with other colours. For example, a grey jacket works well with both bright shirts and dark jeans.

× I like to wear footed shirt and tight clothes and I also wear foodie.

✓ I like to wear fitted shirts and tight clothes, and I also wear hoodies.

The student used incorrect word forms: 'footed shirt' and 'foodie' are wrong. 'Fitted' is the correct adjective for clothing that fits closely; the noun should be plural 'shirts' to match general statement. 'Foodie' means someone who enjoys food; likely meant 'hoodie' (a casual sweatshirt). Use parallel structure and commas to join items.

× And trousers and jeans because they fit my daily activities and it's comfortable to wear.

✓ I wear trousers and jeans because they fit my daily activities and they're comfortable to wear.

The pronoun 'it' refers to a singular noun but 'trousers and jeans' are plural, so use 'they're' (they are). Also begin sentence without 'And' or attach to previous sentence; keep subject-pronoun agreement.

× I like to wear casual clothes because it's comfortable to wear and it's easy to wear and take it off, so I prefer wearing casual clothes.

✓ I like to wear casual clothes because they're comfortable and easy to put on and take off, so I prefer wearing them.

'It's' is singular; referent 'clothes' is plural so use 'they're'. Avoid repeating 'to wear'; use verbs 'put on' and 'take off'. Replace 'take it off' with 'take them off' to match plural.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirt because it's easy to wear it, umm, easy to take off, and it's easy to wash as well.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they're easy to put on and take off, and easy to wash as well.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general preference. Use 'they're' to match plural, and remove redundant 'it'. Prefer 'put on' instead of 'wear it' for putting on clothing.

× Yes, I spend lots of time choosing my clothes because I want to be fashionable. So I I take a few moments to choose which clothes I want to wear every morning.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing my clothes because I want to be fashionable, so I take a few moments every morning to decide what to wear.

Avoid repetition 'I I' and use more natural phrasing 'a lot of' not 'lots of' in formal speaking. Combine sentences with a comma and place time expression 'every morning' appropriately. Use 'decide what to wear' instead of 'choose which clothes I want to wear' for concision.

× Yes, I will different styles on the weekdays and weekend because on the week, weekdays I have to go out so I wear something fashionable and tight clothes.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends because during the week I have to go out, so I wear fashionable and tight clothes.

'Will different styles' is ungrammatical; use 'wear different styles'. Use plural 'weekdays and weekends'. 'On the week, weekdays' is redundant; use 'during the week' or 'on weekdays'. Maintain parallel structure and correct verb usage.

× But on the weekend I'm staying at home so I just wear something comfortable for me.

✓ But on the weekend I stay at home, so I just wear something comfortable.

Use simple present 'I stay' for habitual actions rather than present continuous 'I'm staying'. 'For me' is unnecessary and wordy; 'comfortable' alone suffices.

× I like wearing grey clothes because grey looks quite neutral, not too bright, not too. Not to uh.

✓ I like wearing grey clothes because grey looks quite neutral, not too bright or too dull.

Fix sentence fragments and hesitations. Complete the contrast with 'not too bright or too dull'. Avoid repeated 'not to' and filler sounds when producing final answer.