Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be slightly more concise and add a linking phrase to connect the two ideas. Mention a brief reason or an example to make the answer more specific.

예시: I usually wear casual clothes like T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable for daily activities. However, for special occasions such as birthdays or parties, I dress up in a nicer outfit like a dress to look more presentable.

제안: This answer is clear but could be improved by using a linking word and giving a specific example of when you choose smart clothes (what kind of meeting, what smart outfit).

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I value ease of movement most days. However, when I have formal meetings at work or family weddings, I choose smart outfits such as a shirt and tailored trousers to appear professional.

제안: Avoid repetition and grammatical mistakes (subject-verb agreement). Use one linking phrase and a concise reason. Be specific about fabrics or styles if possible.

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts, especially oversized cotton ones, because they are breathable and keep me cool in hot weather.

제안: Tidy the answer: give a clear topic sentence, a linking word and a specific reason (e.g., decision about matching or choosing accessories). Avoid small grammar slips and redundancy.

예시: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes because my wardrobe is varied and I like to pick outfits that match. For example, if I wake up late before work, deciding on the right top and accessories can take extra minutes.

제안: Good structure; make it slightly more specific by giving an example of weekday and weekend outfits and use a linking word like 'whereas' correctly with one concise supporting detail.

예시: Yes, I do. On weekdays I wear casual, comfortable clothes like jeans and a sweater for work, whereas on weekends I often dress up in something nicer, such as a casual dress or smart-casual shirt, when I go out with friends.

제안: Use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'beige' instead of 'base') and avoid apologetic phrasing. Give a brief reason about skin tone and maybe an example of a favorite neutral outfit.

예시: I prefer neutral colours like white, black and beige because they suit my skin tone better. For instance, I often wear a beige sweater with black trousers because the combination looks natural on me.

× I like being comfortable in my day-to-day life but in case of occasions like birthdays, parties I like to dress up a little bit so I would usually wear dresses.

✓ I like being comfortable in my day-to-day life, but on occasions like birthdays or parties I like to dress up a little, so I usually wear dresses.

Run-on and preposition use: 'in case of occasions' is unnatural; use 'on occasions' or 'on occasions like'. Also comma needed before 'but' and between clauses. 'Would usually' is redundant with 'usually'; use 'I usually wear'. This keeps present habitual tense consistent.

× But there are instances where I do like wearing smart clothes specially when I have meetings or special occasions like birthdays or weddings.

✓ But there are instances when I do like wearing smart clothes, especially when I have meetings or special occasions like birthdays or weddings.

Word choice and punctuation: 'specially' should be 'especially' in this context. 'Where' to introduce occasions is acceptable but 'when' is more natural for time. Add comma before the second clause. No article error per se but categorized as definite article ID 17 was requested to match list; the core issue is word choice and punctuation.

× Oversized T-shirts makes me feel at ease and gives me comfort and has enough space for me to breathe in.

✓ Oversized T-shirts make me feel at ease, give me comfort, and have enough space for me to breathe.

Subject-verb agreement: 'T-shirts' is plural, so verbs should be plural: 'make', 'give', 'have'. Also streamline phrasing: avoid ending with 'breathe in' and use parallel structure with commas.

× My wardrobe has variety of clothes and I tend to wake up late in the morning.

✓ My wardrobe has a variety of clothes, and I tend to wake up late in the morning.

Missing article: 'variety of' usually takes an article 'a variety of'. Also add comma before 'and' joining independent clauses.

× So when I have to get ready for my work, it takes a lot of time for me to choose clothes.

✓ So when I have to get ready for work, it takes me a long time to choose clothes.

Preposition and phrasing: 'for my work' is better as 'for work' in this context. Use 'it takes me a long time' rather than 'it takes a lot of time for me' for natural word order.

× On weekdays I usually wear comfortable clothes, whereas on weekends I hang out with my friends and family so I often dress up.

✓ On weekdays I usually wear comfortable clothes, whereas on weekends I hang out with friends and family, so I often dress up.

Missing comma before coordinating conjunction 'so' linking clauses improves clarity. 'My friends and family' is acceptable, but dropping 'my' makes the phrase more natural; both are correct. This fix focused on punctuation and clause separation.

× I usually like clothes that are neutral in color such as white, black or base.

✓ I usually like clothes that are neutral in color, such as white, black, or beige.

Wrong word 'base' should be 'beige'. Also add commas to separate items and after introductory phrase.

× I do not prefer colorful clothes as they do not look good on me and my skin tone usually would go better with some neutral colors.

✓ I do not prefer colorful clothes because they do not look good on me, and my skin tone usually looks better with neutral colors.

Pronoun and modal misuse: 'would go better' is awkward; use 'looks better' to state habitual preference. Also replace 'as' with 'because' for clarity and remove 'some' which is unnecessary. Ensure verbs agree with singular 'skin tone' (looks).