Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and directly answer with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., repeating categories and the comfort idea). Aim for 2–4 sentences, and use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'classic', 'casual', 'sportswear').

예시: I like a mix of classic, casual and sportswear because each suits different occasions. For example, I wear classic pieces to work for a polished look, casual outfits for weekends, and sportswear for exercise because they are comfortable and functional.

제안: Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give a brief reason and an example. Remove hesitations and filler words ('umm', repeated phrases). Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes most of the time because they make me feel confident and relaxed. However, I will choose smart clothes for formal events; for instance, I wear a tailored shirt and chinos to job interviews because they look professional yet comfortable.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, then two specific examples that show how you adapt T-shirts for different looks. Use linking phrases ('for example', 'on the other hand') and more precise vocabulary ('smart-casual', 'printed', 'oversized').

예시: Yes, I like T-shirts because they are versatile. For example, I pair a plain, fitted T-shirt with a blazer and trousers for a smart-casual look, while I wear oversized or printed T-shirts with jeans for relaxed weekends.

제안: Answer directly, then explain briefly with a specific example of when you spend more time. Keep sentences tight and avoid repetition ('specific items' repeated).

예시: Not usually, because I shop regularly at one or two stores that match my style. However, I spend more time searching if I need something for a special occasion, such as a wedding, when I look for a formal dress or suit.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence stating whether styles differ, then give one reason and one specific example. Reduce hesitations and repeated phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

예시: It depends, but mostly no because I work from home and prefer comfortable clothes every day. For example, I usually wear joggers and a T-shirt during the week and the same outfit on relaxed weekends unless I go out to meet friends, when I change into smart-casual clothes.

제안: Start with a clear statement of favorite colours, then give specific reasons and one example. Avoid filler words and broken sentences; combine short fragments into full sentences. Use precise adjectives (e.g., 'bright', 'neutral', 'flattering').

예시: I prefer black and neutral tones because they match my personal style and are easy to pair. However, I feel more confident in bright colours sometimes; for instance, a light beige or white shirt brightens my complexion and makes me look more put-together.

× I love to wear all kind of clothes whether it's classic, casual or even active wear.

✓ I love to wear all kinds of clothes, whether they're classic, casual, or even activewear.

The phrase 'all kind' should be plural 'all kinds' to match plural noun 'clothes'. Also 'it's' (it is) is incorrect for plural categories; use 'they're' (they are). 'Activewear' is one word. Use commas to separate items for clarity.

× So either it's a classic or.

✓ So either it's a classic or a casual style.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks the second parallel element after 'or'. Complete the contrast by providing a parallel noun phrase; this fixes a sentence fragment and clarifies meaning.

× There is a rule I always follow when it comes to selling either it's whether it's a classic, smart, casual or even active.

✓ There is a rule I always follow when choosing clothes, whether they're classic, smart, casual, or even activewear.

The original mixes verbs and includes 'selling' incorrectly; context is about wearing or choosing clothes. 'Whether it's' is wrong for plural categories; use 'whether they're'. 'Activewear' should be one word. Replacing 'selling' with 'choosing clothes' makes sentence coherent.

× I prioritize comfort ever over anything because when I feel comfortable in my clothes, I always feel most confident.

✓ I prioritize comfort above everything else because when I feel comfortable in my clothes, I feel most confident.

The phrase 'ever over anything' is ungrammatical. Use 'above everything else' or 'over anything else'. Also 'always feel most confident' is awkward; 'feel most confident' is sufficient and more natural.

× So if I when if I go for umm smart closes, I prefer. I prefer and it's comfortable.

✓ So if I go for smart clothes, I prefer those that are comfortable.

The original has disfluent repetitions and a fragment 'I prefer.' Combine ideas into one clear sentence. Correct spelling 'closes' to 'clothes' and ensure the object 'those that are comfortable' completes the thought.

× Yes, T-shirts are very convenient to wear and you can dress it up and you can dress it down.

✓ Yes, T-shirts are very convenient to wear, and you can dress them up or dress them down.

T-shirts is plural, so pronoun should be 'them' not 'it'. Also use parallel structure 'dress them up or dress them down' for clarity.

× Depends on the occasion and where you're actually going.

✓ It depends on the occasion and where you're going.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a subject; add 'It' to form a full sentence. 'Actually' is unnecessary and can be omitted for conciseness.

× Small T-shirt to fit small into smart clothes and umm, classic ones and printed T-shirt.

✓ Small T-shirts fit well with smart and classic outfits, while printed T-shirts...

Original mixes singular/plural and lacks clarity. Use plural 'T-shirts' and match verbs 'fit' accordingly. The sentence was incomplete; suggest continuation for printed T-shirts. Ensure noun-adjective agreement and parallel structure.

× Oversized ones fit more into casual one.

✓ Oversized ones fit more into casual styles.

'Casual one' is incorrect; 'styles' (plural) matches 'ones' and is the correct noun. Use 'casual styles' to express category.

× I do have one to two stores that I can consider that they are my style, so it's it's not that hard to find my style in these stores.

✓ I do have one or two stores that match my style, so it's not hard to find clothes I like there.

Use 'one or two' not 'one to two'. Remove redundant 'that they are'. 'Match my style' is clearer than 'they are my style'. Simplify repetition 'it's it's' and make object explicit.

× However, if I'm looking for a specific items for a for a specific occasion, I do tend to look more and search more for it.

✓ However, if I'm looking for a specific item for a specific occasion, I tend to search more for it.

Use singular 'a specific item' not 'a specific items'. Remove duplicated 'for a'. 'Look more and search more' is repetitive; 'tend to search more' is concise.

× I work from home, so clothes it's not that priority for me when it comes to working environment.

✓ I work from home, so clothes aren't a high priority for me in the work environment.

Original has subject-verb confusion 'clothes it's not that priority'. Use plural verb 'aren't' with 'clothes' and rephrase 'a high priority' for natural English. 'Work environment' better than 'working environment' here.

× So the, the clothes I wear, I'll almost identical in the weekdays and the weekends because whenever I'm going out, I go out for fun and, uh, go out to, to meet friends or to.

✓ So the clothes I wear are almost identical on weekdays and at weekends because when I go out, it's usually for fun or to meet friends.

'I'll almost identical' is ungrammatical; use 'are almost identical'. Use 'on weekdays' and 'at weekends' (or 'on weekends') for correct prepositions. Remove filler words and complete the purpose 'to meet friends'.

× I prefer black and UMM because it fits my personality so well.

✓ I prefer black because it fits my personality so well.

Original 'black and UMM' is unclear; likely intended 'black and ...' If only 'black' is meant, remove 'and UMM'. 'Black' as a color takes singular verb 'fits' when referring to the color as a concept. If another color was intended, specify it.

× However, I do tend to look more confident and more actually put together when I wear UMM bright clothes.

✓ However, I tend to look more confident and more put together when I wear bright clothes.

Remove 'do' (optional) and filler 'actually'. 'UMM' is a filler and should be omitted. 'Put together' is the correct phrase; simplify for clarity.

× Light clothes like beige or white. They elevate it a lot my skin tone.

✓ Light clothes like beige or white elevate my skin tone a lot.

Original is a fragment 'Light clothes like beige or white.' Combine sentences and correct word order: 'elevate my skin tone a lot'. Remove extra 'it' which is unneeded.