Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct topic sentence stating the kinds of clothes you prefer, then add one brief supporting detail (reason or example). Keep it natural and under five sentences.

예시: I prefer wearing casual clothes like jeans and hoodies because they are comfortable for daily activities. For example, I usually choose a denim jacket and sneakers when I go out with friends because they are practical and stylish.

제안: Again you echoed the question rather than answering. State your preference clearly (comfortable/casual or smart), then give a short reason and an example using a linking word such as "because" or "so".

예시: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because I value ease of movement during the day. For instance, I often wear chinos and a soft sweater to work so I can stay comfortable while still looking neat.

제안: Do not repeat the question. Give a direct yes/no or qualified answer and add a brief reason or situation when you wear T-shirts. Use a linking word like "because" or "when".

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are versatile and easy to pair with different outfits. I usually wear T-shirts at home or when I meet friends for a casual outing.

제안: Avoid mirroring the question. Answer directly and add a short supporting detail about how much time you spend and why, using linking words such as "usually" or "because".

예시: No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes; usually I pick outfits the night before because it saves time in the morning. However, I take more care choosing clothes for special occasions like interviews.

제안: Don't repeat the examiner. State whether you do or don't, then give a concise reason and an example of each style using linking words such as "while" or "but".

예시: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I wear smart-casual clothes for work, while on weekends I prefer relaxed outfits like hoodies and jeans for comfort. For example, I wear dress shirts and trousers to the office but T-shirts and sneakers when I go out with friends.

제안: This answer is brief but relevant. Improve by making the sentence more natural ("I like black for my clothes"), then add a supporting detail explaining why and when you choose black, and include a linking word such as "because" or "so". Keep it under five sentences.

예시: I prefer black for my clothes because it looks slimming and is easy to match with other items. For instance, I often choose a black coat or black trousers for work since they look professional and require little coordination.

× I like black colour in clothes.

✓ I like the colour black in clothes.

The original sentence uses 'black colour' in an unnatural order and omits the definite article 'the' commonly used when referring to a specific colour in this context. Reordering to 'the colour black' is more natural. Alternatively, you can say 'I like black clothes.' Suggestion: use 'I like the colour black in clothes.' or 'I like black clothes.'