Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words like "but" or "however" correctly and avoid filler words (uh).

예시: I usually wear casual, comfortable clothes like T-shirts during the workweek because they are practical. However, on weekends I prefer more stylish or feminine outfits for outings and photos, such as dresses or blouses, to look and feel nicer.

제안: Answer directly and correct sentence structure. Begin with a clear statement of preference and then give one specific example and a linking phrase like "for example" or "however."

예시: It depends on the situation: I usually wear comfortable clothes for studying at school. However, if I have an important meeting or conference, I choose smart clothes such as a shirt or blouse to look professional.

제안: Provide complete sentences and specific reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid questions that confuse the listener. Keep to two or three sentences max.

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wear. They are practical for everyday activities and do not require much effort to match with other clothes.

제안: Be consistent in tense and clearer about when you spend time choosing clothes. Give one clear reason and an example of when you spend time selecting outfits.

예시: I don't spend much time choosing clothes for daily wear, but I take extra time when shopping. For example, when I buy new outfits I look for pieces that are both cute and practical so they are easy to wear every day.

제안: Give a concise contrast using linking words like "on weekdays" and "on weekends." Mention one or two specific items or activities to illustrate the difference.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear casual, comfortable clothes like jeans and T-shirts for study or work. On weekends I dress up more with nicer shoes and accessories and sometimes wear makeup when I go out for photos or social events.

제안: Answer directly with clear reasons and one example. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words like "however" or "sometimes" to show contrast.

예시: I usually prefer black and white because they suit me and are easy to match. However, sometimes I add a bright color, such as red or yellow, to make my outfit more lively and eye-catching.

× Well, I think on my work day I prefer to some casual and comfortable clothes like T-shirt, but on the weekend and I prefer to some more, uh, beautiful and uh, exquisite clothes that make me more beautiful, look more beautiful and cute.

✓ Well, I think on work days I prefer some casual and comfortable clothes like T-shirts, but on weekends I prefer more beautiful and exquisite clothes that make me look cuter.

Errors: unnecessary preposition 'on' before 'my work day' (use plural 'work days'); incorrect use of 'to' after 'prefer' (prefer takes a noun or verb, not 'to' + noun); singular/plural consistency for 'T-shirt/T-shirts'; redundant phrasing 'more, uh, beautiful and uh, exquisite' simplified; awkward phrase 'make me more beautiful, look more beautiful and cute' corrected to 'make me look cuter'. Suggestion: use 'work days' and 'weekends' for habitual times, omit 'to' after 'prefer' when followed by a noun, use plural for general items, and simplify repetitive adjectives.

× Well, I think it depends on what kind of situation I will meet today.

✓ Well, I think it depends on what kind of situation I will encounter today.

Error: unnatural verb choice 'meet' with 'situation'; use 'encounter' for facing a situation. Also 'depends on what kind of situation I will encounter today' maintains future reference correctly. Suggestion: choose verbs that collocate with 'situation' (encounter, face, be in).

× If it's very usually they like just go to school for study, I will choose a comfortable clothes.

✓ If it's a usual day when I just go to school to study, I will choose comfortable clothes.

Errors: 'very usually' is incorrect adverb combination; word order and structure unclear. 'They like just go to school' is irrelevant pronoun and tense; changed to first person 'I' consistent with rest. 'A comfortable clothes' mixes article and plural; remove 'a' and use plural 'comfortable clothes'. Suggestion: use 'a usual day' or 'usually' and ensure article-number agreement.

× But it's some conference, I have to meet some important.

✓ But if it's a conference where I have to meet someone important, I will wear smart clothes.

Errors: sentence fragments 'it's some conference' and 'I have to meet some important' lack necessary nouns and connectors. 'Some important' needs a noun ('person' or 'guest'). Also original answer did not finish thought about clothing choice; correction completes idea to match the question. Suggestion: provide full clause 'meet someone important' and connect cause and effect with 'if' and result.

× Of course, I really love wearing T-shirts. Very comfortable and convenient. You can just wear it and let it go and you don't need to make up and look more exquisite to match it right? And if you are, wear other things you need to make up.

✓ Of course, I really love wearing T-shirts. They are very comfortable and convenient. You can just put them on and not have to do much makeup to look good. If you wear other outfits, you may need to do more makeup.

Errors: pronoun 'it' used for plural 'T-shirts' (use 'they'/'them'); sentence fragment 'Very comfortable and convenient' made complete by linking to subject. 'Put on' is more natural than 'wear it' in this context. 'You don't need to make up and look more exquisite to match it' is awkward—clarified as 'not have to do much makeup to look good'. 'If you are, wear other things you need to make up' unclear; corrected to conditional about wearing other outfits. Suggestion: match pronouns to number, avoid fragments, use natural collocations ('put on', 'do makeup').

× Well, I think I spent a lot of time choosing clothes when I buy it and I'm very practical person.

✓ Well, I think I spend a lot of time choosing clothes when I buy them, and I'm a very practical person.

Errors: inconsistent tense 'spent' (past) vs 'when I buy' (present) — use present 'spend' for habitual action; pronoun 'it' for plural 'clothes' should be 'them'; missing article before 'very practical person' — add 'a'. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense for habits and match pronouns to nouns.

× I want to close that look exquisite and cute, but also it's very casual and convenient for me to wear it every day.

✓ I want clothes that look exquisite and cute, but are also casual and convenient for me to wear every day.

Errors: 'close that look' incorrect word choice and order; 'it's very casual' refers to 'clothes' so use plural 'are'; 'wear it' pronoun mismatch—use no pronoun or 'them'. Suggestion: use 'clothes that look' and ensure adjective agreement with noun number.

× Yes, of course if it's on weekdays I will prefer some casual and comfortable clothes and if it's on weekend I prefer some exquisite shoes and I and I also will make up and go outside to take some nice photos of that.

✓ Yes, of course. On weekdays I prefer casual and comfortable clothes, and on weekends I prefer more elegant shoes. I also do my makeup and go outside to take some nice photos.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'on' with 'it's on weekdays' streamlined to 'On weekdays'; 'weekend' should be plural 'weekends' for habitual statements; 'some exquisite shoes' awkward—'more elegant shoes' is natural; repeated 'I and I' removed; 'make up' as verb should be 'do my makeup'. Suggestion: use plural time expressions for habits, avoid repetition, and use natural collocations.

× Well, usually I prefer to choose black and white clothes because I look very good at that color and and and sometimes I will use some very bright color to make my outfit more more exquisite.

✓ Well, usually I prefer to choose black and white clothes because those colors suit me well, and sometimes I use some very bright colors to make my outfit more eye-catching.

Errors: 'prefer to choose' is wordy—'prefer' or 'choose' is enough; 'look very good at that color' incorrect preposition and singular 'that color'—use 'suit me well' or 'look good on me' and plural 'colors'; repetition 'and and and' and 'more more' removed; 'exquisite' better replaced by 'eye-catching' or 'stylish' in this context. Suggestion: simplify verb phrases, use 'suit' or 'look good on', match number of 'color/colors', and avoid repetition.