Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. I prefer casual clothes) then give one or two specific reasons with brief examples. Avoid redundancy and correct minor grammar (e.g. "comfortable" not "comforting"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer casual clothes, like jeans and T-shirts, because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I wear T-shirts when I hang out with friends or relax at home, and I wear a bodysuit to the gym for better support.

제안: Give a clear direct answer then support with one concise reason and one specific example. Fix grammatical errors (e.g. "I feel more confident"; "relaxable" → "comfortable"; "it enhances"). Avoid repeating the same idea.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes because they make me feel more confident. For instance, wearing relaxed outfits helps me focus at work and express my personal style, so I usually choose comfort over formal wear.

제안: Answer directly and avoid repetition. One topic sentence plus one specific detail or short example is sufficient. Use varied vocabulary (e.g. "a range of T-shirts" instead of repeating "I love wearing them").

예시: Yes, I do. I have a wide range of T-shirts in my wardrobe because they are comfortable and easy to style, so I usually wear them when I go shopping or meet friends.

제안: Be precise and correct unclear phrases. Start with a clear statement about how much time you spend, then give a brief reason and a specific example. Avoid unclear brand or item names unless relevant and spelled correctly (e.g. "hoodies").

예시: Not usually — I only spend more time choosing clothes for important events because I want to look presentable. On regular days I pick comfortable items like hoodies and jeans that are quick to wear.

제안: Provide a direct contrast between weekday and weekend wear, with one specific example for each. Use clearer phrasing (e.g. "work clothes" → "business casual" if applicable) and avoid vague phrases like "style myself in different styles."

예시: Yes. During weekdays I usually wear work clothes like a blouse and trousers or business-casual outfits, while on weekends I dress more casually in jeans, dresses or T-shirts depending on my plans.

제안: Clarify and avoid contradictory statements. Start by stating your general preference, then highlight the exception (red) with a reason and one specific example. Correct grammar and phrasing (e.g. "red is my favourite colour"; "the style matters more than colour").

예시: Generally I don't have a strict colour preference, but I do favour red—it's my favourite colour and many of my tops are red. However, I usually choose clothes based on style and fit rather than colour.

× Wearing clothes depends upon the situation.

✓ What I wear depends on the situation.

The original uses a gerund phrase 'Wearing clothes' awkwardly as the subject. Rewriting with 'What I wear' makes the sentence natural and fits the present simple pattern for habitual actions. Also replace 'depends upon' with the more common 'depends on.' Suggestion: use 'What I wear' + present simple for preferences.

× Normally I prefer the casual clothing such as jeans and T-shirts because they're really comfortable and we can wear them for many purposes such as hanging out with friends when we are comforting at home and when I'm going to gym, I like to wear body suits.

✓ Normally I prefer casual clothing such as jeans and T-shirts because they're really comfortable and I can wear them for many purposes such as hanging out with friends, relaxing at home, and when I'm going to the gym I like to wear bodysuits.

Multiple issues: unnecessary article 'the' before 'casual clothing' and awkward phrases. 'We can wear' shifts person; keep consistent first person 'I can wear.' 'Hanging out with friends when we are comforting at home' is incorrect: use 'relaxing at home.' 'Going to gym' needs article 'the gym.' 'Body suits' should be 'bodysuits.' Maintain present simple for habitual actions.

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I found myself more confident when I am wearing the relaxable clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I feel more confident when I wear relaxed clothes.

Tense mismatch: 'I found' (past) with general preference should be present 'I feel.' 'When I am wearing' is wordy; use simple present 'when I wear.' 'Relaxable' is incorrect adjective; use 'relaxed' or 'comfortable.' Maintain consistent present-tense for habits.

× Also it enhance my personality so I know who I am when I'm wearing the clothes I like.

✓ Also it enhances my personality, so I know who I am when I'm wearing clothes I like.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it enhance' should be 'it enhances.' 'The clothes I like' can be shortened to 'clothes I like.' Add comma before 'so.' Use present simple for general truths.

× I love wearing T-shirts as I earlier told you that they are very comfortable and I have a variety of T-shirts in my wardrobe and I love wearing them while hanging out with my friends or going for shopping.

✓ I love wearing T-shirts, as I mentioned earlier; they are very comfortable and I have a variety in my wardrobe, and I like wearing them when I hang out with my friends or go shopping.

Use 'mentioned earlier' rather than 'earlier told you.' Avoid repeated 'I love wearing' by varying verbs. 'Going for shopping' is incorrect; use 'go shopping.' Use simple present for habitual actions.

× I usually spend time on wearing when I have to attend something important because I want to present myself on the regular days.

✓ I usually spend time choosing what to wear when I have to attend something important because I want to present myself well on regular days.

Incorrect phrase 'spend time on wearing' -> 'spend time choosing what to wear.' 'Present myself on the regular days' is unclear; use 'present myself well on regular days.' Keep present simple for habitual actions.

× I just want to wear something comfortable and relaxing like the normal LOTIC hoods.

✓ I just want to wear something comfortable and relaxed, like normal loose hoodies.

'Relaxing' (causing relaxation) is wrong; use 'relaxed' to describe clothes. 'LO TIC hoods' appears to be a misspelling; likely 'loose hoodies.' Replace with clear, common phrase 'loose hoodies.' Maintain adjective-noun order.

× On most of the weekdays I spend on my work so I have to wear the work clothes but on weekends I tend to style myself in different styles so I wear dresses, jeans, T-shirt and other clothes which I have in my wardrobe.

✓ On most weekdays I am at work, so I have to wear work clothes, but on weekends I like to dress differently, so I wear dresses, jeans, T-shirts and other clothes I have in my wardrobe.

Awkward phrasing 'spend on my work' -> 'am at work.' 'Wear the work clothes' -> 'wear work clothes.' Use plural 'T-shirts.' Simplify 'style myself in different styles' to 'dress differently.' Maintain consistent present simple for routines.

× I don't have color preferences when it comes to clothes, but red always takes my heart because red is my favorite colour.

✓ I don't have color preferences when it comes to clothes, but red always steals my heart because red is my favorite color.

Phrase 'takes my heart' is nonstandard; use 'steals my heart.' Spelling 'colour' vs 'color'—choose one consistently; here 'color' used earlier. Keep present simple.

× So you can find a lot of variety of Reds in my wardrobe.

✓ So you can find a wide variety of reds in my wardrobe.

'A lot of variety of Reds' is awkward. Use 'a wide variety of reds' and lowercase 'reds.' 'A lot of' is informal; 'a wide variety of' is clearer.

× But the colour doesn't matter for me, the style matters.

✓ But color doesn't matter to me; style matters more.

'Doesn't matter for me' should be 'doesn't matter to me.' Use semicolon or connective and add 'more' for emphasis. Keep consistent 'color' spelling.

× The style I picked should be good colours.

✓ The style I pick should have good colors.

Tense inconsistency: 'picked' (past) vs general statement—use present 'pick.' 'Should be good colours' is unclear; better 'should have good colors' or 'should suit the colors.' Keep nouns consistent and clear.