Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (umm, uh) and minor grammar errors (cloth → clothes). Add one supporting detail with a linking word. Keep under five sentences.

예시: I like to wear different kinds of clothes, but most of the time I choose comfortable, soft clothes. For example, I often wear cotton T-shirts and loose trousers because they are breathable and easy to move in.

제안: Answer directly (say which you prefer), remove hesitations and fix verb forms. Use one reason introduced by a linking word such as 'because' or 'so'. Keep it to one or two sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they suit my daily activities and help me feel more confident. For instance, wearing a soft jacket and jeans lets me move freely at work.

제안: Be concise and finish your sentences. Use specific comparisons and a linking word (for example, because or so). Avoid unfinished clauses. Provide a brief example of when you wear T-shirts.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are more comfortable than formal, three-piece outfits and allow me to move easily. For example, I usually wear a T-shirt when I study or do practical tasks because it keeps me relaxed and focused.

제안: Clarify your meaning and correct vocabulary (plot → outfits/what to wear). Give one clear reason and a short example. Avoid fillers and keep it to two sentences.

예시: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing what to wear because I find it difficult to match styles and colors. For example, I usually ask my mother for advice because she often buys clothes for me.

제안: Give a clear contrast between weekday and weekend styles using linking words (on weekdays... but on weekends...). Provide a specific example of each style and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear simple, comfortable clothes for classes or work, but on weekends I choose more stylish outfits when I go out with friends. For example, I wear a plain shirt and jeans during the week, but a fashionable jacket and sneakers on Saturday nights.

제안: State your preference briefly and give a reason or an example. Avoid repeating the same phrase; use varied vocabulary (e.g., 'black suits me' or 'I prefer dark colours'). Keep it to one or two sentences.

예시: My favorite colour is black because it looks neat and matches easily with other items. For example, I often wear a black coat or black jeans since they are practical and stylish.

× Umm, many different kinds of cloth I like to wear, but most of the time I umm wear comfortable and soft type clothes.

✓ Umm, I like to wear many different kinds of clothes, but most of the time I wear comfortable and soft clothes.

The word 'cloth' refers to material (uncountable) while 'clothes' is the correct plural for garments. Also word order was awkward; moving the verb 'I like' after the subject and removing 'type' (unnecessary) makes the sentence natural. Suggestion: use 'clothes' for garments and keep subject-verb order: 'I like to wear many different kinds of clothes.'

× Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes cause uh com uh, comfortable clothes are suits me and I when I uh, were comfortable clothes, I feel more confident confident.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because comfortable clothes suit me, and when I wear comfortable clothes, I feel more confident.

'Cause' should be 'because' in formal speech. 'Are suits me' mixes auxiliary and main verb and has wrong agreement; the correct verb is 'suit' (present simple, plural subject 'clothes' so verb is 'suit'). 'Were' is past tense; context requires present tense 'wear'. Remove repeated words. Suggestion: use 'suit' for 'clothes suit me' and keep present simple: 'when I wear...'.

× Yes, I like to wear T-shirts because uh, T-shirts are more comfortable than three piece outfits. When I wear T-shirts, I can move easily and focus on my work without.

✓ Yes, I like to wear T-shirts because T-shirts are more comfortable than three-piece outfits. When I wear T-shirts, I can move easily and focus on my work without distraction.

'Three piece' should be hyphenated 'three-piece' as a compound adjective. The final clause 'without.' is incomplete; it needs a noun like 'distraction' to complete the idea. Suggestion: finish comparisons and clauses fully: 'focus on my work without distraction.'

× Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing plot because, uh, choosing cloth is umm, very tough for me. Always my uh, clothes bought for me, my mother.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because choosing clothes is very tough for me. My clothes are always bought for me by my mother.

'Plot' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'clothes'. 'Cloth' should be 'clothes' (plural). Passive voice sentence 'Always my clothes bought for me, my mother' is ungrammatical; it should be 'My clothes are always bought for me by my mother.' Use correct passive construction with auxiliary 'are' and preposition 'by'. Suggestion: use 'clothes' and form passive: 'My clothes are always bought for me by my mother.'

× Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays. Uh, because, uh, I like to wear stylish clothes and umm, when I go with my friend, I prefer stylish.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays because I like to wear stylish clothes, and when I go out with my friends, I prefer stylish clothes.

'When I go with my friend' is awkward; use 'go out with my friends'. 'I prefer stylish' lacks a noun; 'stylish' is an adjective and needs 'clothes' as the noun. Also plural 'friends' is more natural for general statement. Suggestion: include the noun after the adjective: 'prefer stylish clothes' and use natural phrase 'go out with my friends.'

× My favorite color is black, that's why, uh, black color clothes are very beautiful and I like black color clothes.

✓ My favorite color is black; that's why black clothes are very attractive and I like wearing black.

'Black color clothes' is redundant and awkward; use 'black clothes' or 'clothes in black'. Repeating 'I like black color clothes' is redundant. Use adjective 'attractive' or 'beautiful' but pair it naturally. Suggestion: say 'black clothes' and vary phrasing to avoid repetition: 'I like wearing black.'