Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and direct: state the types of clothes you like (e.g., casual, sporty, traditional) and give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid fillers and repetition. Keep it to 1–3 concise sentences and use a linking word if adding a detail.

예시: I like casual, comfortable clothes such as jeans and hoodies because they’re practical for my daily activities. For example, I often wear a hoodie and jeans when going to class or meeting friends.

제안: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., because, so). Avoid hesitation and vague claims. Keep sentences short and coherent.

예시: I prefer smart clothes because they make me feel more confident and presentable. For example, when I wear smart trousers and a shirt, I feel ready for both work and social events.

제안: Give a direct yes/no answer followed by a concise reason or example. Remove hesitations and expand slightly with a linking word (e.g., because, when) to make it coherent.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially for exercise, because they are lightweight and allow me to move comfortably when I play sports.

제안: Give a clear short answer, then explain your routine with specific details. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and avoid disorganized phrasing. Limit to two or three sentences.

예시: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I usually plan outfits the night before. For example, I put my daily clothes in one pile and special items in another so I can decide quickly in the morning.

제안: Answer directly, then give a clear contrast with specific examples using linking words (e.g., whereas, but). Use correct adjectives and avoid vague phrases like “very good clothes.”

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear simple, casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts for work or school, whereas at the weekend I dress up more, for example wearing a nicer shirt or dress for going out.

제안: This short answer is fine, but you can improve by adding a brief reason or example in one extra sentence using a linking word (e.g., because, so). Keep it concise.

예시: I prefer white and black because they’re versatile and easy to match. For instance, a black jacket goes well with most outfits and a white shirt looks clean and smart.

× I like Pandora because the, the culture, the, uh, they have most of the clothes, uh, Pandora.

✓ I like Pandora because the culture there has most of the clothes from Pandora.

The speaker used 'they' ambiguously for 'Pandora' and omitted a clear subject for 'have'. Use 'there' to refer to the place and make the clause grammatical. Also added 'from' to show origin.

× Smart clothes because, uh, it is more, uh, I can't do it, uh, more things that I can, uh, play, I can do, uh, what I want to do. I can go more so I can go everywhere.

✓ I prefer smart clothes because they let me do more activities; I can move around and go places comfortably.

Original is fragmented and unclear. Replaced vague pronoun 'it' with 'they' to agree with 'clothes' (plural), combined ideas into a coherent sentence explaining why smart clothes are preferred.

× Yup, uh, when I do, uh, my sport, I like to, uh, have a T-shirt.

✓ Yes, when I do my sport, I like to wear a T-shirt.

Use the verb 'wear' rather than 'have' to describe putting on clothing. 'Have' is correct in some contexts but not natural here. Also 'do my sport' is acceptable informal phrasing; kept tense.

× No, quickly, because I put my clothes, uh, that, uh, daily clothes and side and my, uh, another clothes and side.

✓ No, not really; I choose my daily clothes quickly and set other clothes aside.

Original is disfluent and confusing. Clarified meaning: choosing daily clothes quickly and placing other clothes to the side. Rephrased for natural English.

× Yes, and weekdays I have simple clothes, but in the weekends it's a very good clothes.

✓ Yes. On weekdays I wear simple clothes, but on weekends I wear nicer clothes.

Use 'on' with weekdays/weekends, and 'clothes' is plural so 'a very good clothes' is incorrect. Replaced with 'nicer clothes' to be grammatical and natural.

× What colour clothes do you like? Student: White and black.

✓ I like white and black clothes.

Answer lacked a verb and natural phrasing. Adding 'I like' makes it a complete sentence and clarifies the response to the question about colour preferences.