Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more direct and use a clear topic sentence, reduce redundancies and correct grammar. Add one specific detail about the types of clothes you tend to pick and why.

예시: I don't stick to a single style; I usually choose whatever is convenient. For example, I often pick jeans and a simple top because they are comfortable and suit most occasions.

제안: Start with a full sentence and use linking words to connect ideas. Correct verb forms and avoid repetition ('event' twice). Give a brief example of when you wear smart clothes.

예시: It depends on the situation. For quick errands like grocery shopping I wear casual clothes, but for important occasions such as presentations or formal dinners I choose smart clothes, like a blazer and dress shoes.

제안: Use correct subject-verb agreement and be more concise. Add a specific example of a T-shirt style you like and why.

예시: Yes, I do. T-shirts are very comfortable and versatile; for instance, I like graphic tees because they add personality while staying casual and easy to wear.

제안: Use full sentences and clearer linking words. Explain briefly what 'pick slowly' means—considering combinations or trying outfits—to add specificity.

예시: It depends on how much time I have. If I'm in a hurry I grab something quickly, but when I have time I try different combinations and choose an outfit that looks best.

제안: Correct grammar (singular/plural), use linking words and provide a specific contrast between weekday and weekend outfits with examples.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I dress more formally for school or work, for example wearing a shirt and trousers, while on weekends I prefer relaxed clothes like sweatpants and hoodies.

제안: Avoid repetition and filler phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence naming your preferred color and a concise reason, plus a brief example of how you wear it.

예시: I prefer white because it's simple and easy to match. For instance, I often pair a white blouse with dark jeans or a skirt for a clean look.

× Depend on the situation I'm going.

✓ It depends on the situation I'm going to.

Missing subject and auxiliary verb; informal fragment. Add 'It' as subject and 'depends' as main verb to form a complete present simple sentence that matches ongoing context. Also include 'to' after 'going' to complete the verb phrase 'going to (a place)'.

× So usually when I just went out for grocery I would wear only casual clothes.

✓ So usually when I just go out for groceries I wear only casual clothes.

Tense inconsistency: 'went' (past) conflicts with habitual meaning. Use present simple 'go' and 'wear' for habitual actions. Also use plural 'groceries' and remove conditional 'would' which is unnecessary for routines.

× But if I have an event or an important event I wear smart clothes.

✓ But if I have an event or an important event, I wear smart clothes.

Missing comma for clarity; sentence otherwise uses present simple correctly for general condition. No tense change needed. Suggest adding comma after the dependent clause.

× Yes, because T-shirts is one of the most comfortable kind of clothes to wear nowadays and they come out with a lot of style and they get creative every day.

✓ Yes, because T-shirts are one of the most comfortable kinds of clothing to wear nowadays, and they come in many styles; designers get more creative every day.

Subject-verb agreement: 'T-shirts' is plural, so use 'are' not 'is'. 'Kind' should be plural 'kinds' to match 'one of the...kinds'. 'Clothes' is better as uncountable 'clothing'. 'Come out with' is informal; use 'come in' or 'come in many styles'. Clarify second clause and use present simple for general truth.

× Depend on how much time I got that day.

✓ It depends on how much time I have that day.

Fragment lacking subject and correct verb; use 'It depends' and present tense 'have' to match the following conditional. 'Got' is informal; use 'have' for correct present-tense reference.

× If I'm in a hurry I will just choose one and rush out, but if I have a lot of time I will pick slowly.

✓ If I'm in a hurry, I just choose one and rush out, but if I have a lot of time, I pick more slowly.

When describing habitual behavior, present simple is preferred: 'I just choose' and 'I pick'. Also add commas after conditional clauses and use 'more slowly' instead of 'pick slowly' for natural phrasing.

× Yes, because weekdays is for an important occasion and I have to go to study.

✓ Yes, because weekdays are for important obligations and I have to go to classes.

Subject-verb agreement: 'weekdays' is plural, so use 'are'. 'An important occasion' is unnatural here; use 'important obligations' or 'work'/'classes'. 'Go to study' is non-native; use 'go to classes' or 'study' depending on meaning.

× Meanwhile weekends is my relaxing time so I just get to wear something comfortable.

✓ Meanwhile, weekends are my relaxing time, so I get to wear something comfortable.

Add comma after 'Meanwhile', correct subject-verb agreement 'weekends are', and simplify 'just get to wear' to 'get to wear' for natural phrasing.

× I don't usually have a choice that much to choose cause because my wardrobe is kinda limited but I would go with white because it is simple and easy to match with other pants or skirt.

✓ I don't usually have many choices because my wardrobe is kind of limited, but I would choose white because it is simple and easy to match with other pants or a skirt.

Use 'many choices' (quantifier) instead of 'a choice that much to choose'. Remove duplicated 'because' and replace colloquial 'kinda' with 'kind of'. Use 'choose' instead of 'go with' for clarity. Use 'match with' → 'match (with) other pants or a skirt'; add article 'a' before 'skirt'.