Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., "those types" → "that type" or "those types of clothes"), and avoid unclear words like "low". Add one specific example and use a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes because they make me feel confident. For example, I usually wear loose T‑shirts and joggers at home and when I run errands, so I can relax and move easily.

제안: Give a direct answer first (e.g., "It depends on the occasion") and then provide clear, specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and correct vocabulary errors ("cord sets", "frogs cars" are unclear). Use linking words such as "however" or "but" to contrast choices.

예시: It depends on the occasion. For work I wear my uniform—trousers and a polo—because the office requires it, but when I go out with friends I choose smart casual clothes like jeans and a nice shirt.

제안: Be more natural and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "T‑shirts are made of comfortable fabric" rather than "very good fabric"). Avoid repeating the same phrase; vary sentence structure and add a brief example with a linking word like "for example" or "so".

예시: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are usually made of soft cotton and very comfortable. For example, I often wear a T‑shirt and jeans when I go shopping or work from home because it keeps me relaxed.

제안: Answer directly and correct common errors ("an event", "I sometimes am choosy"). Use linking words ("however", "but") and give one clear, specific example of when you spend more time choosing clothes.

예시: It depends on the event. For example, if I attend a wedding I sometimes spend an hour deciding between a dress or a smart outfit, but on ordinary days I choose clothes quickly.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence contrasting weekdays and weekends. Fix vocabulary errors ("loads" unclear) and be specific about the uniform and weekend choices. Use a linking word like "whereas" or "while" to connect the two ideas.

예시: Yes. On weekends I usually wear casual clothes like loose T‑shirts and joggers to relax, whereas on weekdays I wear my work uniform—trousers and a collared shirt—because the office requires it.

제안: Give a concise topic sentence about your favourite colour and avoid redundancy. Use correct grammar ("my favorite color is black"; "it enhances my appearance") and provide one specific reason and a brief example of when you wear black.

예시: I like many colours, but my favourite is black because it makes me look smart and elegant. For example, I often wear a black coat to formal events because it matches other clothes and looks professional.

× I really like to wear comfortable clothes because I feel very confident in those type of clothes.

✓ I really like to wear comfortable clothes because I feel very confident in those types of clothes.

The noun 'type' is singular but refers to 'those', a plural demonstrative, so 'types' (plural) is required for agreement. Use 'types of clothes' when referring to more than one kind. Suggestion: Match demonstratives and noun number (those + types).

× So on daily basis I usually wear low and T-shirts which make me feel relaxed and comfortable.

✓ So on a daily basis I usually wear low-rise pants and T-shirts, which make me feel relaxed and comfortable.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'daily basis'. 'Low' alone is unclear; likely 'low-rise pants' or 'low-cut tops' are intended. Also add comma before the relative clause and ensure plural agreement. Suggestion: Use 'on a daily basis' and clearer noun phrases.

× Yes, I prefer to wear all type of clothes but it's depends upon the occasion.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear all types of clothes, but it depends upon the occasion.

Use plural 'types' to match 'all' and 'it depends' (not 'it's depends') because 'depends' is the verb and requires subject 'it'. Remove contraction misuse. Suggestion: Use 'all types of clothes' and 'it depends on the occasion.'

× On typical days when I go to my office for work condition I wear I wear comfortable clothes such as cord sets or trousers because these are the uniform of my work.

✓ On typical days when I go to my office for work, I wear comfortable clothes such as cord sets or trousers because these are the uniforms for my job.

Repetitive 'I wear I wear' removed. Inserted comma. 'Uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' or refer to 'the uniform' with singular noun; here 'these' requires plural 'uniforms'. 'For my job' or 'of my workplace' is clearer than 'of my work'. Suggestion: Avoid repetition and ensure pronoun-number agreement.

× And whenever I go outside I usually wear frogs cars because it looks.

✓ And whenever I go outside I usually wear something casual because it looks comfortable.

Original phrase 'frogs cars' is meaningless; likely a mispronunciation. 'It looks' is incomplete; needs an adjective like 'comfortable' or 'appropriate'. Suggestion: Use clear vocabulary and complete predicates.

× Yes, I really like to wear T-shirts because T-shirts are very good fabric and moreover I feel very comfortable whenever I wear T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I really like to wear T-shirts because T-shirts are made of good fabric, and moreover I feel very comfortable whenever I wear them.

'Very good fabric' is grammatically odd; use 'made of good fabric' or 'have good fabric'. Replace repeated 'T-shirts' with pronoun 'them' to avoid redundancy. Suggestion: Use correct collocations like 'made of' and pronouns to avoid repetition.

× For instance on daily basis, when I'm at home and when I go outside for shopping and any other work condition, I always prefer to wear T-shirt.

✓ For instance, on a daily basis, when I'm at home or when I go out shopping or do other work, I always prefer to wear T-shirts.

Add article 'a' before 'daily basis'. Use plural 'T-shirts' for general preference. 'Go outside for shopping' better as 'go out shopping'. 'Any other work condition' unclear; replaced with 'do other work'. Suggestion: Use natural collocations and plural for general statements.

× When I go to a event, that time I sometime it may be a choosy for me because that time I started think that what should I wear such as skirts, jeans or trouser.

✓ When I go to an event, at that time I sometimes may be choosy because I start thinking about what I should wear, such as skirts, jeans, or trousers.

Use 'an event' (vowel sound). 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Remove extra words 'it may be a choosy' and replace with 'may be choosy'. Tense consistency: 'start thinking' or 'I start to think' rather than 'started think'. 'Trouser' should be plural 'trousers'. Suggestion: Use correct articles, adverbs, and plural forms, and keep tense consistent.

× But it's totally depends upon situation or a event on daily basis I'm not.

✓ But it totally depends upon the situation or the event; on a daily basis I'm not (choosy).

'It's totally depends' is incorrect: use 'it totally depends'. Add 'the' before 'situation' and 'an event' needs article; better 'the event' or 'an event'. Sentence was incomplete; add the omitted adjective 'choosy' for clarity. Suggestion: Complete sentences and fix subject-verb structure.

× Yes, when on my weekends I always wear comfortable clothes such as loads and T-shirts because I feel very comfortable after wearing these type of clothes.

✓ Yes, on my weekends I always wear comfortable clothes such as loose tops and T-shirts because I feel very comfortable wearing these types of clothes.

Remove extra 'when'. 'Loads' is incorrect; likely 'loose' (loose tops). 'After wearing' is awkward; use 'feeling comfortable wearing'. Use plural 'types' to match 'these'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions and correct vocabulary.

× But on my weekdays due to my working condition and it's a casual formality that every staff member should wear proper uniform.

✓ But on weekdays, due to my working conditions and because it is required, every staff member should wear the proper uniform.

'It's a casual formality' is awkward; clarify with 'because it is required'. 'Every staff member' is fine but 'staff' can be collective; keep 'the proper uniform'. Suggestion: Use clear connectors and appropriate determiners.

× So on typical days I wear uniform.

✓ So on typical days I wear a uniform.

Use an article 'a' before 'uniform' when referring to a single set of clothing. If meaning the general concept, 'wear uniforms' (plural) could also work. Suggestion: Add appropriate article or pluralize.

× Well, I well I really like all the colors but the black is my most loving color because I feel that when I wear black color it enhance my personality and I'm looking so much attractive and elegant when I wear black coats, black clothes.

✓ Well, I really like all colors, but black is my favorite color because I feel that when I wear black it enhances my personality and I look very attractive and elegant when I wear black coats or black clothes.

Remove duplicated 'I well'. Use 'favorite' instead of 'most loving'. Do not repeat 'color' after 'black'; 'wear black' is natural. 'Enhance' needs third-person singular 'enhances' to agree with subject 'it'. Use 'look' not 'I'm looking' for general statements and 'very' instead of 'so much'. Suggestion: Simplify phrases, fix subject-verb agreement, and use natural collocations.

× So it's depends upon situation when I go to a any occasion I.

✓ So it depends upon the situation; when I go to any occasion, I choose my outfit accordingly.

'It's depends' should be 'it depends'. 'A any occasion' is ungrammatical; use 'any occasion' without 'a'. Original sentence is incomplete; complete the thought by stating what is done. Suggestion: Remove extra articles and finish the sentence with the intended action.