Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid contradictions (T-shirts are not 'too formal'), and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words if adding details. Keep to 1–4 sentences.

예시: I like to wear T-shirts because they are comfortable and casual. For example, I often wear a cotton T-shirt when I go shopping or meet friends, since it lets me move freely and stays cool in warm weather.

제안: Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, use correct vocabulary ("casual", not "cash on"; "T-shirt"), and give a clear specific example. Avoid unrelated or unclear words ("run Iraq"). Keep to 1–4 concise sentences and use a linking word like "because" or "for example."

예시: I prefer wearing casual clothes because they are comfortable and practical. For example, I usually wear jeans and a T-shirt when I go out with friends because they allow me to move easily and are suitable for everyday activities.

제안: Answer directly and briefly, then add one specific reason and an example or comparison. Correct small grammar errors ("T-shirts" plural, "they are" rather than "it's"). Keep it natural and not repetitive.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and let me move easily. For example, I prefer a soft cotton T-shirt when I travel or exercise because it dries quickly and stays comfortable.

제안: Give a clear direct answer (Yes/No), then explain briefly with specific reasons. Fix grammar: "I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I like to try them on and think about what to wear for different occasions." Use linking words like "because" and limit to 1–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I like to try items on and check how they match other pieces. For instance, before going to a meeting I often try different shirts and jackets to make sure my outfit looks appropriate.

× I like to wear the T-shirt is convenient and too formal to go anywhere like a shopping or go to the like a seminar or meeting. Yes.

✓ I like to wear T-shirts because they are convenient; they are not too formal for going shopping or attending a seminar or meeting.

This sentence has multiple structure and word choice problems (maps to Sentence structure errors and Incorrect use of articles). The singular 'the T-shirt' and added clause 'is convenient and too formal' conflict: 'too formal' is opposite of 'convenient'; likely intention is 'not too formal'. Use plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. Remove unnecessary 'the' and reorder clauses for clarity. Also use parallel gerunds 'going shopping' and 'attending a seminar'. Suggested improvement: Decide the intended meaning, use plural for general statements, keep clauses parallel, and avoid contradictory adjectives.

× I prefer to wear cash on clothes because they are comfortable and practical for everyday activity.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes because they are comfortable and practical for everyday activities.

The student wrote 'cash on' which is a mispronunciation/wrong spelling of 'casual'. Also 'activity' should be plural as a general noun 'activities'. Use 'casual clothes' as the correct adjective+noun form. Suggested improvement: Learn common adjective forms for clothing and use plural nouns for general routines.

× For example, jeans and AT shirt let me move easily when I go out with friend or run Iraq.

✓ For example, jeans and a T-shirt let me move easily when I go out with friends or go for a run.

Several errors: 'AT shirt' is incorrect—should be 'a T-shirt'. Missing article 'a' before 'T-shirt'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' for general meaning. 'Run Iraq' seems like mis-speech; likely 'go for a run' or 'run'. Rearranged to natural English. Suggested improvement: Use 'a' before singular countable nouns, pluralize when speaking generally, and use correct collocations like 'go for a run' or 'go running'.

× Yes, I like to wear the T-shirts because it's easy to move and more comfortable and practical for everyday activity. Yes.

✓ Yes, I like to wear T-shirts because they are easy to move in and more comfortable and practical for everyday activities.

Using 'the T-shirts' implies specific shirts; general preference needs 'T-shirts' without 'the'. Pronoun must agree in number: 'T-shirts' plural so use 'they are' not 'it's'. Also use the preposition 'in' with 'move' ('move in') and plural 'activities'. Suggested improvement: Match pronouns to noun number, omit unnecessary definite articles for general statements, and use correct prepositions.

× Actually, yes, I'll I spend a lot of time to choosing the course because I need to try to wear it and think about I what I can miss and meet with the new course where I can using or wearing this coat.

✓ Actually, yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I need to try them on and think about what I can match them with and which occasions I can wear a coat for.

This sentence has many structure and word choice errors. 'I'll I spend' is incorrect — remove extra 'I'll'. Use gerund 'choosing' without 'to'. 'Choosing the course' should be 'choosing clothes'. 'Try to wear it' should be 'try them on' (phrasal verb for clothing). 'Think about I what I can miss and meet with the new course' is unintelligible; likely intended 'think about what I can match them with and the occasions where I can wear this coat'. Use plural/singular consistency and correct collocations. Suggested improvement: Simplify sentences, use common collocations (try on, match with, occasions), and keep subject and verbs in correct order.