Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., don’t repeat "western clothes"). Also correct small errors ("my best choice will be" → "I prefer").

예시: I prefer western clothes. For example, I like their modern styling and the frequent fashion innovations, which make it easy to mix and match outfits for different occasions.

제안: Give a direct answer first, then add a clear reason with linking words. Avoid redundancy ("comfortable" and "casual" repeated). Use correct word order and collocations ("activewear" not "active wear").

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely. For instance, I often wear activewear like sports T-shirts and shorts when I'm relaxing or exercising.

제안: Answer directly, correct grammar and be specific. Fix errors ("I have a large collection"; "my favourite is printed/photo T-shirts"). Provide one short reason or example to support your answer.

예시: Yes, I wear T-shirts often. I have a large collection, and my favourite type is printed T-shirts because they are comfortable and express my personality.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Replace vague phrases ("specific likings") with precise ones ("specific preferences"). Use linking words to give an example and correct typos ("activewear").

예시: Usually I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I have clear preferences. For example, I usually pick activewear for exercise and polo T-shirts for casual outings.

× Well, I like different types of clothes to wear, but my best choice will be western clothes.

✓ Well, I like different types of clothes to wear, but my best choice is western clothes.

The use of 'will be' suggests a future decision but the speaker is stating a current preference. Use present simple 'is' for general preferences. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual or general statements about preferences (I prefer / my best choice is).

× In Pakistan, people wear eastern and western clothes, but I like to wear western clothes because of styling and new innovations in fashion.

✓ In Pakistan, people wear eastern and western clothes, but I like to wear western clothes because of the styling and new innovations in fashion.

The noun phrase 'styling and new innovations' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to specific aspects of fashion in general. Use 'the styling' to indicate particular style features. Suggestion: include 'the' before collective nouns when specifying particular aspects.

× I like to wear comfortable clothes and more and often I also prefer to wear casual clothes.

✓ I like to wear comfortable clothes, and often I also prefer to wear casual clothes.

The phrase 'more and often' is incorrect; 'more' is unnecessary and disrupts adverb placement. 'Often' should appear before the verb phrase 'prefer'. Suggestion: remove 'more' and place 'often' before 'prefer' or after auxiliary verbs.

× So in comfortable clothes I like to wear active wear and sport T-shirts, shorts, that's my choice.

✓ So when wearing comfortable clothes, I like to wear activewear and sports T-shirts and shorts; that's my choice.

Several issues: 'in comfortable clothes' is better expressed as 'when wearing comfortable clothes.' 'Active wear' is usually one word 'activewear.' 'Sport T-shirts' should be 'sports T-shirts.' Use conjunctions or punctuation to connect clauses. Suggestion: use standard noun forms and clearer clause structure.

× Yeah, I like to wear T-shirts a lot. I have different collection and I most the most liked by me is photo shirt.

✓ Yeah, I like to wear T-shirts a lot. I have a different collection, and my favorite is a photo-printed shirt.

Problems: missing article 'a' before 'different collection'; awkward passive-like phrase 'most the most liked by me' should be 'my favorite.' 'Photo shirt' is unclear; 'photo-printed shirt' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: use 'my favorite' for preferences and include correct articles.

× Usually I don't take much time in choosing clothes because I have a specific likings, for example for active year and for some polo T-shirts.

✓ Usually I don't take much time choosing clothes because I have specific preferences, for example for activewear and for some polo T-shirts.

Errors: 'take much time in choosing' is better as 'take much time choosing' (verb pattern). 'a specific likings' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'specific preferences.' 'active year' is a typo for 'activewear.' Suggestion: use correct noun forms and verb patterns, and check for typos.