Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix tense/word form errors (e.g., "wearing" → "wear").

예시: I usually wear T-shirts, jeans and sports shoes because they suit my style and are very comfortable. For example, I can move freely when I walk or ride a bike, so I prefer casual clothes for everyday activities.

제안: Answer directly then give one clear reason with specific example. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example") and avoid repetition. Correct phrasing: "suitable for me" and "I feel better in them."

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they let me focus on tasks without feeling restricted. For example, when I study or do housework I wear a T-shirt and jeans so I can move easily and stay relaxed.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence then one specific supporting detail. Fix grammar and word order (e.g., "after work" not "after office time", "I can move freely"). Keep to 1–3 sentences max.

예시: Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts. After work I often change into a T-shirt because it is comfortable and lets me move freely when I exercise or relax at home.

제안: Answer directly, explain briefly with a specific reason and give one example. Correct grammar and phrasing: "choose good clothes for myself" and "I ask my wife for advice." Avoid unfinished sentences.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I find it difficult to decide what suits me. For example, I usually ask my wife for advice when shopping, and she helps me pick outfits quickly.

× I like to wearing T-shirt, jeans and a sports shoes because it suits me and also comfortable for also comfortable for me.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts, jeans and sports shoes because they suit me and are comfortable for me.

The phrase 'like to wearing' mixes infinitive and gerund; use either 'like to wear' or 'like wearing' (Grammar Problem Type 8). 'T-shirt' and 'a sports shoes' need pluralization and article removal: 'T-shirts' and 'sports shoes' (Type 1: singular/plural). 'It suits me' should agree with plural subject 'they suit me' (Type 27: subject-verb agreement). 'also comfortable for also comfortable for me' is redundant and missing verb; use 'and are comfortable for me' to supply the verb 'are' (Type 26: sentence structure). Suggestion: use 'I like wearing...' and ensure subject-verb agreement and no repetition.

× This type of dress is casual and easy to feel like.

✓ This type of dress is casual and makes me feel comfortable.

'Easy to feel like' is ungrammatical and likely intended to express a resulting feeling. Use a correct verb phrase 'makes me feel comfortable' to convey effect (Type 6). Also keep clear subject-verb structure (Type 26). Suggestion: express feelings with 'make/feel' collocation.

× I like to wear comfortable and casual clothes because this type of dress is very suitable for me and also comfortable to do homework, any type of work and I feel better to I feel better to me.

✓ I like to wear comfortable and casual clothes because this type of dress is very suitable for me and comfortable when I do homework or other kinds of work; it makes me feel better.

Original repeats phrases and uses 'comfortable to do homework' which requires 'comfortable when I do homework' (Type 8: verb+-ing/verb form choice and Type 11: preposition use). 'I feel better to I feel better to me' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'it makes me feel better' to show cause and effect (Type 26). Suggestion: avoid repetition and use 'when' to indicate timing.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirt very much.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts very much.

Use plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally (Type 1: singular/plural). The gerund 'wearing' is acceptable, so keep it (Type 8). Suggestion: pluralize common count nouns when referring to general preference.

× I always when after office time I love wearing T-shirt because it is very comfortable and freely to move also to the.

✓ After work I always love wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable and allow me to move freely.

Original has misplaced time expression 'always when after office time' and missing or incorrect verb phrases 'freely to move also to the.' Reorder to 'After work I always...' and use 'allow me to move freely' for correct verb and adverb placement (Type 26 and Type 20: adverb placement). Also pluralize 'T-shirts' and use 'they are' for agreement (Type 1 and Type 27). Suggestion: put time expressions at start or end consistently and use 'allow/let me' + verb.

× No, I do not spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I can't choose a good clothes for me.

✓ No, I do not spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I can't choose good clothes for myself.

'a good clothes' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'good clothes' (Type 1 and Type 22: article errors). Use reflexive pronoun 'myself' for actions affecting the subject (Type 15: reflexive pronoun). 'Can't choose' is fine present tense but use 'for myself' not 'for me.' Suggestion: remove incorrect article and use 'myself.'

× So I always get help to choose a clothes for me from my wife, she always.

✓ So I always get help from my wife to choose clothes for me; she always helps me.

Word order is awkward 'get help to choose a clothes for me from my wife' and 'she always.' Reorder to 'get help from my wife to choose clothes for me' and complete the second clause 'she always helps me' to be grammatical (Type 26). Also remove article 'a' before 'clothes' (Type 22/1). Suggestion: place source of help ('from my wife') before the infinitive phrase and finish the sentence with a complete clause.