Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms (e.g., use 'comfortable' not 'comfortability'; 'play sports' or 'do exercise' not 'filling in').

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes because they let me move freely. For example, I often wear sportswear like tracksuits or shorts when I play badminton or go jogging, but I choose different outfits depending on the place I’m visiting.

제안: Remove confusing or irrelevant phrases and give a direct answer. Begin with a clear statement of preference, then provide one specific reason and a brief exception using a linking word. Correct tense and pronoun errors.

예시: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they allow me to move easily and exercise, for example when I play volleyball. However, I wear smart clothes for work or formal events.

제안: Be clear and avoid errors in tense and word choice. Give one concise reason and a specific example of what you pair T-shirts with. Use linking words to connect ideas and limit to three sentences.

예시: Yes, definitely. I like T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to style. For example, I often wear a T-shirt with jeans or a skirt when I go out casually.

제안: Clarify and organize your answer. Start with a direct statement, then give two clear, specific situations as examples using linking words. Avoid awkward phrases and incorrect vocabulary (e.g., 'lover eyes' -> 'my boyfriend’s eyes').

예시: It depends. If I’m just going to a quick errand or the library, I choose simple clothes, but if I’m going out with my boyfriend, I take more time to dress nicely because I want to look attractive.

× Well, I think that I prefer the clothes that bring the comfortability for me to move or do some exercise, like to filling in some sports such as badminton, volleyball or some jogging and but it also depends on location.

✓ Well, I think I prefer clothes that are comfortable for me to move in or to exercise in, such as playing sports like badminton, volleyball, or going jogging, but it also depends on the location.

The original sentence uses the nonstandard noun 'comfortability' instead of the adjective 'comfortable' (issue 13). It also uses incorrect verb forms ('to filling in') and awkward prepositions. Use 'comfortable' to describe clothes and the structure 'comfortable for me to move in' or 'comfortable to exercise in'. Replace 'to filling in some sports' with 'such as playing sports' and 'some jogging' with 'going jogging'. Use 'but' without 'and' before 'it also depends on the location' for grammatical coherence.

× Obviously, as I've known him before, I prefer comfortable clothes because this helps me to move easily, to do some sports like badminton or volleyball, and I think that I just wear smart clothes and when I go to work or I go to some.

✓ Obviously, as I have known it for a while, I prefer comfortable clothes because they help me move easily and play sports like badminton or volleyball. I only wear smart clothes when I go to work or to formal events.

The original sentence has sentence structure problems (issue 26): 'as I've known him before' is unclear and likely incorrect pronoun, and 'this helps me' should agree with plural 'clothes' (subject-verb agreement related to structure). Also 'I think that I just wear smart clothes and when I go to work or I go to some' is ungrammatical and incomplete. Clarify 'I have known it' or better 'I have preferred' and correct 'this helps me' to 'they help me' to match plural 'clothes'. Complete the thought: 'I only wear smart clothes when I go to work or to formal events.'

× Yes, definitely. I loved wearing T-shirts when I was in high school because those are so very comfortable and easy to wear. It can miss my first anything I have like even a skirt or a jeans or maybe a leggings.

✓ Yes, definitely. I loved wearing T-shirts when I was in high school because they were very comfortable and easy to wear. They matched anything I had, like a skirt, jeans, or leggings.

The sentence mixes tenses and uses incorrect pronouns and idioms (issue 5 and 12). Use past tense consistently when talking about high school: 'loved' and 'were'. Replace 'those are so very comfortable' with 'they were very comfortable'. 'It can miss my first anything I have' is ungrammatical; the intended meaning is that T-shirts matched any bottoms, so use 'They matched anything I had'. Also correct plural forms 'jeans' and 'leggings' and remove unnecessary articles.

× I think that it depends. For example if I just go to eat out library symbol and fast, but if I go to hang out with my boyfriend for example, I tend to wear beautiful clothes because I always want to be beautiful and gorgeous in my lover eyes.

✓ I think it depends. For example, if I just go out to eat quickly, I dress casually, but if I go out to hang out with my boyfriend, I tend to wear nicer clothes because I want to look beautiful and gorgeous in my lover's eyes.

The original contains incorrect and unclear prepositions and phrases (issue 11): 'go to eat out library symbol and fast' is meaningless; likely intended 'go out to eat quickly'. Use 'go out to hang out with my boyfriend'. Also correct possessive use: 'in my lover eyes' should be 'in my lover's eyes' (possessive). Replace 'beautiful clothes' with 'nicer clothes' for natural collocation. Ensure adverb placement 'eat quickly' rather than 'and fast'.