Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: まず文法と語順を直して、より自然な短い文を使う練習をしてください。主題文（I like...）で始め、理由や具体例を続けると良いです。語彙は“comfortable”“simple”“tight”など適切な単語を使えているので、冠詞や代名詞、語順（例えば “I like wearing simple, comfortable clothes” のように）に注意してください。また冗長な表現を避け、文は最大5文に収めることを意識しましょう。

예시: I like wearing simple, comfortable clothes. I prefer neutral colors like black and soft shades like pink. I also avoid tight clothes because they feel restrictive.

제안: 語彙の誤用（"girls"など）や名詞の形に注意してください。まず主題文で好みをはっきり述べ、その後に具体例を挙げると良いです。接続詞（for example, also, because）を適切に使って文の論理的流れを作ってください。不要な繰り返し（like … like）やあいまいな言い回しを減らしましょう。

예시: I definitely prefer casual and comfortable clothes. For example, I often wear sweatshirts and loose trousers. I also like jeans, but only when they are not too tight.

제안: 自然な表現に直すと同時に、文法（"no sleeves"→"sleeveless tops"、"more freedom"→"feel freer"）を正してください。対比を表すときは適切な接続詞（but, however）を使い、理由を簡潔に述べましょう。語句の選択を正確にすることで明瞭さが増します。

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, but I tend to prefer sleeveless tops because they make me feel freer and cooler in hot weather.

제안: 時制と表現の自然さに注意してください（"used to spend a lot of time choosing clothes"、"I don't spend much time now"）。また同じ意味を繰り返す冗長さを避け、簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。理由（online shopping）を述べる際は一文で明確に伝えると効果的です。

예시: I used to spend a lot of time choosing clothes, but now I don't spend much time because online shopping apps save me time.

× I like wear simple clothes and it is important how much comfortable is this.

✓ I like wearing simple clothes and it is important how comfortable this is.

The verb like is normally followed by a gerund (verb+ing) when expressing enjoyment of activities (like wearing). Also the clause 'how much comfortable is this' has incorrect word order and an unnecessary 'much'; correct form is 'how comfortable this is'. Suggestion: use 'like wearing' and place adjective after subject and verb: 'how comfortable this is.'

× I like black color and pink.

✓ I like black and pink.

When naming colors, the noun 'color' is unnecessary after a color adjective. Say 'I like black and pink.' If emphasizing 'the color', use 'the color black', but simple listing of colors uses adjectives. Suggestion: list colors as 'black and pink.'

× And also I don't like tight clothes.

✓ I also don't like tight clothes.

Starting with 'And also' is redundant and informal; use 'I also don't like' or 'I don't like tight clothes either.' Suggestion: avoid redundant conjunctions and choose one connector ('also' or 'either').

× Definitely, I like to wear casual and comfortable girls.

✓ Definitely, I like to wear casual and comfortable clothes.

The word 'girls' is incorrect here; context requires 'clothes.' Also 'like to wear' is acceptable, but consistent gerund 'like wearing' could be used. Suggestion: replace 'girls' with 'clothes' and use 'casual and comfortable clothes.'

× For example I like sweat and loose pants.

✓ For example, I like sweatshirts and loose pants.

The noun 'sweat' alone is unclear; likely intended 'sweatshirt' or 'sweatpants.' 'Sweatshirt' fits with 'loose pants.' Suggestion: choose correct clothing nouns like 'sweatshirt' or 'sweatpants' and add a comma after 'For example.'

× Umm also I like jeans as well if it's not too tight.

✓ I also like jeans if they are not too tight.

Jeans is a plural noun, so use 'they are' not 'it's'. Replace 'it's' with 'they are' or 'they're'. Suggestion: match pronoun number to noun: 'jeans... they are not too tight.'

× Yeah, of course I like wearing T-shirts, but actually I wear no sleeves more than T-shirts because that makes me more freedom.

✓ Yeah, of course I like wearing T-shirts, but actually I wear sleeveless tops more than T-shirts because they make me feel freer.

'No sleeves' is not natural; use 'sleeveless tops'. 'That makes me more freedom' is ungrammatical: use 'they make me feel freer' or 'I feel more free.' Also plural agreement: 'they make'. Suggestion: use natural noun phrases and correct comparative 'freer' or phrase 'feel more free.'

× Yeah, actually I used to spend a lot of time to choose clothes, but nowadays I don't use much time because of the online shopping app.

✓ Yeah, actually I used to spend a lot of time choosing clothes, but nowadays I don't spend much time because of online shopping apps.

After 'used to' describing habitual past, use base verb (used to spend) is okay; 'spend a lot of time to choose' is incorrect—use gerund 'choosing'. In present 'don't use much time' is unnatural; use 'don't spend much time.' 'the online shopping app' is too specific; use plural 'apps' or 'online shopping.' Suggestion: use 'choosing' and 'spend time' and adjust noun to 'online shopping apps.'

× Umm, the applications save my time right now.

✓ The apps save me time now.

'The applications' is formal; 'apps' or 'online apps' is natural. 'Save my time' is not idiomatic; use 'save me time.' 'Right now' can be 'now.' Suggestion: use 'apps save me time now.'