Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (um, uh, repeated pronouns), and give one or two specific supporting details. Use a linking phrase to connect the general preference with examples.

예시: I prefer vintage-style clothes, especially white dresses and blouses. For example, I often choose a white lace dress for special occasions because it looks elegant and timeless.

제안: Correct the unclear phrase and give a clear reason with a linking word. Avoid vague or incorrect words (e.g., 'actors'); instead explain how casual clothes affect you. Keep it to two or three sentences max.

예시: I prefer wearing casual clothes because they allow me to move freely. For instance, loose jeans and a soft T-shirt let me walk and sit comfortably throughout the day.

제안: Make the sentence grammatically consistent and add a brief reason. Use a linking word to show cause and effect, and avoid redundancy (e.g., 'feel more comfortable and to move easily' -> 'feel comfortable and move easily').

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts with wide-leg pants because they are comfortable and let me move easily. For example, I often pair a cotton T-shirt with linen wide-leg trousers when I travel.

제안: Provide a full, grammatically correct response with a clear topic sentence and a specific reason or example. Use linking words like 'especially' appropriately and avoid sentence fragments.

예시: Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes, especially when I'm going to a party or hanging out with friends. For example, I usually try on several outfits to find one that matches the occasion and feels comfortable.

× I prefer wearing casual clothes because they make me actors.

✓ I prefer wearing casual clothes because they make me feel like an actor.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'actors' (a plural noun) after 'make me', which requires an object complement. The correct structure is 'make me feel like + noun' or 'make me feel + adjective.' Use singular 'an actor' if referring to oneself. Suggestion: use 'make me feel like an actor' or 'make me feel free.'

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirt on wide leg pants because they make me feel more comfortable and to move easily.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts with wide-leg pants because they make me feel more comfortable and able to move easily.

Preposition 'on' is incorrect with clothing combinations; use 'with' to describe what is worn together. 'T-shirt' should be plural when speaking generally: 'T-shirts.' 'Wide leg' should be hyphenated as 'wide-leg' when used as a compound adjective. Also the parallel structure after 'make me feel' requires an adjective or adjective phrase; instead of 'and to move easily' use 'and able to move easily.'

× Yes, especially when I'm going to a party or when I am hang out with my friends. Really takes a lot of time.

✓ Yes, especially when I'm going to a party or when I am hanging out with my friends. It really takes a lot of time.

The verb 'hang' needs the present participle 'hanging' after 'am' (present continuous). The second sentence lacks a subject; 'Really takes a lot of time' should include the subject 'It' to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: use 'I am hanging out' and include the subject 'It' for clarity.