Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (umm, like), and give one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Use specific vocabulary (e.g., jeans, chinos, cotton T-shirts).

예시: I usually wear casual clothes, such as cotton T-shirts and long pants. For example, I often choose jeans and a plain T-shirt because they are comfortable and easy to wash.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence then add concise reasons with linking words. Remove repetitions and fillers, and use more precise phrases (e.g., 'move around easily', 'stay cool'). Keep it within three sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits. This is because when I go out with friends I want to move around easily and stay cool. For instance, I usually wear loose T-shirts and lightweight trousers.

제안: Answer directly in the present tense and give a clear reason. Avoid confusing self-corrections. Use one supporting detail or example to clarify why you like T-shirts.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I can wear a T-shirt for relaxing at home or when meeting friends, and I can layer it with a jacket if it gets colder.

제안: Respond with a clear topic sentence and provide organized reasons using linking words. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'going on a date', 'feel prettier than usual') and avoid sentence fragments. Limit to two or three sentences.

예시: Yes, I often spend time choosing clothes because I want to look nice for special occasions. For example, when I go on a date I choose an outfit that makes me feel prettier than usual, while for hanging out with friends I pick something more relaxed.

× Sometimes I like to wear like umm, T-shirt with long pants.

✓ Sometimes I like wearing T-shirts with long pants.

Use gerund after 'like' to express preference; 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. Remove filler words. Suggestion: 'like' + verb-ing for habits or preferences.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because umm because when I go out with my friends around around I usually choose casual simple clothes so I can move easily and that that's not make me hot.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because when I go out with my friends, I usually choose simple casual clothes so I can move easily and they do not make me hot.

Tense is present; keep consistent present simple. 'that that's not make me hot' is incorrect subject-verb agreement and structure; use 'they do not make me hot'. Remove repeated fillers and duplicate words. Add commas for clarity.

× Yes, I did, because I feel T-shirt is very useful for me, for my. Hari, Hari what?

✓ Yes, I do, because I feel T-shirts are very useful for me.

Question asked in present (Do you like wearing T-shirts?). Use present simple 'do' not past 'did'. Also 'T-shirt is' should be plural and agree with plural: 'T-shirts are'. Remove unclear fragments. Keep pronoun agreement.

× Yes, of course, because sometimes I want going to dating with my boyfriend.

✓ Yes, of course, because sometimes I want to go on a date with my boyfriend.

After 'want' use the infinitive 'to go', not 'going'. 'Going to dating' is ungrammatical; use 'go on a date'. Maintain correct collocation.

× I want to feel more pretty than. Usually and then sometimes is if I go hang out with my friends.

✓ I want to feel prettier than usual, and sometimes when I go hang out with my friends I also choose nicer clothes.

Original has fragments and incorrect comparative. Use comparative 'prettier' and complete the sentence. 'Than usually' should be 'than usual'. Combine clauses with conjunctions and use consistent tense and word order.