Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your response more concise and varied: start with a clear topic sentence, give one specific example of a trend you follow, and use a linking phrase to explain why. Avoid repeating the same idea (fashionable/trends/new clothes).

예시: I usually wear trendy clothes because I enjoy keeping up with seasonal styles. For example, this year I’ve been wearing oversized blazers and low-top sneakers, which make my outfits look modern and put-together.

제안: Provide a direct topic sentence, add a brief contrasting detail with a linking word, and give a short reason or example to support your preference. This will make the answer clearer and slightly longer without redundancy.

예시: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes, especially when I study. However, I’ll choose smart clothes for presentations; for everyday study sessions I usually wear soft joggers and a hoodie because they help me focus.

제안: Answer directly then expand with a specific reason or example and a linking word to connect ideas. You can compare T-shirts and sweatshirts briefly to show judgment and vocabulary variety.

예시: Not really — I prefer sweatshirts to T-shirts because sweatshirts are warmer and cozier. For instance, I often wear a thick sweatshirt on chilly mornings instead of a thin T-shirt.

제안: Make the answer clearer and more natural: give a direct topic sentence, then explain what you mean by ‘quality of my time’ with a specific routine or example. Avoid vague phrases and be concise (max 5 sentences).

예시: No, I don’t spend a lot of time choosing clothes. Instead, I quickly pick outfits I know work well, and when I shop I spend time selecting a few high-quality pieces that I can mix and match each week.

× I prefer wearing comfortable clothes because when I am studying I want to feel comfortable.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable clothes because when I study I want to feel comfortable.

Use simple present 'I study' rather than present continuous 'I am studying' for habitual actions. The sentence describes a general habit (studying in general), so use present simple. Change removes awkwardness and matches the habitual context.

× No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes, but I do use quality of my time to choose good and fashionable clothes for my daily wear.

✓ No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes, but I do make good use of my time to choose nice and fashionable clothes for my daily wear.

The phrase 'use quality of my time' is incorrect. The correct idiom is 'make good use of my time'. Also 'good and fashionable' is slightly awkward; 'nice and fashionable' or 'good, fashionable' is clearer. This corrects the prepositional/idiomatic error and improves natural phrasing.