Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and reduce hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea (comfortable) twice and fill pauses like 'umm'.

예시: I prefer comfortable, breathable clothes because I move around a lot during the day. For example, I usually choose loose cotton tops and lightweight trousers so I stay cool and don't feel restricted.

제안: Answer directly, reduce hesitations, and provide a brief reason with linking words. Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., 'comfortable' and 'practical') and correct grammar (‘it makes me comfortable’).

예시: It depends on the occasion, but I usually prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are practical and easy to move in. For instance, I wear casual outfits for daily activities, while I choose smart clothes for formal events.

제안: Good content and example, but shorten and organize the response. Replace filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like 'also' or 'for example' correctly and keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I do. T-shirts are comfortable, low-maintenance and quick to put on. For example, when I run errands I usually pair a T-shirt with jeans because it saves time and feels relaxed.

제안: Be more direct and complete your sentences. Start with a clear statement (Yes/No and why), then give one specific example. Avoid trailing off at the end and fix grammar (e.g., 'I usually prefer to wear trousers and a T-shirt').

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually know what suits each occasion. For example, I pick trousers and a T-shirt for errands, but I would choose a formal outfit for a wedding.

× I like to wear clothes that are comfortable and breathable because I move around a lot during the day so I don't like to get sweaty and also I like to wear modest clothes because umm, the modest clothes then they make me feel comfortable.

✓ I like to wear clothes that are comfortable and breathable because I move around a lot during the day, so I don't like to get sweaty; I also like to wear modest clothes because they make me feel comfortable.

The sentence repeatedly uses unnecessary definite article and pronoun redundancy ('the modest clothes then they'). Replace with a single pronoun 'they' referring to 'modest clothes'. Also add punctuation to separate ideas and improve clarity. Suggestion: avoid repeating articles and streamline pronoun references. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Uh, it depends on the occasion, but uh, usually I prefer to, umm, wear clothes that are comfortable and casual because umm, it makes me comfort and also they're easy to wear.

✓ It depends on the occasion, but usually I prefer to wear clothes that are comfortable and casual because they make me comfortable and are easy to wear.

Incorrect use of 'it' and missing adjective form 'comfortable' instead of noun 'comfort'. Also unnecessary filler words removed. Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'clothes'. Use 'make me comfortable' to express cause. Grammar problem type ID:17

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they're easy to wear, umm comfortable and loose and also you don't have to press them all the time.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they're easy to wear, comfortable and loose, and you don't have to iron them all the time.

The word 'press' is colloquial; 'iron' is the correct verb for clothing. Also add commas for list clarity. This is a word choice issue related to verb usage in context (present participle usage was fine). Grammar problem type ID:10

× For example, if I'm going out to run my errands I usually prefer to wear T-shirt and jeans or a trouser umm because they take less time to get ready and easy.

✓ For example, if I'm going out to run my errands, I usually prefer to wear a T-shirt and jeans or trousers because they take less time to get ready and are easy.

Use singular article 'a' with singular noun 'T-shirt' and plural 'trousers' for normal usage. Also include verb 'are' before 'easy' to form a correct adjective phrase. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I don't think a lot of time choosing clothes because I am aware of the clothes I need to wear to the special place or again for example if I'm running, uh I'm going out to run some errands, I usually prefer wear a trouser and T-shirt which is comfortable. Whereas if I'm going for a wedding I'll go.

✓ I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I know what I need to wear for a particular place. For example, if I'm going out to run some errands, I usually prefer to wear trousers and a T-shirt because they are comfortable. If I'm going to a wedding, I'll dress up.

The original has missing verbs ('spend', 'to wear'), incorrect articles ('a trouser'), awkward use of 'whereas' and an incomplete final clause. Rephrase into clear sentences, add missing verbs and correct noun phrases. Use 'dress up' to complete the wedding clause. Grammar problem type ID:26