Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and unnecessary fillers, use correct grammar (articles, verb forms), and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and suit my body shape. For example, I often wear black T‑shirts and jeans because black looks neat and is easy to match with other items. Overall, casual outfits help me feel relaxed and confident.

제안: Answer directly and clearly, reduce hesitation sounds (ums/uhs), use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly, and give specific examples (e.g., types of casual clothes and situations). Make sure sentences are grammatically complete and concise.

예시: I prefer comfortable casual clothes because they help me stay active and focused during the day. For instance, I often wear plain cotton T‑shirts and chinos at work or when I meet friends, since they are breathable and easy to move in.

제안: Give a concise, well-structured answer: state how often you wear T‑shirts, when you wear them, and one reason. Avoid awkward or irrelevant comments (e.g., about body exposure) and reduce fillers. Use clear linking words like 'usually', 'often', 'because'.

예시: Yes, I often wear T‑shirts, especially on weekends and in the evenings. I prefer polo T‑shirts because they look smart while still being comfortable, and I usually pair them with jeans for a casual look.

제안: Provide a clear direct answer about how much time you spend, explain why with specific reasons, and give an example of when you spend more time choosing clothes (e.g., special events). Avoid repeating the same idea and cut filler words.

예시: I don't usually spend a lot of time choosing everyday clothes because I shop online, which is quick and convenient. However, I do take more time choosing outfits for special occasions like festivals or parties, when I compare styles and colors to suit the event.

× You will. I prefer to wear the casuals only.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes only.

The original begins with 'You will.' which is unrelated and creates a sentence structure error; 'the casuals' is incorrect noun usage. Remove 'You will.' and use 'casual clothes' (uncountable/plural noun phrase) and place 'only' after the noun for clarity.

× Because it gives my body structure very well and it also give pleasant vibe to all the members surrounding me.

✓ Because it gives my body shape a nice appearance and it also gives a pleasant vibe to the people around me.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it' requires 'gives' consistently; original used 'give' incorrectly. 'Body structure' is awkward in English; 'body shape' or 'appearance' is better. 'All the members surrounding me' is unnatural; use 'the people around me' or 'those around me.' Also add article 'a' before 'pleasant vibe.'

× And I like most of the times I like only black color.

✓ Most of the time, I like only the color black.

Use 'most of the time' (not 'most of the times') and correct word order. 'Black color' is redundant; say 'the color black' or simply 'black.' Include definite article 'the' before 'color black.'

× Why? Because I love black color shirts and T-shirts.

✓ Because I love black shirts and T-shirts.

'Black color shirts' is redundant; use 'black shirts.' Remove unnecessary 'color.' Ensure concise phrasing.

× I prefer to wear only comfortable clothes in casuals.

✓ I prefer to wear only comfortable, casual clothes.

'In casuals' is incorrect; use 'casual' as an adjective modifying 'clothes.' Place 'only' before adjectives or adjective phrase. Use a comma for clarity between 'comfortable' and 'casual.'

× Because umm, it's uh, boost my energy and it also give pleasant nature and way of umm, vibe in me.

✓ Because it boosts my energy and it also gives me a pleasant feeling and vibe.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it' requires 'boosts' and 'gives' (third person singular). 'Give pleasant nature and way of vibe in me' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'gives me a pleasant feeling and vibe.'

× And most of the times I wear only plain sets.

✓ Most of the time, I wear only plain sets.

Use 'most of the time' (singular) not 'most of the times.' Place comma after introductory phrase for readability. 'Plain sets' is acceptable if contextually clear.

× Why? Because umm it's uh, gives me predicular in.

✓ Because it makes me feel more distinctive.

Original is ungrammatical and contains nonstandard word 'predicular.' Use clear verb 'makes' with object 'me feel' and an appropriate adjective such as 'distinctive' or 'confident.'

× Yes, sometimes I wear only sometimes I wear T-shirts.

✓ Yes, sometimes I wear T-shirts.

The original repeats 'sometimes' and is redundant. Keep a single 'sometimes' before the verb for correct sentence structure.

× Because in, uh, during the office hours, uh, mostly on weekends, uh, and uh, during the night times I wear T-shirts.

✓ Because during office hours, mostly on weekends and at night, I wear T-shirts.

Remove redundant prepositions 'in' and unnecessary fillers. Use 'during office hours' and 'at night' instead of 'during the night times.' Use commas to separate time phrases.

× I like to wear polo T-shirts very well.

✓ I like wearing polo T-shirts very much.

'Very well' is used to describe ability; here the adverb should modify 'like,' so use 'very much.' Also prefer 'wearing' with 'like' for natural phrasing.

× Because umm, it gives my uh, biceps and triceps to visible to all the members very well.

✓ Because it makes my biceps and triceps visible to everyone.

Original uses incorrect infinitive 'to visible' and awkward phrase 'all the members.' Use 'makes ... visible' and 'everyone' for natural expression. Remove fillers.

× Yes, uh, most of the times I usually do only prefer online shopping.

✓ Yes, I usually prefer online shopping most of the time.

Avoid double adverbial redundancy ('most of the times' and 'usually'). Use 'most of the time' singular. Place adverbs in natural order: 'I usually prefer online shopping.'

× I only prefer online shopping when compared to the offline shopping.

✓ I prefer online shopping to offline shopping.

'When compared to' is wordy; use the simple comparative structure 'prefer X to Y.' Also drop 'the' before 'offline shopping' unless context requires it.

× And uh, I take most of the time to chose clothes while wearing any for any occasions or any fest.

✓ And I take a long time to choose clothes for any occasion or festival.

Spelling: 'chose' (past) should be 'choose' (present). 'Take most of the time' is unnatural; use 'take a long time.' 'While wearing any for any occasions' is unclear; intended meaning is likely 'to choose clothes for any occasion or festival.' Use singular 'occasion' and 'festival' or plural consistently.