Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep the answer clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler words and incomplete phrases. Use correct word choices (e.g., "a cap skirt" is unclear; say "a short skirt" or "a midi skirt") and correct grammar (e.g., "they make me more" → "they make me feel more comfortable").

예시: I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and easy to wear. For example, I often choose short skirts or loose shorts in warm weather because the fabrics are breathable and help me stay cool.

제안: Answer directly, then give one specific reason and an example. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct phrasing (e.g., "they are suitable for many occasions"). Avoid vague endings. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable casual clothes because they let me move freely and feel relaxed. For example, when I go shopping or meet friends I usually wear a T-shirt and jeans because they are suitable for many different activities.

제안: Be precise with vocabulary and grammar: say "made of cotton" and avoid incorrect words like "printable" (use "breathable" or "soft"). Use present simple correctly ("I usually wear T-shirts"). Add a brief example of combinations to enrich your answer and use a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts, especially those made of cotton because they are soft and breathable. I usually wear T-shirts everywhere; sometimes I pair them with a skirt for a casual look or with jeans for a more relaxed outfit.

제안: Give a direct short answer, then one clear reason and a specific example. Fix grammar: "I don't spend much time choosing clothes" and "I usually pick the first comfortable item I see." Avoid fillers and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer comfort over style. For example, I often pick the first comfortable T-shirt I find, which makes getting dressed quick and simple.

× I prefer to wear casual clothes because they make me comfortable, especially such as captain skirt or an short or mini skirt.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes because they make me comfortable, especially a capricon skirt or a short or mini skirt.

The sentence has article errors: 'an short' should be 'a short' because 'short' begins with a consonant sound. Also 'such as captain skirt' is unclear; likely meant 'capri skirt' or 'capricon' but keep 'a' before a singular countable noun. Use 'a' for singular countable nouns beginning with consonant sounds. Suggestion: choose the correct noun (capri skirt) and use 'a' or 'an' according to pronunciation.

× Uh, because they make me more.

✓ They make me more comfortable.

This is a sentence fragment and incomplete comparison. 'Make me more' needs an adjective to complete the idea. Add the adjective 'comfortable' to form a full sentence. Also avoid beginning a sentence with 'Because' here; combine with previous sentence or make it complete.

× They can make me breathable.

✓ They can make me feel breathable or they are breathable.

'Breathable' is an adjective describing fabric, not a direct effect on a person. Saying 'make me breathable' is incorrect. Use 'make me feel comfortable/breathable' or state 'they are breathable' to describe the clothes. Prefer 'breathable' applied to the clothing.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because they allow me to move around easily and feel relaxed and also it can wear or suitable in every.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because they allow me to move around easily, help me feel relaxed, and are suitable for almost every occasion.

Pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to 'clothes' which is plural; use 'they' or plural forms. 'Can wear' is wrong in this context; passive/incorrect verb usage. Also 'in every' is incomplete — 'in every situation' or 'for every occasion' is needed. Reword for clarity and correct pronoun agreement.

× I love wearing T-shirt especially when they are made from cotton because the fabric is printable and comfortable.

✓ I love wearing T-shirts, especially when they are made from cotton because the fabric is breathable and comfortable.

Use plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. 'Printable' is likely the wrong adjective; fabric is 'breathable' or 'soft'. Also add a comma before 'especially' for readability. The original uses 'T-shirt' singular with 'they' which causes agreement issues.

× I usually wearing T-shirt everywhere and sometime I combine T-shirt with skirt or.

✓ I usually wear T-shirts everywhere, and sometimes I combine a T-shirt with a skirt.

The verb form 'usually wearing' is incorrect; use the simple present 'usually wear' for habitual actions. Use plural 'T-shirts' when general, and 'sometimes' is misspelled. Complete the phrase 'with a skirt' rather than leaving it unfinished.

× No, I don't spend many a lot of time to just quotes because I usually pick the first comfortable thing I see and also, uh, almost my clothes are T-shirt and.

✓ No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I usually pick the first comfortable thing I see, and almost all my clothes are T-shirts.

'Many a lot of time' is incorrect; use 'a lot of time' or 'much time'. 'To just quotes' is nonsensical; likely meant 'choosing clothes'. Use gerund 'choosing' after 'spend time'. 'Almost my clothes are T-shirt and' is ungrammatical — use 'almost all my clothes are T-shirts'. Also finish the sentence; do not leave 'and' hanging.