Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, correct grammar, and give specific reasons or examples. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms (e.g., 'feels me', 'satisfied my mood').

예시: I prefer wearing traditional clothes because they are more comfortable and suit my climate. For example, the loose cotton garments I wear keep me cool in hot weather, and their designs make me feel connected to my culture.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and one coherent reason with correct vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words ('because', 'so') correctly. Avoid confusing phrases ('smart cars or casual clothes').

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed. For instance, I often choose loose trousers and a soft shirt when I know I'll be walking a lot, so I don't get tired.

제안: This answer is simple and relevant but needs grammatical correction and a linking phrase to make it smoother. Keep it to two or three sentences and add a brief specific detail (when/why).

예시: Yes, I do. I find T-shirts very comfortable and relaxing, so I often wear them at home or when exercising. For example, I always wear a breathable T-shirt when I go to the gym because it lets me move easily.

제안: Start with a direct answer (yes/no), then give a brief, specific reason. Correct grammar and word choice ('outing' → 'going out', 'I''ll change many clothes' → 'I try on many outfits', 'juicy' is incorrect). Avoid unnecessary repetition.

예시: Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes when I go out with friends because I like to look my best. I usually try on several outfits and pick the one that suits the occasion and my mood.

× Usually I like to wear traditional clothes because it feels me more comfortable and satisfied my mood as compared to western clothes.

✓ Usually I like to wear traditional clothes because they make me more comfortable and improve my mood compared to western clothes.

The pronoun 'it' does not agree with the plural noun 'clothes'; use 'they'. 'Feels me comfortable' is incorrect word order and verb choice; use 'make me comfortable' or 'make me feel comfortable'. 'Satisfied my mood' is unnatural; use 'improve my mood' or 'satisfy me'. Also 'as compared to' is wordy; use 'compared to'. Suggestions: use subject-pronoun agreement (they for clothes), use 'make me feel' or 'make me' + adjective, and use 'compared to' for comparisons.

× We wear traditional clothes anywhere but not western clothes.

✓ We wear traditional clothes everywhere but not western clothes.

The adverb 'anywhere' is awkward here; 'everywhere' better expresses general locations. No plural/singular noun change needed beyond ensuring 'clothes' remains plural. Suggestion: use 'everywhere' when meaning in many places.

× I usually prefer comfortable clothes because without any stress and also exhausted movement we feel relief, but in smart cars or casual clothes it feels tired sometimes so that's why I'll prefer comfortable clothes.

✓ I usually prefer comfortable clothes because they help me feel relaxed and avoid exhaustion, but smart or formal clothes can sometimes feel tiring, so I prefer comfortable clothes.

Several issues: 'without any stress and also exhausted movement we feel relief' has incorrect word choice and structure; use 'they help me feel relaxed and avoid exhaustion'. 'smart cars' is incorrect; likely 'smart clothes' or 'formal clothes'. 'it feels tired' wrongly uses 'it' and 'tired'—use 'can feel tiring'. 'I'll prefer' is odd for habitual preference; use present 'I prefer'. Suggestions: choose correct nouns ('clothes'), maintain subject-verb agreement, and use consistent tense for habits.

× Yes, definitely. I like to wear T-shirts because it feels me comfortable and I feel more relaxed whenever I wear T-shirts.

✓ Yes, definitely. I like to wear T-shirts because they make me comfortable and I feel more relaxed whenever I wear them.

'It feels me comfortable' is incorrect pronoun and word order; use 'they make me comfortable' or 'they make me feel comfortable'. Use 'them' to refer back to T-shirts. Suggestion: match plural pronoun 'they/them' to 'T-shirts' and use 'make me' + adjective or 'make me feel' + adjective.

× When I go to gym for exercise I always wear T-shirts.

✓ When I go to the gym to exercise, I always wear T-shirts.

Missing article 'the' before 'gym' and awkward 'for exercise'—use 'to exercise' or 'for exercising'. Also add a comma after the introductory clause for clarity. Suggestion: include articles with common nouns ('the gym') and use infinitive for purpose.

× This question is really relatable to me because whenever I am outing with my friends I I'll change many clothes 1 by 1.

✓ This question is really relatable to me because whenever I go out with my friends I change many outfits one after another.

'I am outing' is incorrect—use 'I go out'. 'I I'll' is redundant. 'change many clothes 1 by 1' is nonstandard; use 'change many outfits one after another' or 'one by one'. Suggestion: use correct phrasal verbs ('go out'), avoid redundant pronouns, and use idiomatic expressions for sequence ('one after another').

× I because I am a juicy person and I want a best clothes from everywhere.

✓ It's because I am a picky person and I want the best clothes from everywhere.

Sentence fragment 'I because' lacks structure; begin with 'It's because'. 'Juicy person' is wrong word choice—likely 'choosy' or 'picky'. 'a best clothes' mixes article and number incorrectly; use 'the best clothes' or 'the best piece of clothing'. 'From everywhere' is informal but acceptable; consider 'from everywhere I visit'. Suggestion: use appropriate adjectives ('choosy'/'picky'), correct article and plural agreement ('the best clothes'), and ensure a complete sentence structure.