Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and fix subject-verb agreement and prepositions (e.g., “made of”, “practical for everyday use”).

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes made of high-quality cotton because they are soft and breathable. For example, I usually wear cotton T-shirts and stretchy jeans, which let me move freely and are practical for everyday activities.

제안: Organize the response with a clear topic sentence and use linking words correctly. Correct articles and prepositions, and reduce filler words. Provide one specific example to support your preference.

예시: It depends on the occasion: I usually wear casual clothes for work or college, but when I attend a party or formal event I choose fashionable, smart outfits. For example, I might wear a blazer and dress shoes to a function.

제안: Keep answers natural and fluent by removing hesitations and repeating. Use one coherent supporting detail with linking words and correct pronoun agreement (e.g., “wear them”).

예시: Yes, I do. T-shirts are comfortable and versatile, so I often wear them to work or when I go shopping. In addition, I sometimes sleep in a T-shirt because it is so comfortable.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and two specific reasons linked with connectors. Correct grammar (e.g., “matters that affect me,” “items that are within my budget”). Avoid repeating conjunctions.

예시: Yes, I do. I usually spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I care about fabric quality and durability, and I also consider the price. Therefore I always look for items that are well made but still within my budget.

× I like comfortable clothes which is made-up of good quality cotton because they are soft and breathable and I can walk and move freely without any restriction.

✓ I like comfortable clothes which are made of good-quality cotton because they are soft and breathable and I can walk and move freely without any restriction.

The relative clause refers to 'clothes' (plural) so the verb should be plural ('are') — this is a subject-verb agreement error (ID 27) and also matches singular/plural issue (ID 1). 'Made-up of' is incorrect; use 'made of'. 'Good quality' used as an adjective before a noun should be hyphenated as 'good-quality'. Improve by matching the plural subject with plural verb and use the correct phrase 'made of'.

× So every day I love to wear cotton T-shirts and stretchy jeans since they are casual and practical for.

✓ So every day I love to wear cotton T-shirts and stretchy jeans since they are casual and practical.

The sentence ends with an incomplete prepositional phrase 'for' which creates a sentence structure error (ID 26) and incorrect preposition use (ID 11). Remove the unnecessary 'for' to complete the sentence. Ensure the sentence ends with a complete idea.

× Well, it depends upon the situation where I am going such As for work or for Education Center I wear casual clothes but if I'm going on a occasion like any party or function, so in that moment I love to wear fashionable clothes.

✓ Well, it depends on the situation. If I'm going to work or to an education center, I wear casual clothes, but if I'm going to an occasion like a party or a function, I prefer to wear fashionable clothes.

Use 'depends on' not 'depends upon' in this context (ID 11). 'Where I am going' is unnecessary and awkward; break into clearer sentences (sentence structure error, ID 26). Use 'going to' for destinations and 'an education center' with an article (article error ID 22). 'On a occasion' is wrong; use 'an occasion' and 'prefer' sounds more natural than 'love' in this context. Remove extraneous 'so in that moment'.

× I can wear it at my workplace or whenever I go outside for shopping.

✓ I can wear them at my workplace or whenever I go out shopping.

T-shirts are plural, so the pronoun should be 'them' not 'it' (incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12). 'Go outside for shopping' is wordy; use 'go out shopping' for natural phrasing (sentence structure ID 26).

× I can also wear it so uh, I at night I can also sleep in it.

✓ I can also sleep in them at night.

Pronoun should be plural 'them' to match 'T-shirts' (ID 12). The original has redundant and disfluent fillers ('so uh, I at night I can also') causing sentence structure errors (ID 26). Combine into a concise sentence: 'I can also sleep in them at night.'

× Yes, I do spend quite a lot of time while purchasing clothes because there are so many matters which affects me like the quality of the fabric and how durable the product is and and the price will also matter to me.

✓ Yes, I do spend quite a lot of time when purchasing clothes because there are many factors that affect me, such as the quality of the fabric, the product's durability, and the price.

Use 'when purchasing' rather than 'while purchasing' for natural timing (sentence structure ID 26). 'So many matters' is incorrect; use 'many factors' (word choice/quantifier ID 14). 'Which affects me' is wrong because 'which' refers to 'factors' (plural) and needs plural verb 'affect' (subject-verb agreement ID 27). Avoid repetition ('and and'); use parallel noun phrases and possessive form 'product's durability' for clarity.

× I always choose those items which is under my budget.

✓ I always choose items that are within my budget.

'Those items which is' contains a subject-verb agreement error: 'items' (plural) requires 'are' not 'is' (ID 27). Use 'that' or 'which' appropriately; 'items that are within my budget' is more natural. Also 'under my budget' is a less common preposition choice; 'within my budget' is correct (preposition/article IDs 11 and 22).