Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Avoid repetition and small grammar errors (e.g. plural/singular agreement, articles).

예시: I usually wear plain shirts for work because they are comfortable and easy to care for. For example, a simple cotton shirt lets me move freely during the day and doesn’t need much ironing, so it’s practical for my routine.

제안: Answer directly, correct pronoun mistakes, and use linking words to contrast choices. Give one clear preference and a brief reason plus an exception. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes for daily activities because they are more practical and relaxed. However, I wear smart clothes for special occasions, such as job interviews or formal events, to make a good impression.

제안: Be specific and avoid unclear phrases. Use correct adjectives and prepositions (e.g. ‘dark-coloured ones’, ‘fit for many occasions’). Give one reason and a short example of when you wear them. Remove irrelevant or confusing background statements.

예시: Yes, I like plain, dark-coloured T-shirts because they’re easy to match with jeans and don’t show stains. For instance, I often wear a navy T-shirt when I run errands or meet friends because it looks neat and requires little effort.

제안: Give a direct, natural reply and use clear time expressions. Explain briefly how you prepare and give a reason. Keep it concise and fix tense errors (use present simple).

예시: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes. I usually pick my outfit about an hour before I leave, so I’m prepared and don’t have to rush in the morning.

× I usually like to wear a plain shirt, particularly to my everyday daily work.

✓ I usually like to wear plain shirts, particularly to my everyday work.

Article and singular/plural usage: 'a plain shirt' suggests one specific shirt but context refers to general preference, so plural 'plain shirts' is correct. 'Everyday daily work' is redundant; use 'everyday work' or 'daily work'. Use consistent noun number when speaking about general habits.

× Having those kind of simple shirt makes me more comfortable and lighter, and I love those shirts very much.

✓ Having those kinds of simple shirts makes me more comfortable and lighter, and I love those shirts very much.

Number agreement: 'those kind of simple shirt' mixes plural 'those' with singular 'kind' and singular 'shirt'. Correct form is 'those kinds of simple shirts' or 'that kind of simple shirt' depending on meaning. Also 'lighter' is acceptable colloquially but 'more comfortable and lighter' is awkward; keep as written to minimize changes.

× Uh, you comfortably wear a simple and plain shirt all the time, especially if I'm going some errands or going to work and like having the smart clothes and I normally use it or wear it in very special occasion, most importantly for a job interviews or other.

✓ Uh, I comfortably wear a simple, plain shirt most of the time, especially when I'm running errands or going to work. I wear smart clothes on very special occasions, most importantly for job interviews or similar events.

Pronoun and subject errors: Speaker used 'you' instead of 'I' which is incorrect in a personal response. Verb forms and articles: 'going some errands' should be 'running errands' or 'doing some errands'; 'use it or wear it in very special occasion' should be 'wear smart clothes on very special occasions'. 'a job interviews' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'job interviews' or 'a job interview'. Sentences were long and run-on; splitting improves clarity.

× Yes, I love wearing plain T-shirt, particularly dark colored one because I feel lighter and dark colored shirt also good fit to application even though casual or daily errands.

✓ Yes, I love wearing plain T-shirts, particularly dark-colored ones, because I feel lighter, and dark-colored shirts also fit well for casual or everyday errands.

Articles and pluralization: 'plain T-shirt' should be 'plain T-shirts' for general preference. 'dark colored one' should be 'dark-colored ones' to agree in number and use hyphenation for compound adjective. 'also good fit to application' is ungrammatical; use 'fit well for' or 'are suitable for'. 'daily errands' -> 'everyday errands'.

× Shirt is one of my favorite clothing since I was in the Philippines of the present.

✓ Shirts have been one of my favorite types of clothing since I was in the Philippines.

Sentence structure and tense: 'Shirt is one of my favorite clothing' mixes singular with uncountable 'clothing'; use plural 'Shirts have been one of my favorite types of clothing'. 'since I was in the Philippines of the present' is ungrammatical; 'since I was in the Philippines' is sufficient and suggests a past starting point, so present perfect 'have been' is appropriate.

× I don't normally spend a lot of time choosing clothes because it was already ready before going out.

✓ I don't normally spend a lot of time choosing clothes because they are already ready before I go out.

Tense and pronoun reference: 'it was already ready' uses past tense incorrectly; speaker refers to a general habit, so present tense 'are already ready' is needed. 'it' should agree with plural 'clothes', so use 'they'. Also include subject for 'go out' -> 'I go out'.

× I normally prepare clothes one hour ahead of time so I don't need to spend time to select or choose which items or clothing I need to wear for the specific day.

✓ I normally prepare my clothes one hour ahead so I don't need to spend time choosing which items I need to wear for the day.

Article and word choice: add possessive 'my clothes' for clarity. 'ahead of time' -> 'ahead' is more natural with the time expression. Redundant 'select or choose' -> use one verb 'choosing'. 'for the specific day' -> 'for the day' is more natural. Present tense 'I normally prepare' is correct.