Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and precise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words and odd phrases (e.g., "use in every reader"), and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Keep it to 2–4 short sentences.

예시: I prefer wearing oversized shirts because they are very comfortable and easy to move in. For example, an oversized white shirt looks neat while still feeling relaxed, which is ideal for my daily activities.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and avoid repetition and hesitations. Explain one or two reasons using linking words (because, so, and) and give a brief example to support your view.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because my priority is comfort and I like the casual aesthetic. For instance, I often choose loose trousers and soft T‑shirts because they help me feel relaxed all day.

제안: Be concise and avoid repeating ideas. Start with a clear statement, then give a specific reason and a short example. Use linking words (for example, because) to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are comfortable and practical for my daily routine. For example, I usually wear oversized white T‑shirts when I go out or study at a café.

제안: Answer directly and improve grammatical accuracy. Use a topic sentence, then explain your method with a specific detail and a linking word. Replace awkward phrasing ("choosing a closet by a color") with clearer wording.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually pick items I already like. For example, I organise my wardrobe by colour and style, so I can quickly find a matching outfit.

× I like to wear a shirt, especially oversized shirt 'cause it's so comfortable to use in every reader.

✓ I like to wear a shirt, especially an oversized shirt, because it's so comfortable to wear every day.

Incorrect preposition 'to use in every reader' and missing article before 'oversized shirt'. Use 'wear' (verb) not 'use', 'every day' for daily frequency, and include indefinite article 'an' before a singular countable noun starting with a vowel sound. Replace informal 'cause' with 'because' in formal correction.

× And I also like a white shirt 'cause it seems so sweet on me.

✓ I also like a white shirt because it looks sweet on me.

Adjective 'sweet' is acceptable but collocation 'seems so sweet on me' is awkward. Use 'looks sweet on me'. Replace 'cause' with 'because'. Keep article 'a' before 'white shirt' and maintain present simple.

× I think I prefer to wear comfortable, uh, comfortable clothes as good, uh, my priority is my comfortable and it's also the aesthetic 1.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because comfort is my priority and I also like that style aesthetically.

Original has disfluencies, incorrect phrase 'as good' and 'my comfortable', and unclear 'aesthetic 1'. Restructure sentence: use 'prefer' without redundant 'I think', 'comfortable clothes', and explain reason with 'because'. Use 'aesthetically' or 'that style aesthetically' to convey meaning.

× Yeah, I like wearing T-shirt 'cause it's so comfortable and it suits my daily activity.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they're so comfortable and suit my daily activities.

Use plural 'T-shirts' to talk generally (article error / singular/plural). Match pronoun and verb: 'they're' and 'suit' for plural. Use 'daily activities' plural and 'because' instead of 'cause'.

× However, I will choose on a T-shirt one like, uh, what I said before.

✓ However, when I choose a T-shirt, I pick one like I mentioned before.

Incorrect structure 'choose on a T-shirt one' and awkward filler words. Use 'when I choose a T-shirt' and 'I pick one like I mentioned before' for clarity and correct verb-object order.

× I like white shirt, T-shirt, oversize.

✓ I like white shirts, T-shirts, and oversized ones.

Incorrect noun forms and missing plurals/adjectival agreement. Use plurals for general preferences and 'oversized ones' to refer to oversized shirts; include commas and conjunction 'and'.

× I think I don't spend a lot time to choose clothes 'cause I pick clothes what I like.

✓ I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I pick the clothes I like.

Missing 'of' in 'a lot of time' and wrong infinitive 'to choose' after time; use gerund 'choosing'. 'Pick clothes what I like' is incorrect relative clause; use 'the clothes I like'.

× I mean like I was choosing a closet by a color.

✓ I mean I choose my closet by color.

Tense and preposition issues: 'was choosing' suggests past continuous but context is general habit, so use present 'choose'. 'By color' is the correct prepositional phrase; avoid 'a closet' if referring to clothes organization—'my closet' is clearer.

× So I don't spend a lot of time.

✓ So I don't spend a lot of time.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable in present tense. No change needed except punctuation; retained for coherence.