Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g. which style you prefer), then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repeated or unclear phrases and correct grammar (e.g. "loose clothes", "traditional/eastern").

예시: I prefer traditional eastern clothes because, as a Muslim, I find loose garments more comfortable and modest. However, sometimes eastern designs can be tight, so I also wear relaxed western clothes when I want more comfort.

제안: Give a clear main idea first, then support it with one or two specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar ("I prefer", "comfortable clothes are") and avoid unclear phrases like "smoker look" or unfinished sentences. Mention where and when you choose each style.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are modest and practical. For example, I wear casual outfits for work and running errands, while I choose smarter clothes for formal meetings or special events.

제안: Answer directly and add a specific reason with linking words; correct grammar and awkward phrasing (e.g. "at night", "comfortable in them", "for sleeping"). Keep it concise—one topic sentence plus one supporting detail.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts at night because they are loose and very comfortable for sleeping. Also, they are easy to wash and wear regularly.

제안: Respond directly using present tense and give clear organization of your routine. Use linking words (e.g. "because", "for example") and avoid hesitations or vague phrases. Be specific about what you prepare for different events.

예시: No, I usually do not spend much time choosing clothes because I organize my wardrobe by occasion. For example, I keep a couple of comfortable outfits for work, and I set aside more stylish dresses for parties or dinners.

× I like to wear eastern clothes because I am a Muslim and it is preferable to wear a loose cloth in strand design.

✓ I like to wear eastern clothes because I am a Muslim and it is preferable to wear loose clothing in a traditional style.

The original uses 'a loose cloth' (countable noun) incorrectly for general clothing; 'loose clothing' or 'a loose garment' is correct. 'Strand design' is unclear; likely 'traditional style' or 'traditional design' is intended. Use adjectives correctly and choose appropriate noun forms.

× But some clothes are so tight in eastern design so you can wear loose clothing western design.

✓ However, some eastern designs are very tight, so you may prefer to wear loose western-style clothing.

Sentence had awkward structure and missing prepositions/articles. 'So' was used twice and 'in eastern design' should be 'eastern designs' or 'eastern-style clothing.' 'You can wear' is better as 'you may prefer to wear.' Use hyphenated adjectives like 'western-style.'

× I am prefer to wear comfortable clothes because it is modest and stylish, but sometimes I find a good in casual clothes for smoker look and I prefer to wear in casual clothes in offices and outside where we are having a.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they are modest and stylish, but sometimes I like casual clothes for a more relaxed look, and I prefer to wear casual clothes at the office and when I am outside.

'I am prefer' is ungrammatical; use simple present 'I prefer.' Pronoun agreement: 'it is modest' should be 'they are modest' referring to clothes (plural). Phrase 'find a good in casual clothes for smoker look' is unclear; replaced with 'like casual clothes for a more relaxed look.' Prepositions: 'wear in casual clothes' should be 'wear casual clothes' and 'in offices and outside where we are having a' was incomplete; changed to 'at the office and when I am outside.'

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts in the night because it is loose and I am comfortable with in it in A at a sleeping mode.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts at night because they are loose and I am comfortable sleeping in them.

Use 'at night' not 'in the night.' 'T-shirts' is plural so pronoun should be 'they are loose.' 'I am comfortable with in it in A at a sleeping mode' is ungrammatical and redundant; correct phrasing is 'I am comfortable sleeping in them.'

× No, I did not spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I manage my wardrobe according to the events.

✓ No, I do not spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I manage my wardrobe according to events.

The question asks about a habitual action, so simple present 'do not spend' is appropriate instead of past 'did not spend.' Also 'according to the events' is awkward; use 'according to events' or 'according to the occasion.'

× If I want to go office, I use two comfortable clothes.

✓ If I want to go to the office, I wear two comfortable outfits.

Missing preposition 'to' before 'the office.' 'Use two comfortable clothes' is incorrect: clothing items count as 'outfits' or 'pieces of clothing.' 'Wear' is a better verb than 'use' for clothing.

× If I go to the party or some dinners, then I select some uh, dresses, uh, that have, uh, some style and also have.

✓ If I go to a party or dinner, I choose dresses that are stylish and appropriate for the occasion.

The original is disfluent with filler words and an incomplete ending 'and also have.' Remove fillers, use singular/plural consistently: 'a party or dinner' or 'parties or dinners.' 'Select' can be replaced with 'choose,' and complete the thought with 'stylish and appropriate for the occasion.'