Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary (e.g., 'modest clothes' not 'table clothes'), and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Keep it concise (max 3–4 short sentences) and avoid tense/grammar errors.

예시: I prefer to wear modest clothes because I am Muslim and they reflect my beliefs. In addition, modest outfits often look neat and make me feel confident, especially for formal events.

제안: Open with a clear preference, then give concise, specific reasons using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so'). Correct grammar (use present simple and remove extra words). Avoid repetition.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely and stay relaxed. For example, I often choose sweatpants or loose shirts when I study or go out with friends.

제안: Answer directly, then give brief, organised reasons with linking words and avoid fillers. Use present simple and combine related ideas into one or two sentences.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and let me move easily. They are especially useful in summer, and I think simple T-shirts suit my style.

제안: Start with a direct answer (Yes/No), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (use present simple: 'I spend'), avoid repetition and pronunciation mistakes in writing, and use precise vocabulary ('taste in styles and colours').

예시: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I have particular tastes in styles and colours. As a result, I often try several outfits before deciding what looks best.

× Actually I like to wear a modest table clothes because as I'm Muslim and it's helped me to look better.

✓ Actually, I like to wear modest clothes because I'm Muslim and it helps me look better.

The phrase 'modest table clothes' is incorrect: 'table clothes' is wrong word choice; use 'clothes'. 'Modest' correctly modifies 'clothes' (adjective order). 'Because as' is redundant; use 'because'. Verb tense and agreement: 'it's helped me' should be present simple 'it helps me' to express a general truth. Remove unnecessary 'to' before 'look'. Suggestion: say 'I like to wear modest clothes because I'm Muslim, and it helps me look better.'

× Actually, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because it's helped me to to like move easily and it's helped me and provide a comfy situation.

✓ Actually, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they help me move easily and provide a comfortable feeling.

Problems: 'it's helped me' uses incorrect tense and subject ('it' doesn't match plural 'clothes'); use present simple 'help' for general truths. Double 'to' is an error. 'to like move' is wrong—use 'move' without 'like'. 'Provide a comfy situation' is awkward; use 'provide a comfortable feeling' or 'make me comfortable'. Also change 'it's' to plural subject 'they' or rephrase to avoid pronoun mismatch. Suggestion: 'comfortable clothes help me move easily and make me comfortable.'

× Actually, yes, I prefer to wear T-shirts because it's helped me to move easily and to, umm, feel comfortable.

✓ Actually, yes, I prefer to wear T-shirts because they help me move easily and feel comfortable.

Use present simple 'help' for habitual actions rather than present perfect 'it's helped me'. Pronoun 'they' matches plural 'T-shirts' instead of 'it'. Remove filler 'to' before 'feel'. Suggestion: use 'they help me move easily and feel comfortable.'

× And it is, uh, especially in summer.

✓ They are especially useful in summer.

The original 'And it is, uh, especially in summer.' is unclear and has pronoun reference error: 'it' doesn't clearly refer to T-shirts (plural). Also sentence fragment; needs a clear subject and verb. Rewriting to 'They are especially useful in summer' clarifies meaning and fixes agreement. Suggestion: ensure pronoun matches noun number and include a verb for completeness.

× And it, it looks nice on me.

✓ They look nice on me.

Pronoun number mismatch: 'it' refers to plural 'T-shirts', so use 'they'. Remove filler repetition 'it, it'. Keep present simple 'look' for appearance. Suggestion: say 'They look nice on me.'

× Well, this is a great question because absolutely, yes, I spent a lot of time when I I am, I am choosing clothes because I have a unique and difficult taste in clothes and colours as well.

✓ Well, this is a great question because, yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I have unique and difficult tastes in clothes and colours.

Tense inconsistency: 'I spent' (past) conflicts with present habitual context; use present simple 'I spend'. Redundant and incorrect 'when I I am, I am choosing clothes' is ungrammatical—use 'choosing clothes' or 'when I choose clothes'. 'Taste' should be plural 'tastes' when referring to multiple preferences. Remove extra filler words. Suggestion: use present simple for habits and simplify phrase to 'I spend a lot of time choosing clothes.'

× So yeah, it is hard for me and complicated to choose a clubs.

✓ So yeah, it's hard and complicated for me to choose clothes.

Word order and article errors: 'choose a clubs' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'clubs' (should be 'clothes'); remove 'a' and use 'clothes'. 'It is hard for me and complicated to choose' is awkward—better 'it's hard and complicated for me to choose clothes.' Suggestion: match articles and number and use natural adjective order.