Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and concise: begin with a direct topic sentence stating the type of clothes you like, then give one or two specific reasons (comfort, tradition) using linking words. Avoid unclear product names or fragmented phrases; use correct grammar and sentence structure. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: I like wearing traditional clothes from my country because they are comfortable and familiar. In particular, I often wear a Joya three-piece outfit, which is lightweight and suitable for our hot climate. Also, many people in my community wear similar garments, so it feels appropriate for social occasions.

제안: Answer directly: state your preference first, then explain with specific situations and use linking words (however, when, because). Correct verb tenses and subject-verb agreement. Limit to 2–4 sentences and avoid vague location references unless necessary.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes for everyday life because I work and relax at home most of the time. However, when I go out for dinner or meet friends, I choose smart clothes because they make me feel more confident and well-presented.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence stating your like or dislike, then support with specific reasons (comfort, climate). Use linking words such as because or since and correct sentence structure. Keep responses concise and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially at home, because they are very comfortable. Since the weather in my country is usually hot, T-shirts help me stay cool and are easy to wash and wear.

제안: Start with a direct answer (Yes/No), then give one clear reason and a brief example. Use coherent linking words (because, so, therefore) and correct pronouns. Avoid hesitation sounds and unclear verbs (e.g., 'drink' seems wrong). Keep it within three sentences.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually shop at a few trusted stores. For example, I know a shop that sells good-quality items, so I go there and pick what I need quickly.

× I like Joya three PS It's a hairpad.

✓ I like Joya three PS. It's a hairpad.

The original needed a sentence boundary; also 'It's' correctly refers to the singular noun 'hairpad'. Ensure sentences are separated with a period to avoid run-on sentences.

× Cheap or different part.

✓ It is cheap and different in parts.

The fragment lacked a verb and a clear structure. Adding 'It is' makes a complete sentence and using 'and' connects the two descriptions. 'Different part' was unclear, so 'different in parts' is a clearer phrasing.

× Uh, also I feel comfortable when I wear this and uh, this is our traditional clothes.

✓ I also feel comfortable when I wear it, and this is our traditional clothing.

Use 'it' to refer back to a singular item and 'clothing' is an uncountable noun often used instead of 'clothes' when speaking about a type or style. Maintain present tense 'feel' and 'is'.

× Everyone now wear this.

✓ Everyone now wears this.

Subject-verb agreement: 'everyone' is singular and requires the third-person singular verb form 'wears'.

× I'm normally in Hoyna, I live in my home.

✓ I'm normally in Hoyna; I live at home.

Use 'at home' for location and a semicolon or period to separate independent clauses. 'In my home' is acceptable but 'at home' is more natural.

× That time I were to go comfortable dress when I go to the outdoor like sometimes dinner or lunch or outing with friends.

✓ At those times I would wear comfortable clothes when I went outdoors, and sometimes I wore smart clothes for dinner, lunch, or outings with friends.

The sentence mixed tenses and had wrong verb forms. Use past tense 'went' for past actions and 'would wear' or 'wore' to describe habitual past behaviour. 'Were' is incorrect for first person singular; 'would' or 'wore' fits better. 'Comfortable dress' should be 'comfortable clothes' and 'outdoor' should be 'outdoors'.

× That time I wear smart clothes.

✓ At those times I wear smart clothes.

If describing a habitual situation in the present, use 'wear'. If describing past habits, use 'wore'. Ensure consistency with surrounding context.

× It's make me gorgeous.

✓ It makes me look gorgeous.

Subject-verb agreement: use 'makes' for third-person singular. Also 'look gorgeous' is the natural collocation rather than 'make me gorgeous'.

× Is I like wearing T-shirt when I'm staying in my home?

✓ I like wearing T-shirts when I'm at home.

Remove the question inversion 'Is' which is incorrect here. Use plural 'T-shirts' for general statements and 'at home' for location. Keep present simple: 'I like'.

× The time I wear T-shirt because of it's just too much comfortable.

✓ I wear T-shirts because they're very comfortable.

Use 'I wear T-shirts' for habitual actions, use the contraction 'they're' to agree with plural 'T-shirts', and replace 'too much comfortable' with 'very comfortable' or 'so comfortable'.

× Normally my in my country hero weather is so hot so T-shirt make me comfortable and easier dress.

✓ In my country the weather is usually very hot, so T-shirts make me comfortable and easier to dress in.

Correct word order and articles: 'In my country the weather...' Use 'usually' for frequency, and 'make' agrees with plural 'T-shirts'. Add 'to' before 'dress' to make the infinitive 'to dress'.

× Umm, no, actually not. I'm not spending a lot of time for choosing clothes.

✓ No, actually I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

Use simple present 'don't spend' for habitual actions. Remove unnecessary 'for' after 'time' and use the gerund 'choosing'.

× Umm, when I go to the shop, I have some shop.

✓ When I go shopping, I go to a few shops I know.

Natural English uses 'go shopping' rather than 'go to the shop' in this context. 'I have some shop' is ungrammatical; use 'I go to a few shops I know' to indicate familiarity.

× I know that shop, their quality is good.

✓ I know those shops; their quality is good.

Use 'those shops' to refer to multiple shops and separate independent clauses with a semicolon or period. 'Their' correctly refers to the plural noun 'shops'.

× So I drink, go to the shop and buy my clothes.

✓ So I go to those shops and buy my clothes.

'I drink' is irrelevant and likely a miswording; remove it. Use parallel verbs 'go to those shops and buy my clothes' for clear sequence. Ensure logical coherence.