Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Expand slightly beyond a one-word preference. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because/so/which). Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

예시: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me focus. For example, upbeat songs with a fast tempo make me feel energetic, so I often play them when I exercise or work.

제안: Provide a brief explanation or example after your affirmation. Use a linking word (for example/so/therefore) to connect the answer and the reason. Give a specific situation when this happens to make your response more vivid and natural.

예시: Yes, happy music makes me more excited because the rhythm and melody boost my energy. For example, when I hear a cheerful song while getting ready in the morning, I feel motivated to start the day.

제안: Use a natural time phrase and explain why you plan to take classes or what you hope to learn. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'in the future time.' Keep it within a couple of sentences and use linking words (however/because/so) if needed.

예시: No, I haven't taken any music classes, but I plan to start next year because I want to learn guitar basics and improve my rhythm.

제안: Give a little more detail about how music affects those activities and use a linking word to connect ideas. Mention specific types of music you choose for each activity to make the answer more precise and natural.

예시: Yes, I often listen to upbeat pop music while doing chores because it makes the work feel quicker, and I prefer calm acoustic songs when playing with my family so we can relax together.

× 'No, I haven't, but I will in the future time.'

✓ 'No, I haven't, but I will in the future.'

'in the future time' is unidiomatic English. Use either "in the future" or specify a time (e.g., "in the future months"). The modal+bare infinitive "will" is correct for future intention, so simply remove the extra word "time" to produce a natural sentence.'