Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문장 구조와 문법을 정리해서 더 자연스럽고 간결하게 말하세요. 주제문으로 바로 답한 뒤 상황을 구체적으로 연결하는 부가 설명을 한두 문장만 사용하세요. 'depends on' 뒤에는 전치사 on 다음에 목적어를 정확히 넣고, 시제와 관사 사용에 주의하세요. 예를 들어 'after I watch'는 'after I watch a sad movie' 또는 'after watching a sad film'처럼 고쳐야 하고, 'when I happy'는 'when I'm happy'로 고쳐야 합니다.

예시: It depends on the situation. For example, after I watch a sad film I usually listen to melancholic music to match my mood, but when I'm with friends I prefer upbeat songs to lift the atmosphere.

제안: 불필요한 망설임과 중복을 줄이고, 명확한 예시와 간결한 설명을 사용하세요. 밴드나 곡 이름을 말할 때는 정확하게 표현하고 한 문장에 하나의 아이디어만 담으세요. 'exciting bending musics' 같은 표현은 어색하니 'energetic songs'로 바꾸고, OST나 아티스트 언급은 간단히 소개하세요.

예시: Yes. Energetic songs usually make me feel more excited. For instance, I enjoy the soundtrack from the film Sanjay Gutierrez because its lively melodies feel romantic and uplifting.

제안: 문법과 어휘 선택을 바로잡아 명확하게 말하세요. 'have been told how playing the guitar'는 의미가 불분명하므로 'I took guitar lessons'처럼 직접적 표현을 사용하세요. 리듬을 못 탄다는 뜻은 'I struggle with rhythm'으로, 'I quit'를 말하려면 문맥에 맞게 사용하세요. 문장은 2~3개로 간결히 구성하세요.

예시: Yes, I took guitar lessons when I was younger because I thought playing guitar was awesome. However, I struggled with keeping rhythm, so I eventually stopped taking lessons.

제안: 문장을 깔끔하게 정리하고 단어 선택을 교정하세요. 'heard the resting music' 대신 'listen to calming music' 또는 'background music'라고 말하고, 'studied ions'는 아마 'studied'만 필요합니다. 또한 'I need some noisy situation'은 모순되니 'some background noise' 또는 'a bit of noise'로 바꾸세요.

예시: Yes, I often listen to background or calming music while I study because a little background noise helps me concentrate.

× I think it's depends on the situation.

✓ I think it depends on the situation.

'It' with the verb 'depend' in present simple requires the base form 'depend' after the third-person singular subject 'it'. Using 'it's depends' incorrectly combines the contraction 'it's' (it is) with the verb in third-person form. Use 'it depends' for correct subject-verb agreement.

× After I watch some sad story like living with the king, I usually hear some sad music and when I happy like hang out with my friends I usually hear happy music.

✓ After I watch a sad story like Living with the King, I usually listen to sad music, and when I am happy, for example when I hang out with my friends, I usually listen to happy music.

Multiple errors: use 'watch' in present simple is fine but 'a sad story' needs an article; titles capitalize; 'hear' is grammatically okay but 'listen to' is more natural for music; 'when I happy' needs the verb 'am' for present state; 'like hang out' should be 'for example when I hang out' to connect ideas. Ensure subject-verb agreement and proper article usage.

× Yes, I usually hear exciting bending musics and that band name is and flying, umm, stories and flying music and that's uh, OST of Sanjay Gutierrez.

✓ Yes, I usually listen to exciting indie music, and the band's name is Stories and Flying; that's the OST by Sanjay Gutierrez.

'Exciting bending musics' is ungrammatical: 'music' is uncountable and does not take plural 'musics'; 'bending' likely wrong word choice — replace with appropriate adjective like 'indie' or 'band style'. Use 'listen to' for music, use possessive 'band's name', and 'OST by' is more natural than 'OST of'. Ensure correct noun forms and prepositions.

× And when I hear the music, it makes me feel romantic and exciting.

✓ And when I hear the music, it makes me feel romantic and excited.

'Exciting' describes something that causes excitement; to describe the listener's feeling, use the adjective 'excited'. So 'feel excited' is correct when referring to the person's emotion.

× Yes, I have been told how playing the guitar because I feel play guitar is awesome but I am not good at take a rhythm so I quite eat.

✓ Yes, I was taught how to play the guitar because I feel playing guitar is awesome, but I am not good at keeping rhythm so I quit.

'Have been told how playing the guitar' is awkward passive; correct is 'was taught how to play the guitar'. Use 'how to play' (infinitive) after 'taught'. 'Feel play guitar' should be 'feel playing guitar' or 'feel that playing guitar is awesome'. 'Not good at take a rhythm' should be 'not good at keeping rhythm'. 'Quite eat' seems to be misspelling of 'quit' meaning stopped; correct to 'quit'. Use correct verb forms and collocations.

× Yes, even I heard the resting music when I studied ions because I need some noisy situation for concentrate on something.

✓ Yes, I even listened to relaxing music when I studied because I need some noise to concentrate on something.

'Heard' is past but context implies habitual or past—'listened to' is more natural for intentionally playing music. 'Resting music' should be 'relaxing music'. 'Studied ions' appears to be a typo; remove 'ions'. 'Noisy situation' should be 'some noise' and 'for concentrate' must be 'to concentrate'. Ensure correct verb forms, word choice, and infinitive use.