Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, clear and relevant. Start with a concise topic sentence answering the question, then give 1–2 specific supporting details linked logically. Avoid unclear phrases like "hot music" and contradictions. Use linking words (for example, "however", "because").

예시: I like both sad and happy music, but I usually choose happy songs. For example, when I want to relax or feel motivated I play upbeat pop music, whereas I listen to sad ballads when I want to reflect or calm down.

제안: Answer directly and avoid asking the examiner questions. State your reaction and explain briefly with a specific reason and example. Use a linking word like "because" to connect your idea and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, happy music usually makes me feel more energetic because of its fast tempo and positive lyrics. For instance, when I listen to upbeat electronic tracks with headphones, I feel more confident and ready to exercise.

제안: Answer clearly about classes specifically. If you have formal lessons, say so; if not, explain how you learned. Give one specific detail about your experience with a linking phrase like "for example". Keep it concise and structured: topic sentence + supporting detail.

예시: I haven't taken many formal music classes, but I learned singing and guitar mostly by myself. For example, I practised electric guitar daily using online tutorials and joined a community choir to improve my vocal skills.

제안: Clarify the reason and fix unclear phrasing. Answer directly, then give a specific activity and reason using a linking word like "because" or "so". Avoid confusing or contradictory statements.

예시: Yes, I often listen to music while I take a shower because it helps me relax. For example, I usually play a calming playlist called "Crystal" which makes the shower feel like a short break from my day.