Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, correct grammar, and use linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (e.g., 'listen to sad songs', 'music is a way').

예시: I prefer different kinds of music depending on my mood. For example, when I'm happy I choose upbeat pop because it boosts my energy, while when I'm feeling down I listen to mellow acoustic songs to reflect my emotions.

제안: Answer directly, avoid contradictory statements (excited vs relaxed), and use correct verb forms. Give a brief reason and an example with a linking word such as 'because' or 'for example'.

예시: Yes, happy music usually makes me feel more excited because of its fast tempo and upbeat lyrics. For example, I often play energetic pop songs when I need a boost before exercising.

제안: Although a one-word answer is acceptable, expand slightly with a brief reason or related detail to show fluency. Use a topic sentence followed by a short supporting detail.

예시: No, I haven't taken formal music classes, but I learned to play some songs by watching online tutorials and practicing on my own.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar ('listen to music', 'sad music'), avoid filler words, and use linking words like 'for example' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, I often listen to music while doing household chores to make them more enjoyable. For example, I play upbeat songs when I'm cleaning to stay motivated, but I choose calmer tracks when I'm cooking and want to relax.

× If I am sad I might listen sad songs.

✓ If I am sad I might listen to sad songs.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before its object. Use 'listen to' when referring to hearing something intentionally. Suggestion: say 'listen to sad songs.'

× Which music is a way to express emotions.

✓ Music is a way to express emotions.

The original sentence begins with 'Which' incorrectly, creating a fragment. The correct statement is a simple declarative sentence. Suggestion: remove 'Which' to form 'Music is a way to express emotions.'

× Sometimes I listen sad songs but switch to happy songs.

✓ Sometimes I listen to sad songs but switch to happy songs.

As above, 'listen' needs the preposition 'to' before the object. Add 'to' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× Yes, happy music makes me feel more excited because it feel me relaxed.

✓ Yes, happy music makes me feel more excited because it makes me feel relaxed.

There are two errors: 'it feel me relaxed' is ungrammatical. The subject 'it' requires the verb 'makes' (third-person singular) and the correct structure is 'makes me feel relaxed.' Also maintain consistency: 'makes me feel more excited' and 'makes me feel relaxed.' Suggestion: use 'makes me feel relaxed.'

× When I'm happy I usually go for happy music.

✓ When I'm happy I usually go for happy music.

No grammatical change needed; sentence is correct. (Included to show it fits the allowed types - 'Verb + -ing form' checked but no change required.)

× This makes me so relaxed.

✓ This makes me feel so relaxed.

'Makes me so relaxed' is understandable but more natural to include 'feel' after 'makes me' when describing an emotional state. Suggestion: say 'makes me feel so relaxed.'

× I prefer to listen music while doing household chores.

✓ I prefer to listen to music while doing household chores.

'Listen' requires the preposition 'to' before its object. Add 'to' to form 'listen to music.'

× If I'm happy I usually go for happy music, but if I am sad then I prefer sad musics.

✓ If I'm happy I usually go for happy music, but if I am sad then I prefer sad music.

Two issues: 'musics' is incorrect because 'music' is an uncountable noun and should not take a plural form. Also 'prefer sad music' is parallel to 'prefer to listen to sad music.' Suggestion: use 'sad music.'

× Uh, while using household chores.

✓ Uh, while doing household chores.

'Using household chores' is incorrect; chores are activities you do, not tools you use. The correct verb is 'do' with 'household chores.' Suggestion: say 'while doing household chores.'