Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复表达并增加细节。可以直接用一般现在时说明偏好，提供原因并举例。比如先说明偏好，再具体说为什么使你放松或快乐。

예시: I prefer happy music because its upbeat rhythms and major keys lift my mood. For example, listening to pop or upbeat acoustic songs helps me unwind after work and keeps me motivated during chores.

제안: 回答要注意语法（主谓一致和连词使用），避免矛盾表述（“not only... but only”不正确）。使用连接词清楚表达两种效果，并给出具体情况或场景。

예시: Yes, happy music often makes me feel more energetic, and it can also calm me down after a stressful day. For instance, energetic songs pump me up at the gym, while gentle upbeat tracks help me relax in the evening.

제안: 回答要完整且自然，先直接回答，然后展开说明具体做法或资源。注意时态和介词（on the Internet）。可以说明你通过哪些途径自学并举例。

예시: No, I haven't taken formal lessons, but I learn from online resources. For example, I watch tutorial videos on YouTube and follow music teachers on Instagram to improve my singing and rhythm.

제안: 回答要结构清晰，使用合适的动词形式（listen to, work, learn）并用连接词分清不同场景。给出具体场景和音乐类型，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other activities. For example, I play relaxing instrumental music when studying or working, and I choose upbeat, energetic tracks when exercising to stay motivated.

× I preferred happy music because it made me feel relaxing and happy.

✓ I prefer happy music because it makes me feel relaxed and happy.

原句用過去式“preferred”和“made”不符合說話者常態偏好，應使用一般現在時表習慣或偏好。此外“relaxing”是動名詞/形容詞（令人放鬆的），但句中表感受應用過去分詞/形容詞“relaxed”（感到放鬆）。建議：表達習慣或常態用一般現在時，表達感受用“relaxed”。

× Sure, happy music make me feel not only more excited, but only make me feel relaxed after a long day.

✓ Sure, happy music makes me feel not only more excited, but also makes me feel relaxed after a long day.

主語“happy music”為第三人稱單數，動詞應加 -s（makes）。另外句中連詞使用錯誤，應為“not only... but also...”而不是“not only..., but only...”。兩個並列子句中的動詞需一致（makes ... makes）。建議：注意第三人稱單數動詞變化，並使用正確的連詞搭配。

× No, I haven't, but I listen. Some teachers will share their tips in the Internet.

✓ No, I haven't, but I listen. Some teachers share their tips on the Internet.

第一句可接受，但“will share”表示未來或意願，原意應表一般情況下教師會分享技巧，應用一般現在時“share”。此外介詞用法錯誤，“in the Internet”應為“on the Internet”。建議：表習慣或一般事實用一般現在時；固定搭配為“on the Internet”。

× Sure, I will listen to relaxing music and working or learning something and also I will learning cheerful or excited music in doing exercise.

✓ Sure, I will listen to relaxing music while working or learning something, and I will also listen to cheerful or upbeat music when exercising.

原句有多處問題：動詞搭配錯誤“listen to relaxing music and working”應為“listen... while working”（使用while引導同時發生的動作）。“I will learning”動詞形式錯誤，應為“I will learn”或更自然的“I will also listen”。“cheerful or excited music”用詞不自然，應改為“cheerful or upbeat music”。“in doing exercise”介詞用法不正確，改為“when exercising”。建議：同時發生的動作用while或when，未來式助動詞後接不定式（will + 動詞原形），選擇自然搭配詞彙。