Music— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you prefer sad or happy music?
수험생
I like to listen happy musics because happy music will give positive energy to my spirit while sad music to make a small set and will reset.
시험관
Does happy music make you feel more excited?
수험생
Yes, often. When I'm often I'm listening to happy music. It will make me excited and excited and it will make me more confident.
시험관
Have you taken any music classes?
수험생
No, not yet, because I'm not interested to a music class. I'm only interested to listen to musics and happy musics, uh, examples. Uh, I like, uh, the music which I can dance with it.
시험관
Do you listen to music while doing other things?
수험생
Yes, nothing when I'm doing exercise. Most of the time when I'm doing exercise I will do it with music because maybe sometime the happy music will boost my energy and I will have more energy to exercise.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you prefer sad or happy music?
점수: 55.0제안: Be concise and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Avoid pluralizing 'music' and unclear phrases like 'make a small set'.
예시: I prefer happy music because it gives me positive energy and lifts my mood. For example, upbeat pop songs help me feel motivated when I’m working or cleaning.
Does happy music make you feel more excited?
점수: 50.0제안: Give a direct answer, then explain briefly with clear linking words and varied vocabulary. Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing like 'excited and excited'.
예시: Yes, it often does. When I listen to upbeat songs, I feel more energetic and confident, which helps me concentrate better on tasks like studying or exercising.
Have you taken any music classes?
점수: 45.0제안: Answer directly, use correct prepositions and reduce fillers. Give one clear reason and a brief example. Replace 'not interested to' with 'not interested in' and avoid repeating 'music'.
예시: No, I haven’t taken any music classes because I’m not interested in formal lessons. I enjoy listening to danceable, upbeat tracks at home or parties instead.
Do you listen to music while doing other things?
점수: 60.0제안: Provide a clear topic sentence, then support with a specific reason and example. Remove contradictory phrases like 'Yes, nothing' and tighten wording.
예시: Yes, I often listen to music while exercising because upbeat songs boost my energy. For instance, I usually play a fast playlist during my morning runs to keep my pace up.
문법
× I like to listen happy musics because happy music will give positive energy to my spirit while sad music to make a small set and will reset.
✓ I like to listen to happy music because happy music gives positive energy to my spirit, while sad music makes me feel calm and helps me reset.
Errors: 'listen happy musics' — missing preposition 'to' after 'listen' and 'musics' is incorrect plural; 'music' is an uncountable noun. Verb forms and structure: 'will give' and 'will reset' are awkward for habitual statements; use simple present 'gives' and 'helps'. 'to make a small set' is unclear; context suggests 'makes me feel calm' or 'sets me back'; choose 'makes me feel calm and helps me reset'. Suggestion: Use 'listen to' with uncountable 'music', use simple present for general truths, and replace unclear phrases with precise verbs."},{
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